Date: 05/04/11 08:56 pm Title: Forgiveness
"I felt like a proud bitch after I told him that."
You have such a way with words. xD
Author's Response: why thank you ;D
Date: 05/04/11 07:49 am Title: Forgiveness
great story, update soon :D
Author's Response: i will as soon as i get the chance :)
Date: 02/24/11 02:28 am Title: Truth Be Told
That's a very ominous ending. Btw, for main pairings you have Tom/OFC and I assume it should be OMC? Thanks for the update!
Author's Response: It's not over yet ;)rnAnd thank you, I'll fix that.
Date: 02/22/11 09:42 pm Title: Truth Be Told
"After your dick has been in some other guy’s ass, I don’t want your dick anywhere else around me."
omg.
Author's Response: xD well, Tom knew that making love to Bill always makes Bill happy, so he offered it and yeah...
Date: 02/21/11 12:19 am Title: Secrets
Oh god. This is so good.
Author's Response: Thank you:3 that means a lot
Date: 02/20/11 03:38 am Title: Secrets
thanks for the update!
Date: 02/19/11 07:16 pm Title: Secrets
Update! For your first story it's really good! Keep it up!
Date: 02/19/11 04:21 pm Title: Worries
hmmm, I'm looking forward to seeing where this goes. =)
Date: 02/19/11 01:13 am Title: Worries
Oh, LAWD this is good! Already. In. Love. :)
Date: 02/18/11 08:56 pm Title: Worries
I see you've labeled your fic only has "Het" but then I see the Tom/Bill and Bill/Andreas pairings underneath. This would qualify your fic to be "Het" AND "Slash." I also see the "Incest" warning, assumingly for the Tom/Bill pairing you've labeled. You should know that the "Incest" warning is for incest that is NOT twincest.
Other than those irksome labeling errors, this looks to have quite the potential for an interesting fic. I definitely think you should keep it up.
Author's Response: I know, i've made a few mistakes on uploading my first fic. I'm not very fimiliar with uploading. But as the fic progresses, there is twincest. And i'll remove the incest warning.