Date: 02/13/11 01:54 pm Title: Chapter 1
SO happy to see a new story from you! And what a brilliant fic it was! Seriously, this was just so adorable and well written... love the twins in this. Bill is just so suborned, it's very cute how far he went to prove to Tom that he's worth is time. Tom waiting for him on his bed was the cutest thing ever and the kiss at the end was perfect! I really enjoyed this story and I look forward to read your new stuff when you're ready to post it!
Oh and the banner looks really really great. Fits the fic perfectly, love it!
Author's Response: God I overlooked a few reviews for this fic, I'm really sorry it's taken me forever to respond o__O rnrnThank you! I was so happy to post it! Now I just need to work out what to write now... *needs some motivation* >_> Your reviews always make me smile and feel so good, and I can't thank you enough for that! Thank you thank you so much my darling! <3
Date: 02/13/11 12:49 pm Title: Chapter 1
Weee, it's posted~! =D
So this. This is amazing. This is what amazing looks like when you look it up in the dictionary. =O Like kissing-it-better Tom and determined, foolish and lovable Bill. It’s not only precious (but oh is it precious!) but well written and gloriously characterized.
I love how you write their age. I never felt like I was reading about short adults, but they weren’t unrelatable in any way because of their youth. I could tell where Bill was coming from, and Tom too — where Tom is always coming from, his need for Bill! ;) It squeezed my heart, Bill trying to skate to be worthy of Tom’s time while Tom is sitting on his bed every night — openly seeking Bill’s time, as you said. And then they snuggle. .-.
And oh my god, how amazing was the half pipe scene? I love your description and I love their *dialogue* and I love the skating crew and Bill’s bravado that wasn’t so thought through, and most especially Tom’s showing up and his pissed off protective brother-ing and Bill’s excitement that Tom saw him skating (crashing). Oh, Bill. I love him most in that scene. ♥
And to top it all off, twin kisses at the end. =D I am over the moon you wrote this story from my little prompt~ =D It is fantabulous. Thank you for writing it as I enjoyed reading it so much! ^____^
Author's Response: I've left this so long to reply to but thank you, Jelly. It's been such a long time since you've been around but I still think about you and miss you and your writing. It'd be wonderful for you to return :) rnrnThis is still my most favourite story and it still means THE WORLD that you liked it so much. Thank you!