Date: 04/25/11 03:19 pm Title: Chapter 1
*insert massive AWWW here*
This is the cutest fic I've read in a long time. c:
Congrats on having it featured! It definitely deserves it. :D
Author's Response: Awww *insert massive hug here* :D Thank you! I'm thrilled you enjoyed it! And yes! I can't believe it got featured, I'm beyond happy! ^_^
Date: 04/25/11 02:34 am Title: Chapter 1
Awh, this was lovely. The youthfulness of the twins, particularly Bill, was perfect, not to mention his determination. And Tom's kisses were just too sweet :')
Author's Response: Thank you so much! ^__^ I'm thrilled you enjoyed it! <3
Date: 04/10/11 12:50 am Title: Chapter 1
NOOOOOOO THIS WAS JUST TOO CUTE. Like... I'm exploding internally from how freakin' adorable and good and just aaaah amazing it was. Your writing skills blow me away! I really loved this line especially:
“You’re such a klutz,” Tom said fondly, and Bill felt Tom’s fingers dust over his cheek bone lightly, barely even touching, just doing a bit of twin damage assessment. Tom hummed low in his throat and Bill did, too, enjoying the tender moment. Having his twin right next to him and being able to sleep was perfect."
Twin damage assessment! Too much to handle, oh my gosh. I love when Tomi takes care of Bill (believe it or not... I know my own fics don't really lend themselves to that dynamic XD), and that fact combined with how well you write just makes for something magical. I absolutely adore you and your stories, and I'll always check back for new ones. :) Keep on keepin' on, champ! Haha.
Author's Response: Guuuuh I'm so late x_x I'm really sorry! <3 rnrnI think this has got to me the best review ever! It just makes me grin all over again to re-read it, aw all your kind and wonderful and amazing words, THANK YOU *-* I can't tell you how thrilled I am that you enjoyed this so much :D I have so much I ~want to write, but it's not coming atm. I have a few in the works thought so I'll have something soon I hope. Thank you SO much! <3
Date: 03/19/11 07:16 am Title: Chapter 1
I think this is the cutest fic in all history!! You told it so well, and your characters are so darling. The twins act like real 13 yr olds, it's super dooper cute!! Especially when Bill falls down.. Awwww!!
But the way Tom is sweet and takes care of him is even better. I'm so happy they kiss in the end. SCORE. Lol. And you also included a few fab images in there for my dirty mind- like Tom on top of Bill. Hehe. Awesome job. I loved reading this. :)
Author's Response: I'm so late in respondong x_x I'm really sorry! rnrnAw wow, that IS an honour! Thank you eve so much :D I really enjoy writing young, boyish twins so this was a lot of fun to write ^_^ Really, this review is just wonderful, thank you so much! :D <3
Date: 03/04/11 06:14 pm Title: Chapter 1
So awesome... I hope you'll write again soon (AND A LOT) because you fucking rock girl ♥
Author's Response: Aw wow thank you so much for this review :D I definitely do need to write more! I need some motivation/inspiration >_>
Date: 03/01/11 03:05 am Title: Chapter 1
luv this fic It was just adorable in every way possible this is definitely going in my favorites!!!!
Author's Response: Aw thank you sweety! I'm thrilled you enjoyed it :D <3
Date: 02/25/11 09:26 pm Title: Chapter 1
I enjoyed that :)
Author's Response: Thank you! ^_^
Date: 02/16/11 07:30 pm Title: Chapter 1
HOW CUTE! Especially the banner. :3
Author's Response: Mmmm isn't the banner just so *___* Thanks for your review! <3
Date: 02/15/11 01:45 pm Title: Chapter 1
Awww i love this one shot so much! i havn't been on THF in months :') you've made me realise just how much i've been missing!
Hope to read more of your stuff soon :)
Author's Response: Aw this is such a lovely thing to hear! Thank you so much ^__^ I'm glad you're back, and I'm glad I had some sort of input in that decision :D welcome back! Hopefully I'll have more up soon, if I can get writing again!
