Date: 04/15/11 09:10 pm Title: Losing Count
i keep waiting for tom to swoop in and kidnap him...... should i be worried??????? *continues reading*
Author's Response: Maybe a little ;) thanks for your review!
Date: 04/15/11 07:45 pm Title: The Other Home
And he is fucked lol poor Bill thanks for the update hun = ]
Author's Response: He is indeed. :) Thank you, it was my pleasure! :D
Date: 04/15/11 07:39 pm Title: The Other Home
I must say, there were some very funny dialogue in this chapter! My favorite was Tom's response to the girlfriend question...so hilarious!
And I must say, I'm kinda worried about the teacher talking to Bill's father...so drying tells me that won't go well.
Author's Response: Haha, thank you! I don't know why I even decided to put that in...I could just imagine Bill asking about Tom's not-quite-real girlfriend. ;)
Oh and you should be worried! That's all I will say :D Thank you for your review :)
Date: 04/15/11 05:44 pm Title: The Other Home
ionly thing i can say is i cant wait for26th may! XD i guess now u know what i mean then :P Im following this and roommate so i cant wait! and this one major cliffhanger o: your making me more curious by every chapyer
Author's Response: Ahh me neither, I just want the exams to be over! Oh woah, well thank you for following two of my stories - that makes me feel very loved! :D I'm glad that I'm making you curious, that's definitely what I'm aiming for. Thanks for your review :))
Date: 04/15/11 05:10 pm Title: The Other Home
Nice work!
Author's Response: Thank you! :)
Date: 03/24/11 07:34 pm Title: A Text
Hey congrats on the prize, sounds great!
First of all, great chapter again! Loving your creepy Tom more and more :)
And my theory is that the teacher will probably contact Bill's dad, who of course gets mad like hell and Bill turns to Tom again, well I'm hoping he will anyway :D I want Tom's plan to succeed so bad that it's not eaven healthy anymore :D
Author's Response: Thank you! :D
And thank you again! Ah, I love creepy Tom too xD
You got it in one! Well done :D I think there's just you and one other person who've gotten the whole plan. Actually, thinking about it, it might just be you! It's great that you want him to succeed - it means I'm doing my job right. ;) Thanks for the review :D
Date: 03/24/11 07:29 pm Title: A Text
OMG, sorry I didn't comment you in the last chapter. But now I'm here.
Well, let me process the fact that YOU met Warwick Davis and then I'll give you my theory about the teacher thing.
OK, ok, now...
Maybe the teacher is suspecting something. I mean, Bill who always goes to his house alone one day just goes with this new person which is older and looks like a junkie. Uhm, I'm pretty sure if my teachers when I was at school saw me with someone like that AT LEAST will ask me about them. Or just keep an eye on me, because we all know teachers love to know everything about the kids they teach.
In this case I don't think it's a bad thing (because if it was me I would tell him/her to stay out of my things xD). Let's see.
And yeah, I hate Tom. :)
Author's Response: That's not a problem :)
Haha, okay, I'll give you a moment. ;)
Your theory is pretty much right but there's a bit of it that you're missing. :D You'll just have to wait and see what it is! :D Yeah, if it was the teachers at my school then they'd definitely ask me about it because they seem to want to know everything about everything!
Ah, you're one of the Tom haters are you? It seems that the readers are definitely very much spilt - they either love him or hate him. :'D Thanks for your review!
Date: 03/24/11 05:53 pm Title: A Text
Oooh, the teacher may be a friend of Bill's dad or someone who knows who Tom is...ONE of those two things!
And congrats on winning, thats awesome that you got to meet Warwick Davis :D
Author's Response: Ahh, you'll just have to wait and see! :)
Thank you! :D and thanks for your review too xD
Date: 03/22/11 10:50 am Title: A Text
Always eager for more. Please keep on writing.
Author's Response: I'm glad to hear it :) thanks for the review!
Date: 03/22/11 07:15 am Title: A Text
Grats on the award, and this is a good chapter. A little short, but you warned us a ahead of time it would be filler, so no worries there.
The next chapter is what I think we're all looking forward to. I'm ready, bring it on.
Author's Response: Thank you x2. :) And ohh, you'll just have to wait and see :)
Date: 03/22/11 04:08 am Title: A Text
Thanks for the update. =)
Author's Response: It's my pleasure. Thanks for the review! :)
Date: 03/22/11 12:02 am Title: A Text
Oh my gosh congrats!!! I always wanted to meet Willow Ufgood,and if you don't know who that is then for shame you totally need to rent Willow it was one of my favorite movies as a kid. Well, it was my dad's favorite, and I really liked it, Val Kilmer *drools*
I definately sensed a major dun dun DUUUNNNNN there, but as for the teacher? *ponders* hmmm...I really wouldn't expect a kid being picked up from school warranting a call to the parents considering the teachers would know his Dad doesn't give a crap...so maybe a talk with Bill is in store?...I dunno...either way I do not see good things in the near future.
