Date: 10/21/11 02:19 pm Title: The Right Choice
PLEASE OH PLEASE OH PLEASE CONTINUE THE STORYYYYYYYYYYYYY
Author's Response: I will soon! I've been suffering from writer's block, but I'm trying to get out of it! Honest! :D
Date: 10/16/11 10:12 am Title: The Right Choice
Please update again soon xD
This is a REALLY amazing story!
Author's Response: I'm trying my best...I've had -massive- writers block for ages now. I think I'm getting over it though... *fingers crossed*
Thank you, I'm so glad you like it! :D
Date: 09/18/11 10:29 pm Title: The Right Choice
Seriously, Tom is the scariest person I've ever read of - and yes, that includes Voldemort.
He's so intelligent. He knows what to say and when to say it and he also knows to wait.
Poor Billy.
Update soon. This story really has me.
Author's Response: Oh woah, scarier than Voldemort?! I am -beyond- flattered! :D
I know, he's so manipulative that it kind of scares me that he's in my head... :P
Thank you, I'll hopefully update soon!
Date: 09/14/11 10:08 pm Title: The Right Choice
Is it possible to love and hate this story at the same time? I guess I loved the story but I don't like what is happening to Bill. Keep up the great work though.
Author's Response: I think it's definitely possible to love and hate this story - I do! xD Thank you! :D
Date: 08/26/11 06:14 pm Title: The Right Choice
i think the mom should find out or the teacher should see tom. this story is so great!!!!
Author's Response: Bill's mum? Because that's not a bad idea! :) I don't think we've seen the last of the teacher, although you must remember that Bill was actually in school the day after he went off with Tom. Thank you very much for your review! :3
Date: 08/24/11 04:44 pm Title: The Right Choice
This is really interesting, I can't seem to stop reading O.O
I can't wait for your next update^^
Author's Response: Awhh thank you, that means a lot. :3
Date: 08/24/11 01:38 pm Title: The Right Choice
Eepies! I'm scared for Bill :'(
Author's Response: Ahh, you should be. :(
Date: 08/24/11 12:53 pm Title: The Right Choice
*heart breaks* I just....really hope that Tom eventually loves Bill, as much as he is capable to love. Can't wait to see more! I really don't have any ideas. I'm decent at running with it when someone gives me a start, but crap at coming up with an idea all my own.
Author's Response: I don't think that Tom IS capable to love. :( He's quite literally heartless. Awh, don't worry - as the author, thinking of ideas really is my responsibility. xD Thank you for your review. I'm glad you're enjoying it so far. :3
Date: 08/24/11 12:38 pm Title: The Right Choice
Poor Bill is so trapped. I can see Tom using the fact that he stopped when Bill said no as a leverage point, too. After all, he'll stop if Bill REALLY wants him to. He'll understand, of course he'll understand, and then the guilt has Bill bending over backwards (or indeed forwards) to please him. You're writing this so well, Tom's thought processes throughout are just perfect.
Author's Response: Ahhh you know Tom too well. That's pretty much exactly what will happen, but sshh, don't tell anyone else. xD Thank you, I'm glad you like it. :3
Date: 08/24/11 07:02 am Title: The Right Choice
I had to say I love seeing Bill helpfuless with unshed tears (
Author's Response: N'awwh, I'm glad you liked it. :)
Date: 08/24/11 06:16 am Title: The Right Choice
First off i hope my entire review shows -.-
Oh my god, atm I feel this sort of love hate thing for Tom, and it used to be pure hatred but somewhere along the line i've started loving his twisted mind you know what I mean? His character is so well thought out in this, I adore how he plans every move even if its for something merely insignificant as sleeping with Bill, he plans it and he goes through with his steps, which is what the story's about so far and it just amazes me. LOl loved the chapter!!
Author's Response: I think it all showed. :(
Ahhhh, I'm glad that Tom has started to grow on you a little bit. It's nice to know that you think his character is well thought out - I always worry that he's too scheming. xD Thank you, I'm really glad you liked this chapter! :D
Date: 08/23/11 09:44 pm Title: The Right Choice
This story is just grand :}
Author's Response: Thank you! :)
Date: 08/23/11 08:53 pm Title: The Right Choice
Oooooh! And so the plot thickens! LOVE IT!! I was actually thinking of this story last night XD Can't wait to read more.
Author's Response: It certainly does. xD Haha, it's fate! ^.^ Thank you for your review. I'm glad you liked it. :3
Date: 08/23/11 07:22 pm Title: The Right Choice
pero la profesora ha visto a Tom una vez antes si no me equivoco asi q puede dar pistas :D
actualiza pronto el prox. capi please!! :D
Author's Response: Que ella podrķa hacer! :D rnrnVoy a hacer. :3 Gracias por revisar. :D
Date: 08/23/11 07:05 pm Title: Prologue: Hell
I love, I love, I love, I really love this Tom!!!!!!!!!!! xD Maybe 'cause I've always loved the bad ones haha. BTW, he is perfect, I like the way he thinks and plays with Bill's innocent poor mind xD I hope he'll get what he want from Bill xD You write really good :-)
Author's Response: I'm rather fond of him too, even though he's just so evil! ^.^ He'll definitely get what he wants - he's not one to give up. Awhh, thank you, that means a lot. :)
Date: 08/23/11 05:10 pm Title: The Right Choice
oh gog, Bill!!! poor guy is so alone he's willing to stay with Tom, even though he wants to have sex with him.
Author's Response: I know! :( I feel so sorry for him. Thank you for your review! :)
Date: 08/14/11 04:46 pm Title: Simple
Any of the above would be good. I'm not picky.
Seiously, I don't see tom being too evil so far, beside that bill is underage here.
Author's Response: Awesome. :3
Ah the thing with Tom is it's the things which aren't said which are the worst. Plus, he hasn't quite hit his stride yet. xD
Date: 08/09/11 03:10 pm Title: Simple
Lol, damn, so many choices.
I think the general consensus is option 1, and I personally would want something happening with the news, though I'm not picky as to who sees it. Hmm.. although now that I think of it, both of them seeing the news could potentially cause some drama XD
Author's Response: Hahah, I know. :P
Yep, option 1 is definitely most popular, although seeing Bill on the news is close behind. Thank you for your opinions. I will see what I can do. :)
Date: 08/09/11 08:50 am Title: Simple
I would like to see: 1) A continuation of the kiss and 3) Both of them seeing Bill on the news
:D
Author's Response: Thank you! :D
Date: 08/09/11 07:24 am Title: Simple
Uhhhh I say numbers 1, 3 and 4!
1 because uh duh, kissing!
3 because I wanna see what Tom's evil little minds gonna come up with!
And 4 because I'd imangine a man who beats up a small boy like Bill isn't gonna take what Tom did to him too kindly, you know? The ego-ness of drunks. I should know, one helped give birth to me.
Anyways, I love the way the story's going! It's my favorite! Please, hurrys!!!!
Author's Response: Thank you for your opinions. Oh Bill's dad definitely won't take it too kindly. Awhh, I'm sorry to hear about that.
Woah, thank you! That means a lot! :D