Date: 06/25/11 09:19 am Title: Trust
this chapter was cool!! I cant wait to see what tom will do to bill! xD
Author's Response: Thank you, I'm glad you liked it :)
Date: 06/25/11 09:03 am Title: Trust
Ugh TOm
Author's Response: Hahah, I know xD
Date: 06/22/11 01:11 pm Title: Waiting
Next chapter. WHERE IS IT?!
:D
Author's Response: I know I know, it will be coming soon! Promise :D
Date: 06/17/11 02:29 pm Title: Prologue: Hell
Bill will try to get accepted at the university as well
Author's Response: What university? Sorry, you've lost me! xD
Date: 06/15/11 03:29 pm Title: Waiting
yay! thanks for the update! poor Bill...
Author's Response: that's quite alright! :) i know, poor boy :(
Date: 06/15/11 05:05 am Title: Waiting
Hahaa, Tom is so evil ^^
Author's Response: He really is! xD
Date: 06/11/11 09:04 pm Title: Waiting
i;m doing it :)
Author's Response: Ohhh, I shall have a read once it's done :)
Date: 06/11/11 06:27 pm Title: Waiting
Oh this is good. I want the next chapter NOW.
Strikes me that no matter how much Tom wants him, it'll still take a lot to get Bill to consent to sex with him. When he does, though, he's got him for life. See, if I was writing this Tom would be planning to pimp Bill for profit after getting what he wanted, but I probably have issues.
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you like it :D
You see, I'm not sure how much longer Tom's planning to wait...he's getting impatient, despite how he's acting. Ooh that's quite a good idea! It's not what I've got planned, although it's not going to be much better.
Thanks for your review :)
Date: 06/11/11 09:09 am Title: Waiting
ooohh, I'm guessing wat's gonna happen next
Author's Response: Oohh do tell! I love to know what people are thinking xD
Date: 06/11/11 04:40 am Title: Waiting
when ever then got scared > *whenever *they
Author's Response: Ohh, fail train. Thanks!
Date: 06/11/11 02:52 am Title: Waiting
I can't wait to read more of this. I'm loving it so so much.
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm really glad you like it so far :D
Date: 06/11/11 12:12 am Title: Waiting
I really do hope tom's thought process changes soon I hate how he thinks of Bill, like a piece of meat or something :/ and my sympathies to Bill! the poor boy
Author's Response: Ohh, I wouldn't hold your breath if I was you :/ Sorry! And I know, poor Bil's gotten himself in a right mess. Thanks for your review :)
Date: 06/11/11 12:02 am Title: Waiting
Lol, I would so do the Big Bang thing as well, except my endurance in writing is shit XD I constantly need inspiration, which is rare for me -.-
Also, bit of critique, it's a little too much suspense now. You wanna keep the tension level high enough so that readers keep their interest (and you've got that), but be revealing enough to sate their curiosity. Otherwise they're prone to get frustrated at the overload of suspense and stop reading.
Author's Response: I'm worried I'm going to end up just giving up. But I'm determined not too. xD
I completely agree with you. The reason I've kept the suspense going on for a little too long is because there was a lot of things which needed setting up before the main part of the story. Now that Bill's at Tom's house though, things should be kicked in to motion. Thanks though; I appreciate the comment. :)
Date: 06/10/11 11:11 pm Title: Waiting
I would sign up, but I have no talent for writing anything except reviews. I don't even have a decent Drabble to my name. But awesome for you! I will definately read yours!
Poor Bill with his nightmares. You wtite Poor Bill and Evil Tom so well. Please never stop? *bats eyes adoringly*
Please keep up the wonderful work! I am anxiously witing for more!
Author's Response: Well, you're a very good review writer! :D Far better than I am anyway :) Thank you! I'm super worried that no one will read it :P
I promise that I won't ever stop - they're too much fun like this -nods-
I will do my best. Thank you for your review! I'm glad you like it so far :)
Date: 06/10/11 10:57 pm Title: Waiting
It really scares me the fact that Tom is so patient. I already told you.
And poor Bill. Now he's literally homeless. But, really, I'd preffer being in the streets that in the same house Tom is.
Update soon. I loved the chapter. ;)
BTW-, I'm following you in twitter. I'm @ElbaFuenmayor
Author's Response: How long he's prepared to wait is definitely quite scary.
Yuup, but don't worry, I'm sure Tom will take care of him. ;) Really?! Oh, I'd definitely take Tom's house! I'd never survive on the streets - I'm like Bill and get crazily cold super quickly! :P
Thank you, I'm glad you like it! :D
Oooh, I will follow you back :D
Date: 06/10/11 10:54 pm Title: Waiting
Magnificent...as always, and now I'm excited about the next chapter. It's been a while since I've hung on a fic. Now, if you'll excuse me...I'm going to go put up and tree and coloured lights.
Author's Response: Thank you :D I'm glad I'm managing to keep you around! Oh, have fun with that :)
Date: 06/10/11 10:33 pm Title: Prologue: Hell
Uh oh...that can't be good. Well...I'm showered and relaxed and ready to read.
Author's Response: Haha, of course it's good xD
Date: 06/10/11 09:56 pm Title: Waiting
This is absolutely addicting. (Like all your other stories ^^) And, I will admit, it has inspired my own little dark, devious, smut filled story to be worked on. (After I talk myself into working/updating my many others). I am truly looking forward to this being updated =]
Rachael
Author's Response: Awhh thank you! :D Oh, you must let me know what it's called when you've uploaded it so that I can go and read it! :) Thanks, that means a lot!
Date: 06/10/11 07:37 pm Title: Waiting
Getting good...suspense is good...you're good! Can't wait for more.
Author's Response: Thank you, I'm glad you like it so far :)
Date: 06/10/11 06:27 pm Title: Waiting
Oh, I love you. I haven't read this yet, but I got it on my phone and I'm so excited. The minute I get home tonight, I promise. This is me happy...
Author's Response: Yaay, well I love you too and I'm glad I managed to make you happy. You're mentioned in the author's note at the end :)