Date: 02/15/11 02:14 am Title: Chapter 1
Aw girl! This was so, so sweet. I adored the characters and their dynamic. And I really enjoyed the skateboarding scenes. You described them beautifully and I could really see them! Nicely done. :)
Author's Response: Aw, thank you so so much! I'm so thrilled you liked it ^__^
Date: 02/14/11 10:19 pm Title: Chapter 1
cuuute
Author's Response: Thank you! ^_^
Date: 02/14/11 03:38 pm Title: Chapter 1
absolutely wonderful ♥
Author's Response: Thank you, Jess! <3
Date: 02/14/11 02:21 pm Title: Chapter 1
This is so lovely! I love everything: the characterisation, the dialogue, Tom's kisses... *__*
I really like your writing. The narrative is funny and so boyish. ♥ I love that Bill is not a quitter, and "he was much too delicate" made me grin and grin! You write Simone wonderfully, too. "It's perfectly fair" when they're both ordered to do the exact same thing! Hee. I love that Bill is such a teenager in that scene and Simone stays calm.
The way you describe Bill and Tom's relationship is so lovely! Footsie in the kitchen and Tom being so concerned and gentle. Absolutely wonderful. ♥ I love "twin damage assessment!" And all those kisses and touches and butterflies! I'm thinking Tom was feeling those too. *g* Poor Tom, he got quite a scare at the park, and I was scared too -- I read that part with only one eye open, so to speak... but the ending is so happy that it more than made up for it!
Author's Response: Uuuuuh I can't believe I haven't replied until now x_x I'm so sorry! rnrnI'm absolutely thrilled you enjoyed this, and absolutely floored by this review *_* I think I enjoy writing youngish and boyish twins the most. It just is funnest (is that a word) for me. *hugs* for the scare, I'm sorry .-. But it worked out in the end, and you left a fabulous review, so everyone is happy ^_^ Seriously, thank you so so much for this! It's amazing to recieve a review like this <3
Date: 02/14/11 07:37 am Title: Chapter 1
How cute!
I can't imagine Bill or Tom on a skateboard though. They lack coordination. It would be as painful to watch as Bill's dance moves!
Author's Response: Haha I'm not sure I can either xD But hey, it worked for a fic... I think :O Thanks for reading and reviewing ^_^ <3
Date: 02/14/11 05:43 am Title: Chapter 1
So. Cute.
I just love young twins, and this is such a sweet story.
Author's Response: Thank you! I rather love young twins, too ^_^ I'm thrilled you enjoyed!
Date: 02/13/11 10:03 pm Title: Chapter 1
this was so cute! i can picture bill all wrinkly-browed, trying to get the moves just right to impress tom.
Author's Response: Hehe, thank you! ^_^ Poor Bill, he does try! Even if he doesn't have to :3
Date: 02/13/11 04:42 pm Title: Chapter 1
Naaaw this was great. So great. You need to write more, my dear. Can wait to see more of your stuff up. I have you letter here, I shall reply asap. The gravel up his nose thing was brill, made me lol.
Author's Response: Ah thank you so much! :D I would love to write more, I have a million and one ideas but never enough to time get them on paper! But I'll definitely be writing more. Looking forward to your letter <3
Date: 02/13/11 03:35 pm Title: Chapter 1
It was really cute story, thank you! I love young twins and yours were just perfect &hearts
Author's Response: Aw thank you for such a sweet review ^_^ I'm so glad you liked it!
Date: 02/13/11 02:35 pm Title: Chapter 1
Awww Emily, this was wonderful. I love little Bill and Tom. Poor Bill getting all banged up when he could have been home being banged by his brother. I love your writing and can hardly wait to read what you have for us next. Love you. :)
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm so so glad you liked it, Ms M! ^_^ I have so much planned, it's just getting it on paper now xD
Date: 02/13/11 02:35 pm Title: Chapter 1
This so completely captured the twin's youth and you could totally hear their voices throughout. Bill was so cute and so determined and Tom being the protective older brother just.. *_* Your writing is phenomenal, girl. Jelly is so lucky to have received this :)
Author's Response: Oh thank you so much! This was, is, such a lovely review to recieve ^_^ Seriously, thank you so so much! <3<3