Date: 02/14/12 03:52 pm Title: Proving A Point
Yaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaay!!!!!!! I'm so happy you updated this xD
Good good good, gooooooooooooooood update! I thoroughly enjoyed this.
I noticed a few spelling mistakes and grammatical errors, but nothing too serious. I don't remember where, but at one point you repeated a phrase twice, nothing that can't be easily fixed. And you spelled ton wrong. Its not spelled tonne. But again, easily fixed ^.^
I loved reading this and I already cannot wait for your next update.
AWESOME! C:
Date: 02/14/12 07:33 am Title: Proving A Point
I'm glad to see this back.
Date: 02/14/12 04:37 am Title: Proving A Point
a-m-a-z-i-n-g ! can't wsit for more (:
Date: 02/14/12 03:31 am Title: Proving A Point
Glad to see you finally updated--thanks! as for what do i want to see? I want to see unrealistic things that you are not going to write: someone swooping in and saving Bill or Tom falling in love with him and they live happily ever after together. I look forward to seeing what you come up with.
Date: 02/14/12 03:20 am Title: Proving A Point
Oh god! Tom is so mean!!!
Author's Response: He really is! D:
Date: 02/14/12 01:40 am Title: Proving A Point
Ah, I was wondering if this had been abandoned. Glad to see it hasn't. I wonder how Tom's going to deal with all of this, and what Bill's really thinking.
Author's Response: I could never abandon it...I just needed to kick my butt in gear. :D
Date: 02/14/12 12:48 am Title: Proving A Point
great update i think its time
Author's Response: Thank you :)
Date: 02/13/12 10:42 pm Title: Proving A Point
Oh I'm so glad you're back! :D I'm up for obviously more heated Bill/Tom action of course! Much love for the storyxx
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm really glad you like it. :D
Date: 02/13/12 10:41 pm Title: Proving A Point
Yay!! *skips around and sings* you updated. You updated ladidadideedidoo
Holy bejeezus, it has been forever hasn't it? Well. I'm glad you're back! Wonderful work on this chapter! Almost worth the six month wait.
You make me feel so bad for naive, affection starved Bill. I wanna go in smack him and drag him out of there! Save him? Bitte?...but that won't make much of a story will it?
Seeing as you brought him up...I think it'd be pretty awesome to see Georg...and maybe some Tom blowing up at Bill for realz.
Keep up the good work! Can't wait to see more!
Author's Response: *skips around with you* I did! :D
I know, I know, I'm so sorry! I'm glad you liked it though!
If I thought saving him would make a good read, I totally would. The problem is, it's only now that Bill has even the slightest desire to be saved.
Actually, I was considering bring Georg into it, so we'll just have to see.
Thanks again! :D
Date: 02/13/12 08:22 pm Title: Proving A Point
Still reading. Still interested in exactly what Tom is up to.
Author's Response: I won't keep y'all waiting for much longer, I promise!
Date: 02/13/12 06:20 pm Title: Proving A Point
Hello!! Yeah long wait but i liked so much this cap and this story in general that i couldn't forget it.... :) so now tom is showing himself, poor bill from bad dad to degenerado guy haha .... Keep posting and do it very soon please.... XD
Author's Response: Hey there! Awhh thank you! I know, poor Bill..he has such bad luck! xD
Date: 02/13/12 05:32 pm Title: Proving A Point
I hadn't forgotten about this story. I was thinking about it a few weeks and was wondering when you were gonna update it. Really good chapter, and can't blame Bill for panicking a little.
Author's Response: Sorry it took so long to update! Thank you, I'm glad you liked it!
Date: 02/13/12 03:35 pm Title: Proving A Point
I'm really happy you updated. That was a close shave for Tom, and he's starting to show his true colours a little now with getting so angry with Bill. Looking forward to another chapter soon.
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm really glad you liked it. :D
Date: 02/13/12 03:09 pm Title: Proving A Point
wowowowowow update! what a pleasant surprise!
Author's Response: Awwhh, thank you! :D
Date: 02/13/12 02:04 pm Title: Proving A Point
Woot! I'm still here! I still have this tracked :D
Yay! Thank you for the update.
Author's Response: Thank you! :D
Date: 02/13/12 01:56 pm Title: Proving A Point
I seen this story in the new stories list & yelled 'Yeeeaaaahhh buddy!' out of pure excitement. This story is easily one of my favorites. I'm so glad you updated. This chapter was amazing, Bill is too naive to realize how Tom actually is. Gah. I love it.
Author's Response: Awwhh! Thank you! :DD I'm glad that you liked it :3
Date: 02/13/12 01:51 pm Title: Proving A Point
Wow, I just saw this story right now and read it all, It's absloutly amazing, poor naive Bill.... ahahah In the next chapter it would be cool if like... Tom got reall angry at Bill for some reason and hit him.. that would cause problems between them, anyway Thanks :)
Author's Response: Awhh, thank you! I'm glad that you like it! :3 I was thinking something along those lines. You know what they say about great minds thinking alike? :) Thanks for your review!
Date: 02/13/12 01:00 pm Title: Proving A Point
Updaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaate!!!!!!!!!!!!!
You are NOT a horrible person. Every writer has ups and downs, a life to live (you know:-), priorities to stick to. Great to see you here again, though.
Lovely, simply lovely:-)))))
Author's Response: Thank you so much for understanding. :3 I'm glad you liked it! :D
Date: 02/13/12 12:05 pm Title: Proving A Point
I almost removed this from my tracking list yesterday, but decided against it in a vain hope it might update again XD
I just love this story too much to let it go that easily. ^_^
Author's Response: Awhh, thank you for sticking with me! :D
Date: 10/26/11 10:53 am Title: The Right Choice
very good story and you write very well, good flow, super plot. Please please continue
Author's Response: Thank you so much! :D I will hopefully have a new chapter soon!