Date: 08/07/11 12:56 pm Title: Simple
I think a continuation of the kiss. I've been waiting so long for this fic that I actually squealed outloud when I saw you'd updated.
Author's Response: Thanks for your opinion! Awhh, thank you. :D
Date: 08/06/11 12:48 am Title: Helpless
Amazing job :D please update soon!
Author's Response: Thank you :D I will hopefully have the next chapter up soon. :)
Date: 08/02/11 09:47 pm Title: Helpless
I read lots of fics with Tom like a bastard, but this is the first that makes me shivers. And I love it ;)
Author's Response: Awhh, thank you! :D
Date: 07/23/11 03:23 am Title: Helpless
i really don't like where this is going, though i knew it was going here. but the story is so well written, i'm going to keep reading anyway and just feel sad for bill. thanks for the update! =)
Author's Response: Ahh, things were never going to end well for Bill. D: Awh thank you, I'm glad you're going to stick around! :D
Date: 07/17/11 11:30 pm Title: Prologue: Hell
I love it!!:D but plz update soon :(
Author's Response: Thank you! :) I will do my best :D
Date: 07/17/11 07:20 pm Title: Helpless
OMG! IT'S SPEEDING UP!!!! PLEASE HURRY AND UPDATE!!! I'VE BEEN WAITING FOR TOM TO DO SOMETHING!!!!!! AHHHH!!!
Author's Response: Someone's keen. xD I will update as soon as possible! :)
Date: 07/16/11 03:43 am Title: Helpless
here we go
Author's Response: Oh yes :D
Date: 07/16/11 12:06 am Title: Helpless
smothering your conscience in yoghurt? works for me) great story anyhow))
Author's Response: Yup, that was pretty much how it was. xD Thank you! :)
Date: 07/15/11 10:34 pm Title: Prologue: Hell
uh-oh. i foresee a lot of pain and suffering... yum) jesus. i need therapy like yesterday
Author's Response: Yeep, it's not going to be good. D: Awhh, sorry!
Date: 07/15/11 01:27 pm Title: Helpless
oh goodness. i was afraid of this happening. poor Bill. stupid Tom.
Author's Response: Poor Bill indeed. :( Thank you for your review. :)
Date: 07/15/11 03:42 am Title: Helpless
Great job!
Author's Response: Thank you! :D
Date: 07/15/11 01:28 am Title: Helpless
buen capi
Tom mostrò su verdadero rostro...
actualiza pronto :)
Author's Response: ¡Gracias! :D
Sí, lo hizo. :(
Voy a tratar de. :) (Lo siento por mi mal español)
Date: 07/15/11 01:10 am Title: Helpless
And so Tom's abuse of Bill begins...this is getting good...the chapter was short, but good.
Author's Response: And so it does. Awhh thank you, I'm glad you liked it. :)
Date: 07/15/11 12:10 am Title: Helpless
WHERE THE FUCK IS MY SMUT, WOMAN?? *pimp slap* I demand some good 'ole rape right now!!
I'd thought you'd never update I'm so happy! But girl you are a little tease. If you EVER and I mean ever need help writing/editing non-con scenes in this fic I'd be more than happy to help ;)
Author's Response: HOLD YOUR HORSES WOMAN, I'M GETTING TO IT! *pimp slap back*
It took so long! Sorry! D: Haha, I know, I know. ;) Ahhh I may have to take you up on that offer at some point. xD Thank you! :)
Date: 07/14/11 09:59 pm Title: Helpless
loved it! Woah Tom's forward..I cant help but HATE Tom here lol.
Author's Response: Thank you. :D He's definitely a love or hate character. :P
Date: 07/14/11 09:51 pm Title: Helpless
Wowww Ive been waiting for this for a long long while. And its really good though. Plz update soon. Im sure the next chap is gonna be HOTTTT
Author's Response: I know, it took so long to update - sorry! :( Thank you. :D Ahh there's going to be some severe emotional issues going on! xD
Date: 07/14/11 09:26 pm Title: Helpless
love your stories so much!!!
Author's Response: Thank you! :D
Date: 07/14/11 08:58 pm Title: Helpless
¡Finalmente! Ya la estabas haciendo mucha de emoción hahahahaha
read you soon girl! :D love
Author's Response: ¡gracias! :D
Date: 07/14/11 06:03 pm Title: Helpless
Poor Bill ;_; Indeed, that was hard to read as well. *pets you* But the story is great. It really invokes emotion in the reader.
Author's Response: If it was hard to read it meant I did something right. :D Awhh thank you, that means a lot. :)
Date: 07/14/11 04:35 pm Title: Helpless
Oh, Bill *desperately wants to cuddle him* Damn it Tom *really wants to smack him but is too scared to* You, Tom, need to slow down a bit. I get what you're doing, but you don't want to scare him away too quickly now do you???
Now, it was kind of short. But I totally understand the hardship of writing non-con. Especially the first time. It does get easier. This was a great chapter. Just make sure you don't make Tom do too much to Bill too fast.
This was a great chapter. I'm excited to see more soon. Keep up the amazingly fantastical work!
Author's Response: I really want to cuddle Bill too, so you're not alone. :) Ahh I wouldn't smack Tom...he's super scary! xD Don't worry about Tom, I don't think Bill's going to be going anywhere any time soon.
I hope it will get easier - I'm pretty sure it will. Thank you, I'm glad you liked it. Well, if I'm honest, if people weren't desperate (see what I did there xD) for Tom to make a move, I may have left it another chapter or two. I didn't want people to get bored though. He won't be doing too much too fast though. :)
Awhh thank you, that means a lot. :D