Date: 03/06/11 06:50 am Title: Prologue: Hell
I usually don't like oocs or alternative universes, but your fic caught me, I love the situation and the way Tom and Bill are portrayed. I can't wait to read more!!
Author's Response: Awh thank you, I'm glad that you liked it! :)
Date: 03/06/11 01:58 am Title: Patience
*hums* yum Filler. I love fillers where we get some insight. I did enjoy it. It was nice to see a bit into Tom's head, and what Bill's home life is like.
oh and you are very welcome for reviews. I love leaving reviews. Keep up the wonderul work. I look forward to seeing what comes next!
Author's Response: Thank you, I'm very glad that you liked it. I thought it was best to have at least a little insight into Tom's head considering he's so creepy.
Well, like any author I love getting reviews - at least then I know if I'm doing a good job or not. Thanks again. :)
Date: 03/05/11 05:23 pm Title: Patience
oh, poor Bill... But then again, go Tom! I'm still rooting for that creepy kidnapper :D
I'm hoping that Tom will fall hard for Bill because yeah, he really is too cute for his own good! I might kidnap him too if I were Tom.
Really looking forward to the next chapter :)
Author's Response: Haha, I love the mixed response I'm getting to Tom - some people love him and others can't stand him. :D At the moment I'm definitely rooting for Tom too :) I'd definitely kidnap Bill; he's so adorable. Thank you for your review and I'm glad you're looking forward to the next chapter - it will be up as soon as possible!
Date: 03/05/11 04:14 pm Title: Patience
hmmm, very interesting beginning. i imagine things are going to get worse for Bill before they gt better. my only hope is that eventually Tom will find himself actually caring, whether he means to or not. keep up the good work!
Author's Response: Thank you, I'm glad that you found it interesting. :) Hmm, you'll have to wait and see. Thanks for your review. :D
Date: 03/05/11 03:17 pm Title: Patience
“Did they give you the jumper?” What's a jumper? =
Also, oh geez, the tension is ridiculous XD
Author's Response: Oh sorry, it's another word for a hoodie. :)
I know! It's killing me! :D Thank you for your review :)
Date: 03/05/11 02:40 pm Title: Prologue: Hell
oh nooo an evil tom...
i like tom and i dont want him to be mean :(. Still keep tracking :) too curious now.
Author's Response: Oh I'm sorry, but he's only going to get a whole lot meaner. :/ Thank you for your review! :)
Date: 03/05/11 11:36 am Title: Patience
Something tells me Tom is gonna kidnap Bill in the very near future.
Author's Response: Maybeeee ;) you'll have to wait and see. Thank you for your review!
Date: 03/05/11 10:39 am Title: Patience
Oh, exciting!
Author's Response: Thank you! :D
Date: 03/05/11 09:51 am Title: Patience
Yep, Tom is really creepy. I find I sympathize a lot with Bill, but find Tom a lot more interesting and complex a character. This story, and the vagueness surrounding what Tom wants, has really gotten a hold of me!
Author's Response: He is super creepy, isn't he?! :D I find Tom a lot more interesting to write, but I feel so sorry for Bill too - how could I not? Thank you for your review! :)
Date: 02/25/11 06:44 pm Title: Losing Count
I don't know what Tom will do but I'm already hating him.
New reader! Hope you update soon ;)
Author's Response: Oh, hello new reader! :) -waves-
Haha, there's definitely a mixed response to Tom. I think he's like marmite - you either love him or you hate him! ;) I shall be updating soon and thank you for your review :)
Date: 02/23/11 02:34 pm Title: Losing Count
This is so awesome Bitte Bitte Please write more
Author's Response: Don't worry, there will be more soon :) thanks for your review!
Date: 02/22/11 04:31 pm Title: Prologue: Hell
ooh what is going to happen?!? what is evil tom planning to do to poor bill??!
I put this on my tracked list so i hope you update soon :) :)
Author's Response: You'll have to wait and see ;) Awh, thank you! :D
Date: 02/22/11 07:28 am Title: Losing Count
But why? What does Tom want from this poor boy? I have a feeling Tom's going to trick tom to leave with him willingly and enslave him.
Author's Response: Mmm, you'll just have to wait and see ;) thank you for your review! :D
Date: 02/22/11 03:56 am Title: Losing Count
I like it, you have a really interesting thing going on in here!
Does it make me weird if I'm rooting for Tom :D I feel sorry for Bill but in a twisted way I'm really waiting for Tom to make this plan of his happen!
Keep it going :)
Author's Response: Thank you :D
Not at all! I love Tom in this; he's super fun to write. :D
I'm glad that you like it so far :)
Date: 02/22/11 01:11 am Title: Losing Count
No no I wasn't expecting that...BUT I have a feeling Tom may kidnap Bill or lure him away from home...now I'm curious.
Author's Response: Maybe ;) Thanks for your review
Date: 02/21/11 11:39 pm Title: Losing Count
ja, I'm kind of confused now, what's Tom gonna do then? Oh, can't wait to know!
Author's Response: Ooh, you'll just have to wait and see ;) thanks for your review!
Date: 02/21/11 10:47 pm Title: Losing Count
So...Tom's going to kidnap Bill now and rape him....sweet
Author's Response: Shouldn't jump to conclusions ;) But yeah...something like that. :') Thanks for your review.
Date: 02/21/11 07:50 pm Title: Losing Count
..tom what do u have up ur sleve u creeper?
Author's Response: Haha, he is such a creeper :D Thank you for your review :)
Date: 02/21/11 07:14 pm Title: Losing Count
Tom is such an intriguing character. He knows what's right and wrong, but he just can't be bothered with it. Such a sociopath!
And poor, Bill. I really feel for his character and I just get urges to cuddle him ;__;
Author's Response: "He knows what's right and wrong, but he just can't be bothered with it." That is the perfect way to describe him! :D He is indeed very much a sociopath.
I get urges to shake Bill and force him to see sense, but that wouldn't make for an interesting story now, would it? ;) Thank you very much for your review! :D
Date: 02/21/11 04:45 pm Title: Losing Count
Oh my gosh I'm all excited for the next chapter now! :D
2 mistakes already D: poor Bill doesn't know a thing...
I love this!
Author's Response: Awhh thank you :D I know, he's so naive :(