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Reviewer: FairyCelt Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/10/11 05:55 pm Title: Waiting

Have I told you yet how much I love this story? Cause I really do! There's such a huge contrast between Bill and Tom, both in personality and circumstance, that each chapter is incredibly interesting from a character perspective. I'm always so excited to see an update! xD

Author's Response: Awhh really? Thank you, that means a lot! :D I'm really glad you're enjoying the differences between them - I don't think they could be more different if they tried! Thank you for the review xD

Reviewer: LilithTHF Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/07/11 02:25 pm Title: A Text

Oh, I just got to this, but better later then never, right? I'm really enjoying it, though Tom is starting to give me the creeps. But that's kinda good... Isn't it? O_o

Well, congrats for the prize! ^^

Author's Response: Definitely better late than never! :) I'm really glad you're enjoying it so far xD If Tom wasn't giving you the creeps I'd be doing something seriously wrong :PrnrnAwhh, thank you :)

Reviewer: LoveTeady Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/05/11 01:42 pm Title: The Walls Come Down

OMGOMGOMG!! wat's gonna happen now, can't wait

Author's Response: Hahaa, you'll just have to wait and see xD Thank you for the review :)

Reviewer: Siljukka Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/04/11 03:29 pm Title: The Walls Come Down

Oooh... I can only imagine Tom's smile when they were hugging. Tom has something in his mind and I'm dying to know what. ;)

I think bad Tom is sexyy. 8D

CANT WAIT FOR MORE :D

Author's Response: Oh I know, it would have been the sexiest, most evil smile ever! xD Ahh, only time will tell ;)

Bad Tom is most definitely sex! :D Thank you, I'm glad you enjoyed it!

Reviewer: shaku Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/04/11 06:11 am Title: The Walls Come Down

yay smuttiness lol, i loved this chappie

Author's Response: I know! xD Thank you, I'm glad you liked it. :) This is my 100th review by the way! -dances and hands out cookies-

Reviewer: violet_star77 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/04/11 01:15 am Title: The Walls Come Down

i'm glad bill has someone to go to but i wish Tom didn't have sinister intentions for him.

Author's Response: Yeah, I do feel kind of bad for him but then again, Tom deserves his fun xD Thanks for your review! :)

Reviewer: Aufgeweckt_Engel Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/03/11 12:44 pm Title: Prologue: Hell

I'm still nervous, lol. You've painted such a beautiful picture of Bill with this fic and I just don't know if my heart can stand any more horribleness happening to him.

Author's Response: Awhh :) Thank you! Well, there may not be SerialKillerTom, but there will be some nastiness I'm afraid :(

Reviewer: Daissa Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/03/11 02:01 am Title: The Walls Come Down

Lmfao, I meant that 'break' in that phrase is supposed to be 'breath'. What were YOU seeing? XD

Author's Response: LOL! That's completely what I meant... -shifty eyes- I don't know what's worse...the fact that MY mind is in the gutter, or the fact that I didn't notice that mistake when I proof read or read the review OR went back to the story to figure out where that sentence was. -face palm- xD

Reviewer: Aufgeweckt_Engel Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/02/11 05:46 pm Title: The Walls Come Down

Good to see you back, and I am tremendously glad all went well with your finals.

I am both desperate to receive updates to this story, and desperately afraid of continuing to read them. I don't do well with horror and gore, or SerialKillerTom, but I'm still here in the meantime!

Excellent chapter.

Author's Response: It's good to have them out of the way, and thank you. :)

I completely understand where you're coming from. But don't worry, there will be no SerialKillerTom! xD

Thank you, I'm glad you liked it. :)

Reviewer: Miriamel Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/02/11 11:12 am Title: The Walls Come Down

Damn. Right about now, Bill would actually do anything Tom wanted him to. The subtle menace - the way everyone can see there is something off about Tom except Bill - that's brilliant. I'm just really hoping I'm not right about what Tom has in mind for him.



Author's Response: He most probably would. Awh thank you. :) I know, Bill just doesn't want to see it. Oohh, care to share? I'm interested about what you think will happen. Thanks for your review! :)

Reviewer: TwinSwords1991 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/02/11 11:02 am Title: The Walls Come Down

oh, boy.... bill.... that was a BAD idea....

Author's Response: I know, but he had no other options :(

Reviewer: pinkyth Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/02/11 09:56 am Title: The Walls Come Down

wow I love this chapter it was so cool thanku for update :3



Author's Response: Thank you! I'm really glad you liked it! :D

Reviewer: Aristotelis Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/02/11 03:19 am Title: The Walls Come Down

Great chapter!!

Author's Response: Thank you :D

Reviewer: Mechas2000 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/02/11 03:01 am Title: The Walls Come Down

lol loving everything i just read! cant wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response: Thank you, I'm glad you enjoyed it! :D

Reviewer: Daissa Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/01/11 11:00 pm Title: The Walls Come Down

Hehe, I just caught this: The dark haired boy took a deep break as he opened

Author's Response: Gosh, get your mind out of the gutter girlie ;)

Reviewer: ladyX Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/01/11 10:56 pm Title: The Walls Come Down

oooh five whole chapters of smutty twincest *day dreams of the wonders that could entail*

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*snaps back* Oh! Sorry *blushes* umm, review right? I was supposed to be reviewing the chapter.

Ok, so, really awesome. Poor Bill, being all kicked out and such, but good for him! standing up to his dad anyway!

The bad stuff is gonna be happening soon, init? And I think that little old lady knows something bad is gona happen.

I hope you did well on your exams, and I really look forward to more soon! Keep up the wonderful work!

Author's Response: I knowwwww xD

Hahah, yes, on to the review! Thank you; I felt he needed to at least try and stand up to his dad, just out of principle at least. Yep, the bad stuff is going to be happening soon indeed. Hmm, she may.

I think I did alright thank you, so fingers crossed. Thank you - I'm glad you're enjoying it :)

Reviewer: Dark Writer Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/01/11 08:53 pm Title: The Walls Come Down

Oooh really good chapter...something tells me Tom may go after Bill's dad or do something, I can't wait to read more.

Author's Response: Thank you :D Ah, maybe, maybe :P I'll update as soon as possible xD

Reviewer: selenalumina Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/01/11 08:38 pm Title: The Walls Come Down

Poor Bill. :-(

Author's Response: I know :(

Reviewer: Daissa Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/01/11 08:29 pm Title: The Walls Come Down

An update! :D *flutterclaps*

I just hope that if Tom's still going to be evil, that they don't fall for each other too quickly.

Author's Response: :D

Don't worry, Tom's still going to be very evil xD

Reviewer: Fighter Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/01/11 06:30 pm Title: The Walls Come Down

Great update! Can't wait to read more!! :D

Author's Response: Thank you, I'm glad you enjoyed it! :D

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