Date: 08/08/11 03:47 pm Title: Prologue: Hell
Love it! I vote 1. A continuation of the kiss :D
Author's Response: Thank you! :D
Date: 08/08/11 12:15 pm Title: Simple
this is like slow, painful torture. but i can't stop reading it!!!
and i would like to see:
1)continuation of the kiss
3)both of them seeing Bill on the news
5) the teacher that saw Bill leave talking to the reporter. that would be good.
thanks for the update!!!
Author's Response: That's the effect I was going for. :D
Thank you for your opinion! :)
Date: 08/08/11 10:57 am Title: Simple
Great story. Really getting into it. Can't wait for an update.
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you're enjoying it. :)
Date: 08/08/11 09:36 am Title: Simple
Continuation of the kiss, then both of them seeing Bill on the news. :)) Ooh. Bill's falling into a deep pit here.
Author's Response: Thanks for your opinion. :) Ooh, he really is, bless him. xD
Date: 08/08/11 05:38 am Title: Simple
2, 3, 3 (? hahah) tihihi!
And, as number 5(/6), some heavy drama! :D
Author's Response: Evidently I can't count. xD Thanks for your opinion though! :)
Date: 08/08/11 12:35 am Title: Simple
Ok, so I think I would like both Tom and Bill to see Bill on the news as a missing peron, but not together. I think it would be neat of Tom saw it on one of the TVs at the bar, while Bill's dad is there too, or arrives shortly after the news bit is on. *nods* Yup. I tthink that would be pretty spiftacular.
The mind games. They are just never ending in this fic. I love it. Bill is just so sweet and innocent, and untrusting of his own instincts its sad. And Tom is so evil and conniving, gaaahhh is not even funny. You are just really good at this dark fic stuff.
I really liked the whole bit justifying laying his head on Tom's chest thing. It was beautiful.
Keep up the wonderful work! I am really looking ofrward to seeing what you end up puttig in the next chapter.
Author's Response: Oohh that does sound pretty spiftacular! Good plan, batman. :D
They are never ending. Thank you. :) N'awwh, that means a lot.
Bill's just so confused, bless him. :3 Thank you very much, I hope the next chapter doesn't disappoint! xD
Date: 08/07/11 11:39 pm Title: Simple
an amazing and questionable chapter, as usual!
Author's Response: Thank you! :D
Date: 08/07/11 10:22 pm Title: Simple
I want to see 1) y 3)
me encanta este fic actualiza pronto please :D
Author's Response: ĄGracias! Voy a hacerlo lo mejor posible! :)
Date: 08/07/11 09:23 pm Title: Simple
I'd love to see more of that kiss(hehe). Also, i can't help but think about how interesting it would be to see Bill's dad run into Tom at the pub and there can be some type of confrontation between them. I say that because Tom seems to love power and he seems so sure of himself. Plus who doesnt want an angry sexy Tom. Maybe its too soon for Bill on the news just yet? But like you say, his absence cant go on forever. Whatever your choice, i'm totally interested in this fic :)
Author's Response: Thanks for your opinion. Tom's definitely sure of himself. He couldn't be more sure of himself if he tried! xD Everyone wants an angry sexy Tom! :D Thank you, I'm glad you like it. :)
Date: 08/07/11 07:59 pm Title: Simple
I want to see a continuation of the kiss and maybe, just maybe, something more. I don't really have any kind of "atractive" thoughts about Bill's dad and missing people... Thanks for your ideea to ask us, go on with your way of writing. Indeed you are a very good writer:D
Author's Response: Thanks for your opinion. Awhh, thank you, that means a lot. :D
Date: 08/07/11 07:34 pm Title: Simple
i think itīs too soon to notice that Billīs missing, after all his dad doesnīt give a fuck about him... mmm i say that it should be the continuation of the kiss and in one more.. Tom sees Bill on the news and he decides to lock him up (is that correct? my english is kinda bad lately) and having his way
thatīs what i think hahaha :D
Author's Response: Thank you for your opinion and yeah, lock him up is correct. I will see what I can do. :)
Date: 08/07/11 06:47 pm Title: Simple
I vote 1 and 3
Author's Response: Thank you. :)
Date: 08/07/11 05:39 pm Title: Prologue: Hell
3) Both of them seeing Bill on the news
I love this story!! And I love this Tom xD
Author's Response: Awhh thank you so much. :D
Date: 08/07/11 04:46 pm Title: Prologue: Hell
I vote 1) !
Author's Response: Thank you. :)
Date: 08/07/11 03:08 pm Title: Simple
2 and four. my goodness, this story is quite amazing :DDDDDDD
Author's Response: Thanks and awwhh thank you so much! :D
Date: 08/07/11 01:34 pm Title: Simple
3) Both of them seeing Bill on the news.
Great chapter :D
Author's Response: Thanks for your opinion. I'm glad you liked it. :D
Date: 08/07/11 01:17 pm Title: Simple
It was amazing!! I would go with #1 lol
Author's Response: Thank you! :D
Date: 08/07/11 01:14 pm Title: Simple
As much as Tom's inner-workings are fascinating (and disturbing), I really like how you portray Bill and what he is thinking and feeling. It's very realistic for young people who are being taken advantage of to feel this duel sense of "they really care for me, so it's okay" and "they're so much older than me, this just isn't right". This whole thing is so realistic it makes everything that much intriguing.
And I would love to have a continuation of the kiss *winks* as well as Tom seeing Bill on the news :)
Author's Response: Awhh thank you! :D I think it's really important that I portray what both of them are thinking, because in my eyes one won't work without the other.
Ooh, thanks for your opinion. :)
Date: 08/07/11 01:12 pm Title: Simple
Hmm...*Thinks* Geez, those are good choices! But...grr....I'm gonna have to go with...4 and 2...yea those two...can't wait to read more!
Author's Response: Thanks for your opinion. :) I'll try and update as soon as possible! :D
Date: 08/07/11 01:02 pm Title: Simple
a continuation of the kiss clubbed with Bills' dad seeing Tom sounds good lol. and OMG Tom ugh i hate him here lol
Author's Response: Noted. :) Haha, well he's definitely a love/hate character! xD