Date: 03/07/25 03:53 pm Title: Proving A Point
I am a Chinese fan who came a bit late. Discovering this website is the happiest thing for me in recent years. I used to use bookmarking as commenting. I must say that I have read and bookmarked this story. Reading this story is undoubtedly a pleasure! Today I plan to leave a comment. Thank you for your story. You are an amazing writer.
Date: 04/19/19 05:54 pm Title: Proving A Point
Sad this got abandoned but i know how it is. I guess the rest is left up to the imagination but the foundation you laid with the 13 chapters set it up good. Thanks for the story!
Date: 04/18/19 09:39 pm Title: Helpless
Damn i need to go to sleep cos it's so late and my eyes hurt but this keeps getting jucier with each chapter and i can't stop reading!
Date: 04/18/19 09:16 pm Title: The Walls Come Down
Damn this just hit a whole new level. Bill has finally let down his walls and decided to trust Tom even though he doesn't want to, and now Tom's gonna fuck up all of that. :(
Date: 04/18/19 09:05 pm Title: The Other Home
Oh noooo, calling his dad is the worst thing she can do right now to get him all mixed up in Bill's life.
Date: 04/18/19 08:31 pm Title: Losing Count
I love the writing in this story, how you keep alluding to the future and each line is making me wonder what is going to happen next. The paragraphs flow so nicely. I'm very excited to read on and find out what's about to happen.
Date: 10/31/16 12:07 pm Title: Prologue: Hell
Can we maybe pretty please get an update? Or is this a dead fic? =/
Date: 02/16/13 08:30 pm Title: Proving A Point
updateeee
Date: 09/09/12 06:11 pm Title: Proving A Point
woow I just read the complete story and I love it! :) you've done a great job!! :B
I feel really bad for Bill.. Tom is so mean with him, he just don't deserve all the things he's going through :(
I hope you can update it soon :) greetings from Mexico! :)
Date: 06/22/12 11:55 am Title: Proving A Point
Great read! :D God I missed this, thanx for updating! I wonder what sort of horrid experience made Tom into such a bastard :/ It's sad to see Bill cluelessly being played by him. I can't wait to read what happens next. Please make the next chapter soon :)
Date: 04/24/12 01:57 pm Title: Waiting
Argh.. How can Tom be so mean?Ö
Date: 03/26/12 04:08 am Title: Proving A Point
I just want to see how this is going to play out. Obviously Bill is in over his head and Tom has some plans for him.
Date: 03/07/12 10:08 pm Title: Prologue: Hell
I'm soooo happy you're back!!! I've already told that, but Tom is the best character. I like the way he is such a manipulative bastard... He's perfect. And Bill is lovely and innocent... they are hot together. Sorry for my english, great chapter.
Date: 02/26/12 01:03 pm Title: Proving A Point
Hey:) I hope you won't give up on this story! I absolutely love it! I must say, as a little pervert...:), I can't wait for the smutty stuff...
Date: 02/22/12 10:23 pm Title: Proving A Point
Such a great chapter! Tom seems to be showing his colors a bit. This update was totally worth the wait. :) can't wait to read the next chapter.
Date: 02/20/12 02:32 pm Title: Proving A Point
this is ridiculous, how old is bill, 12? his thinking about kissing is OOC specially after he was sure tom was gonna rape him, he def was not THAT naive. I also think tom's taking too long whatever his intentions are, I'm guessing he's gonna be bill's pimp (sorry but I forgot the story plot), so that's weird, why will he wait that long to sugarcoat bill into fuckin' him...ur takin' too many chapters to get to the point, it's a shame 'cause I thought it was gonna be faster, thrilling...I hope u can approach the non-con issue faster, u choose to write this after all. BTW I want tom to do whatever he was gonna do to bill and stop going around THAT issue
Author's Response: Bill's fifteen, as it says in the summary. The key thing with him thinking Tom was going to rape him was that he didn't. Actually, no, that's not what's going to happen. I did chose to write it, so I will write it at my pace. Sorry that you don't like this story but you are of course entitled to your own opinion.
Date: 02/18/12 12:15 am Title: Proving A Point
I'm just glad you updated!!! It's been too long :(
Date: 02/17/12 03:25 am Title: Proving A Point
I'm still here! Thanks for the upgrade ive been waiting for a long time for this :) I hope we can get another update soon i am so excited to see where the story is going!
Date: 02/15/12 09:26 pm Title: Proving A Point
I have missed this story so much! It's unbelievable how much I love it and I've missed you too because of your wonderfulness tehe :3 Please update this as soon as possible because I'm about to explode in happiness at the fact you've put another chapter up. I really want to see some aggressive Tom come out, he's very sexy like that. Maybe even a little bit of him hitting Bill. I love mean Tom! Gah I'm sad I know. But anyhow this was amazing once again, please update soon. *Cuddles*
Date: 02/14/12 09:14 pm Title: Proving A Point
AFTER ALL THIS TIMEEEEE???? ALWAYS.
HAHAHA. YOU'RE BAAAAACK! I can't believe it. I could have died in these 6 months you haven't uploaded, but I'm still alive, so yeah! :))))
GREAT CHAPTER!! Poor Billy! Tom is so cruel! And Bill is so naive! So many things that tell Tom is not a good person and he just thinks he is - or perhaps I should say he wants to believe it!
Can't wait to next chaaaaap! Hope it'll be up soon! But don't worry, take your time! I know sometime's hard to write a story, so I won't annoy you! But please, update before august! XDDDDD