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Reviewer: FairyCelt Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/01/11 05:17 pm Title: The Walls Come Down

An update to one of my favorite fics AND news of a smut-fest coming? xD

Anywho, I just feel for Bill at this point. Abandoned and abused for years on end, and now he has Tom to deal with. Fate just hates that poor boy...

Author's Response: One of your favourite fics? N'awwwhh thank you xD Hopefully the smut-fest will be good...I'm always kinda wary about writing smut because I never reckon mine is any good :P

I know, poor lad. :( On the plus side, at least Tom's happy now? ;) Thanks for your review!

Reviewer: Suhmurka Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/01/11 04:57 pm Title: The Walls Come Down

Awww, Bill got kicked out :( But then again I was expecting that ever since the teacher saw Tom so it wasn't a suprise. Poor Bill, but things are looking up for Tom aren't they :) Go Tom I say!

Great chapter, keep it coming :) and congrats on getting your exams done, I was on the same position a few months back, so I know the feeling!

Author's Response: I know :( Yeah, things were only going to go from bad to worse. Ahh I think Tom's going to make his move soon! :D

Thank you, that means a lot! :) Thanks, it's a great feeling to get them out of the way. :)

Reviewer: MissLillieK Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/22/11 07:57 pm Title: The Other Home

OK, reviewing soooo late. :/

You know, the fact that Tom's so patient makes me scared. I think people is worse when they're like that.

I would like the teacher to keep an eye on Bill, but don't phone Jörg. But of course, she doesn't know what kind of father he is.

BTW- Hope you're doing great on our tests! :)

Author's Response: Don't worry about that! Thank you for reviewing at all, late or not. :)

Ah a lot of people are saying that. I think it does make him extra scary, knowing the lengths he's prepared to go to get what he wants.

You're right, she doesn't know what Jörg is like, so in her mind phoning him is the right thing to do.

Thank you! xD They've all been okay. Today's was a bit iffy, but apart from that I don't think I've done too badly -fingers crossed-

Reviewer: Teresee Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/18/11 11:36 am Title: The Other Home

MORE PLEASE? :D

Author's Response: There will be more as soon as possible :D I've had to take a little writing break due to exams, but they're finished at the end of this week so hopefully this will be updated soon! Thank you for your review :)

Reviewer: shaku Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/24/11 03:57 pm Title: Prologue: Hell

awesome :3

Author's Response: :D

Reviewer: shaku Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/24/11 03:55 pm Title: Prologue: Hell

omg i love that i was desperately hoping for that to be updated haha x)

Author's Response: Haha I'm glad you like it :D Hopefully it will be updated by the end of the week :)

Reviewer: shaku Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/24/11 03:52 pm Title: Prologue: Hell

i did! :D I hope you write more soon =3

Author's Response: I will soon :D I'm struggling my way through the second chapter of Revenge of a Roommate right now...it's being a pain -_-

Reviewer: LoveTeady Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/24/11 02:43 pm Title: The Other Home

Damn girl! poor Bill wat has he got himself into

Author's Response: Oh he doesn't have a clue :'D Thanks for your review :)

Reviewer: shaku Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/20/11 02:31 pm Title: Prologue: Hell

I asked an admin! :D i hope that helps :)

Author's Response: Ohh I hope you figure it out :D

Reviewer: shaku Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/20/11 01:42 pm Title: Prologue: Hell

well it ays validated yes but like when i go to my story i see only one chapter..however when i go to edit stories there's two chapters xD

Author's Response: Oh :S Well I'm a 'validated author' so I don't really know much about how to tell whether it's validated or not. I think your best bet would be to ask a staff member about it. Sorry I couldn't be more help!

Reviewer: shaku Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/20/11 01:02 pm Title: Prologue: Hell

ima ask u a stupid question. How do you know youe other chapters have been posted and validated after the first? :3

Author's Response: That's not a stupid question. :) Urrmm, I think that you go onto "Manage Stories" and then look down the "Validated" column. If it says yes, then that means that your latest chapter has been validated. :)

Reviewer: Mechas2000 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/20/11 07:47 am Title: The Other Home

ok so im not really sure i get this story yet so far i have that tom is going to make bill fall in love with him then torture him and break him down? i dont know im not really sure.

Author's Response: Bear with me! Everything will begin to become clear in the next chapter. Thanks for your review :)

Reviewer: shaku Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/17/11 11:42 am Title: Prologue: Hell

your welcome :D

Author's Response: :D

Reviewer: Miriamel Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/16/11 05:23 pm Title: The Other Home

I'm intrigued. I'm pretty sure I know what Tom has in mind for Bill, but at the same time there's this feeling that there's a lot more going on here than you've shown. Can't wait to see where you take this.



Author's Response: Everyone seems to be on the right lines, but I don't think anyone has gotten it 100% right. I guess you'll just have to see if your idea is right. Thank you for your review! :)

Reviewer: Dark Writer Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/16/11 01:49 am Title: The Other Home

Uh oh...this is not good...for Tom OR Bill...

Author's Response: Nopeeee. I'm going to say its worse for Bill though. Tom can take care of himself, Bill can't. Anyway, thank you for your review! :D

Reviewer: shaku Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/16/11 01:15 am Title: Prologue: Hell

yw! and yeppers i so am haha specially after 7 ways to annoy your roommate..well all that aside..good luck with those exams :)

Author's Response: Thank you! :D

Reviewer: violet_star77 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/16/11 12:37 am Title: The Other Home

Good luck with finals.

I'm glad someone is at least trying to look out for Bill who has his best interests at heart. Thanks for the update.

Author's Response: Thank you. :)

I agree, but the question is, will it be enough? It's my pleasure, thank you for the review :D

Reviewer: Daissa Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/16/11 12:20 am Title: The Other Home

Lol, Tom's patience is really weirding me out. I was sure he'd kidnap him this time. Hurry up, man. XD gah

Also, I mostly like that the teacher is expressing an interest in what's going on, as it can save Bill, but a small bit of me is thinking, 'Stay out of this, woman. This is s3r1ous bus1n3ss' Plus bad things just have to happen otherwise it's a boring story.

Author's Response: Ahh, well keep an eye out for the next chapter. That's all I'm going to say about it... ;)

Yeah, but does Bill want to be saved? Haha, that sounds so weird! I'm sure you know what I mean though. Thank you for your review! :D

Reviewer: ladyX Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/15/11 11:08 pm Title: The Other Home

*is fake excited* Yay!!!! EXAMS!!! Those are so fun!! *cough* not really... good luck though. I really enjoyed the chapter, and I look forward to more!!

Author's Response: Tell me about it, I just can't wait. -eye roll- Haha, thank you. :) Awhh, thanks again. :D

Reviewer: TwinSwords1991 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/15/11 11:03 pm Title: The Other Home

YAAAAAAAAAAAAY, FINALS BEING DONE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! *does happy dance*

Author's Response: Hahaha, I just can't wait until they're over :D

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