Date: 03/19/25 09:42 pm Title: Chapter 1
I am a Chinese fan who came a bit late. Discovering this website is the happiest thing for me in recent years. I used to use bookmarking as commenting. I must say that I have read and bookmarked this story. Reading this story is undoubtedly a pleasure! Today I plan to leave a comment. Thank you for your story. You are an amazing writer.
Date: 04/27/14 12:16 pm Title: Chapter 1
super cute story!
Author's Response: thank you!
Date: 03/11/13 09:07 am Title: Chapter 1
Thanks for the incredibly nice story! The way Tom treated his little brother was just aaawwww *_*
Author's Response: Aw, you're welcome, thank you for reading! :D
Date: 11/07/11 05:21 pm Title: Chapter 1
Aw this was just precious, darling. Loved how brotherly sweet it was. Too cute at the end, Tomi deciding Bill was not to skate again. Muaa, much love~ ♥
Author's Response: Ohhh, thank you so much (n_n) /kiss kiss
Date: 09/19/11 05:19 am Title: Chapter 1
This is so damn cute! Excellent job =)
Author's Response: Thank you so much! :D
Date: 07/17/11 09:50 am Title: Chapter 1
This is really really really good!
I love skaters and I want to skate but like I don't own a board and this girl I like skates and I want to skate for her...
So when I found this I was like must read XD But I loved your way of writing even though this was really long I kept reading and enjoyed it all the way though. Good job ^-^
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm thrilled you liked it enough to read all the way through :D
Date: 06/14/11 03:18 pm Title: Chapter 1
This was completely adorable. I like how protective Tom was.
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm so happy you liked it ^_^ I love writing twins this age :3
Date: 06/09/11 10:47 pm Title: Chapter 1
Omg I've had this open in a tab for SOOOOO long. This is just perfect young twins, and I love it so much! *_* I love your writing style in this story; the things that you focus on, the way Bill thinks and FEELS so intensely, it's just fantastic and captures the sense of being that age, experiencing those emotions for the first time, in a very vivid way. Wonderful job on this story and you had better write many more! ♥
Author's Response: Oooh I'm beyond thrilled that you enjoyed it :D I'm glad you thought so, writing this sort of age is my favourite and I find it so much fun to play with the twins like this. Hopefully I'll have more to offer soon, I WANT to be able to write MOAR .-. Thank you! <3
Date: 05/01/11 11:34 pm Title: Chapter 1
omg omg, shoot me now, but when it said that he had to wake up at seven and it was friday...friday, friday, friday! god someone shoot whoever made that music video...
that horrid song aside, this was sooo super cutely adorable. loved it. haha, so boyish and sweet and life-like, then with a little dusting of twincest. :3
Author's Response: Oooh god that song x_x Sorry my fic had to remind you of that rubbish! rnrnAw thank you! I'm thrilled you enjoyed it :D I definitely enjoy writing boyish, youngish twins the most :) and not forgetting the twinny bits!
Date: 04/30/11 04:45 am Title: Chapter 1
Great story! I loved it :)
Author's Response: Thank you! :D
Date: 04/29/11 10:07 pm Title: Chapter 1
this was such a great story! it had the perfect amount of detail and a great plot. i hope you write more stories with this intimacy and perfection
Author's Response: Aw, thank you for such a lovely review! ^_^ I'm sure I'll write more, hopefully soon! *no motivation ¬¬)
Date: 04/29/11 06:22 pm Title: Chapter 1
I haven't had the time to read this until now, but it was wonderful! You're such a good writer, Emily.
Author's Response: Aw, thank you, Lin! I'm so happy you liked it :D <3
Date: 04/29/11 01:54 pm Title: Chapter 1
Sooo cute, loved it very much!
Thanks for sharing!!!!
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm so glad you enjoyed it :D <3
Date: 04/28/11 04:36 pm Title: Chapter 1
I love how concerned Tom was for Bill's health. Everyone knows kissing makes it all better. ;) I loved the dialogue too. Very believable and sweet.
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm so glad you liked the dialogue, that's the part I'm always so sure I get wrong x_x so it means a lot that you thought it was believable ^_^
Date: 04/27/11 04:03 pm Title: Chapter 1
This was an adorable story , I loved it!
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it ^_^ <3
Date: 04/27/11 01:20 am Title: Chapter 1
Lovely twins!
I can totally picture Tom missing Bill so badly and ditching his skater fellows for him; and Bill too, doing all that crazy stuff in order to spend more time with Tom. They are cute like that.
Author's Response: Thank you! :D Hehe yeah they need each other too much ;)
Date: 04/26/11 03:05 pm Title: Chapter 1
Aaaaw! This is the cutest thing EVER! I loved this little story SO much! :D
Author's Response: Aww, thank you so much! I'm thrilled you enjoyed it ^__^ <3
Date: 04/25/11 10:21 pm Title: Chapter 1
Aw, that was SO cute! I loved it! Sweet, innocent Bill and Tom! Yaaaay! Adorable story! (:
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm so glad you liked it ^_^
Date: 04/25/11 08:33 pm Title: Chapter 1
hold on, i think i need to get an inhaler because i just lost my breath due to the AMAZINGNESS of this story
Author's Response: Hahah oh god poor you xD *hands over an inhaler* Despite your suffering I'm absolutely thrilled you enjoyed this fic so much xD <3 Thank you! :D
Date: 04/25/11 07:22 pm Title: Chapter 1
AWESOME! so cute i loved it! keep writing!!!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I will indeed keep writing ^_^ Even if it takes me longer to get stories out atm >_>