Woderful update! I can't wait to see what comes next! You are doing a fantastic job! Keep up the spifftacular work!
Author's Response: Thank you! :D Haha, that's what my older brother said. He sent me a message saying that he couldn't believe I shook Willow's hand. :P I've never actually seen the film though...I should probably watch it at some point!
There was a major dun dun DUUNNNN indeed! xD But what if the teachers didn't know about Bill's Dad? But no, there won't be good things happening.
Thank you! I'm so glad that you like it :D
Date: 03/21/11 10:55 pm Title: A Text
i hate stories with Tom as the bad guy- not because of the writing, because you write it exceptionally well, but because Mean!Tom scares the shit out of me. Bill shouldn't trust him.
as for the teacher, the most she'll do is ask Bill about it, and of course he'll lie cause he doesnt want anyone to know about his situation. then she'll drop it but keep an eye on him. but that's just a hypothesis.
and congrats on the award!!! lucky you, meeting an actor from Harry Potter. *hugs*
Author's Response: Awh, I know what you mean - as odd as it sounds, this Tom scares me a bit. It's pretty freaky thinking like him when I write this. But at the same time, I'm a bit of a Mean!Tom fangirl. ^.^ And no, Bill shouldn't trust him...
Hmm, you'll just have to wait and see what she does. :)
Thank you! :D And thanks for the review -hugs back-
Date: 03/21/11 10:15 pm Title: A Text
gratz on the short story competition! :D
and amazing chapter! :3 -hooked- cant wait for more :)
Author's Response: Thank you! :D
Awh, thanks, I'm glad you like it :)
Date: 03/21/11 05:23 pm Title: A Text
CONGRATULATIONS!!!! :D
And awesome update!
Author's Response: Thank you x2!! :DD
Date: 03/21/11 04:23 pm Title: A Text
So far, your sadistic Tom is one of my favorites. He's not over-the-top or cheesy or stereotypical...he's quite and cunning and that's so creepy! As for the teacher, I have a feeling he or she will probably call up Bill's dad about it, resulting in a bit of a hard time for Bill. Then again, he could confront Bill directly as well. Perhaps a bit of both? Either way, it's a great little development and realistic as well. After all, it's unlikely a teacher won't be watching someone like Tom very closely, especially in today's society.
And congrats to you! That's so amazing that you won and got to meet Warwick Davis! *applauds wildly* If this story is anything to go by, you definitely deserved it!
Author's Response: Awh thank you! I'm so glad you like him; I've never written anything remotely like this before so I'm happy that I seem to be doing okay. :) Ah you got it in one! :D My original plan was for her to call Bill's dad about it, but I quite like the idea of her confronting him too. Yeah, I just have the image of Tom standing outside the school in my mind - if I was a teacher I'd definitely be keeping an eye on him.
Thanks! :D It was just awesome! Awh, thank you, that means a lot! :)
Date: 03/19/11 11:15 pm Title: Prologue: Hell
yw :)
Author's Response: :)
Date: 03/19/11 03:40 pm Title: Patience
this is brilliant o: keep writing tom's so mysterious till now..im like majorly cliffhanged here lol :D
Author's Response: Thank you! :D Haha, I will do :) Thanks for your review!
Date: 03/14/11 01:06 pm Title: Patience
Patience is something I should also have but after reading the story so far I want more please!
Okay, I've never read a story like this, I think I know where this might be leading to but I don't want to say :X I get all giddy with the thought of it though; I can't wait to to read the progress!
I'm tracking this one too so I'll know when its updated.
All my excitement aside, this Tom character seems like a scary person. I don't believe I've ever read a Tom this dark, but I like it. I also absolutely love the foreshadowing it makes me tense in a good way like I'm watching a great suspense movie. I think that its interesting that Tom is 20 years old and is a plotting what I think he is plotting...maybe there is a history behind his behavior, perhaps something that will explain things later on. Either way, trust I'll be following this story!
Author's Response: Awh yay! :D
Ohh, you never know, you might be right. Then again, most people seemed to expect Tom to kidnap Bill when they were in the car so maybe I'll suprise people again! Thank you for tracking! :D
He is pretty scary to be honest. When I'm writing this, his evil thoughts are kind of scary, but I love it. I'm glad that you like the foreshadowing - it's never something I've really tried before, so it's great to know that it's working. I'm currently toying with the idea of there being a reason behind it or just because he's a complete sociopath. :') Thank you so much for your review! :D
Date: 03/08/11 10:32 pm Title: Prologue: Hell
wow...can't wait till the next chap! this is so exciting!!!
Author's Response: Ohh thank you! :D I'm glad you liked it :)