Reviews For The Royal Harlot
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Reviewer: CarasGaladhon Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/07/11 06:58 pm Title: Tragic Events

I could never hate you

Reviewer: Callypyge Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/07/11 07:10 am Title: Tragic Events

omg
what's gonna happen after that
Bill was in love with Jared will he be able to forgive
Thanx for updating I was missing that story so much xx

Reviewer: bmccray Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/07/11 12:45 am Title: Tragic Events

This was intense! Poor babies! Please update soon!

Reviewer: BrokenSouls Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/23/11 04:49 am Title: We All Have Our Own Stronghold

ok uhm. New reader here (: I started reading this yesterday (while I should be studying. whatever). I honestly thought this wouldn't be worth reading when you started posting it (i have no idea why though) but yesterday i thought I'd give it a shot. I don't regret it. This is amazing. Although the kids being from different dads kind of confuses me/makes me mad. And this reminds me a bit of Alexander the Great. (probably your inspiration? since you posted pics of it :P) Anyway, I'm loving this. It's great, you write really well, no grammar mistakes (i hate them

Author's Response: thanks. i think that's what a lot of people think. they just pass over this because they don't think it's interesting but i actually am putting my thought into this than any other fic. i kind of get heart broken when i make a really emotional chapter and i get 0 reviews. rn*************************rnhaving two children(twins) is very rare but possible. you would have to be with both men in a close time period and two eggs could be fertilized. rn*************************rnLack of grammar mistake goes to my wonderful beta and yes Alexander was a thought along with other ones. thank you so much for reading and spread the word :)

Reviewer: ass_backwards Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 05/21/11 02:24 am Title: We All Have Our Own Stronghold

Jared needs to fall in a ditch and die.

Author's Response: aww he was nice in this one lol

Reviewer: selenalumina Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/20/11 07:04 pm Title: We All Have Our Own Stronghold

Wow

Reviewer: LillithValo Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/09/11 07:10 pm Title: I'm A Heart, Tom

oh god.. I would say miscarage, but... you could trick us.
I think Bill should just run away with Tom but the fact that he has a son from each man keeps him flopping.
I don't want Tom to ever leave Bill!!!
I think they should have a 3sum... a big drunk 3sum and Jared starts to like Tom too.
YES to a sequel!!!!! Please!!!???

Reviewer: selenalumina Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/08/11 09:05 pm Title: I'm A Heart, Tom

Bill! No! Don't be hurt! *Cries*

Reviewer: MemphisK Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/08/11 08:56 am Title: The Beginning

I like soo want a sequel. But till then, id like Tom to find someone and make Bill jealous. Jared should really dissapear somehow from the landscape because he seems to be somehow additional. Gods should convince Bill in a way or another that Jared is not good for him. Also, Id like to see Tom as a king, why not? ))

Reviewer: Motherluna Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/07/11 11:58 pm Title: I'm A Heart, Tom

I want Tom to find someone else that will teach bill not to be such a whore

Reviewer: ass_backwards Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 05/07/11 08:57 pm Title: I'm A Heart, Tom

Dude, that's not cool. Tom and bill need time alone.

Reviewer: Callypyge Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/07/11 08:30 pm Title: I'm A Heart, Tom

sequel would be cool
i love ur stories

Reviewer: bmccray Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/07/11 07:38 pm Title: I'm A Heart, Tom

Bills miscarrying because he's being punished by the gods. Tom should leave and find someone to make him happy. Bill being annoying because he he knows Jared is wrong for him, he knows the prophecy and what will happen if he stays with Jared but he clearly doesn't listen. I know know how Tom puts up with it cause it is heart breaking and sad. I dearly live this story but Bill is frustrating me to the max with this love triangle. Update soon and I hope Bill at least sees that Tom loves him.

Reviewer: kcrose Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/07/11 05:44 pm Title: I'm A Heart, Tom

I like the idea for a sequel.

Reviewer: selenalumina Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/05/11 11:04 am Title: Because We Love

Poor Bill

Reviewer: LillithValo Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/03/11 09:04 pm Title: Because We Love

I heard you only got one review so I had to rush over and give another. I hope ypu have gotten more. I love this story and really want you to finish it.

Author's Response:

thanksa bunch. i was really hoping for everyone to tell me how they felt and i was just like...wow. one review. idk i don't want to shelf this but it seems to be leaning towards that. i have like 3 other awesome ones that aren't finish that were getting alot of reviews.....gotta just keep myself motivated. thanks for the review :)

Reviewer: MissAnna Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/03/11 07:13 am Title: Because We Love

Such cute babies XD
I actually stopped breathing when Jared walked in on them lol I was like oh my gawd. But it turned out better than I hoped it would.
And how could Bill have the audacity to ask for Tom to be his concubine???!! I was so pissed at that. I loved Tom's reaction though :D I was like you tell him Tom!! lol.
I wonder how Jared would react when he finds out about the twins, since I think he took a liking to the one that isn't his >.>

Reviewer: shimmery Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/29/11 01:23 pm Title: The Everything Changed (Pt.3)

Before I wondered too, why is Bill swing back and forth between the 2 men? Now I get it a bit more.

Reviewer: peache4u Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/27/11 03:46 pm Title: The Everything Changed (Pt.3)

awww i hope bill really sets her free!!!!

Reviewer: selenalumina Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/27/11 12:31 pm Title: The Everything Changed (Pt.3)

*Squee!* I loved the new episode of Glee! And this new chapter was wonderful as well!

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