Date: 02/21/11 03:23 pm Title: Losing Count
No, actually I wasn't expecting that. But thats cool. I love having the unexpected thrown at me in fic, as long as it isn't MCD, that I need to know is coming.
Yea, Bill is just making mistakes left and right here isn't he? I like to think when I was ffteen if somthing like that were to happen, if I were dumb enough to get in th car in the first place, I would've at least been smart enough to give them a false address a street or 2 away, and say I had to go in the back door cuz I didn't have a key for the front.
But, well, he is a sad lonely, desperate teenager, so I can forgve him and feel b ad for him.
Tom, on the other hand, well I am interested in why he is the way he is appearing to be. I am really enjoying this fic so far. I can't wait to see what happens next!!
Author's Response: I didn't think you would be. Don't worry, there won't be MCD in this. :)
I know, bless him. I can't imagine being stupid enough to get in a strangers car. Then again, I've never been in Bill's situation, thankfully. But he is very lonely and desperate. :(
Ah, Tom is an interesting one to write. I'm glad that you like it and thank you very much for your review. :D
Date: 02/21/11 03:01 pm Title: Losing Count
Love it, can't wait for more!
:)
Author's Response: Thank you! :)
Date: 02/21/11 02:28 pm Title: Losing Count
I am trying to figure out what Tom is going to do, omg, I got to read more! Great chapter!
Author's Response: Ahh, good luck! :P Thank you! :D
Date: 02/21/11 02:07 pm Title: Losing Count
ohhmeingott,i wonder what tom is going to do! lol i cant wait for the next chapter (: i like it so far
Author's Response: You'll just have to wait and see :D thank you for your review! :)
Date: 02/21/11 01:54 pm Title: Losing Count
o: I wasent expecting that. >.> Tom is...Tom is.. i dont know how to explain it. Hes going to try to seduce Bill. *-*
Author's Response: He just might xD Thank you for your review :)
Date: 02/21/11 01:26 pm Title: Losing Count
Hehe, no, I wasn't expecting that
Author's Response: I didn't think you would be ;) Thank you for your review :D
Date: 02/19/11 11:17 am Title: Prologue: Hell
I'm not sure if I like how this is heading to, but I'm 'deperate' to find out.
Just don't hurt billy too bad.
Author's Response: Haha, I like what you did there. :) Don't worry...he's not going to die or anything. Thank you for your review :)
Date: 02/15/11 03:25 pm Title: Mistake #1
oh god.. More soon please!!! :OO
Author's Response: Awh thank you! There will be more as soon as :D
Date: 02/15/11 10:18 am Title: Mistake #1
oh, Bill *sighs sadly* what have you gotten yourself into? You poor poor child.
What a warm and fluffy little thing for valentine's day...not. But it was amazingly awesome again. So great anyway! Our first glimpse of what I assume to be Tom...unless its someone else who is going to sell Bill or something, but I don't think so.
I am really looking forward to the next update. Keep up the great work
Author's Response: I know, poor boy. :(
Haha, I know. :D Thank you, and yes, that is Tom. I'm glad that you liked it and thank you for your review. :)
Date: 02/15/11 09:02 am Title: Mistake #1
I think I know what's going to happen ;)can't wait to read the next chapter!
Author's Response: Oohh, I bet you don't ;) I'm the master of surprises! Haha, okay I'm not, but still...I don't think it will be what you're expecting. :D Thank you for your review :))
Date: 02/15/11 08:38 am Title: Mistake #1
oh jezz billa
Author's Response: I know :( Thank you for your review :)
Date: 02/15/11 07:56 am Title: Mistake #1
I love fluffy Valentine's FICA, but I prefer this! ;D
Once again, great job with the mood and atmosphere. It was really easy to imagine what Bill was feeling and the type of environment he's in. Plus your Tom character seems so mysterious and cunning (and slightly creepy). Lovely update!
Author's Response: Ah good! :D Me and writing fluff don't really go.. ^.^
Thank you; I'm glad that you could easily imagine what Bill was feeling - that was definitely what I was going for. And as for Tom? Oh, well he's only going to get a whole lot creepier! xD Thank you for your review. :)
Date: 02/15/11 07:27 am Title: Mistake #1
Wow, wow, wow, wow, amazing chapter!
Author's Response: Awh, thank you! :)
Date: 02/15/11 04:49 am Title: Mistake #1
wow this is cooool :D I can't wait to read more
Author's Response: Thank you! :D
Date: 02/15/11 04:07 am Title: Mistake #1
Excellent :) I'm shamed to say that I get a sick satisfaction out of tortured!Bill fics.. but, uh... yeah :)
Author's Response: Thank you. :) You're not the only one...there's something so sickeningly lovely about tortued!Bill stories. :P Thank you for your review!
Date: 02/14/11 03:27 pm Title: Prologue: Hell
I like it....its good.
Author's Response: Thank you :)
Date: 02/14/11 09:25 am Title: Prologue: Hell
good intro. can't wait to see where this goes.
Author's Response: Thank you :)
Date: 02/14/11 01:38 am Title: Prologue: Hell
ooooh this does seem dark and depressing *is excited* I can't wait to see more! This was written really well. I love how you repeated the first line at the end. Very ominous. Keep up the great work!
Author's Response: Awh, thank you, I'm glad that you like it! :) I'll have the next chapter up as soon as possible. :)
Date: 02/13/11 08:18 pm Title: Prologue: Hell
I like it so far. : )
Author's Response: Thank you :)
Date: 02/13/11 08:09 pm Title: Prologue: Hell
I'm trembling in anticipation of the next chapter. *-* This was a good prologue, it grabbed my attention in the very beginning. :) It seems different from other stories on this site. You're very good about how detailed everything is & you don't really repeat any words constantly. Good job. :D I can't wait for the next chapter, I'm excited!
Author's Response: Awhh, thank you for such a lovely review! :)) I'll have the next chapter up as soon as possible :)