Date: 01/05/25 04:55 am Title: Show me some moves
How can I tell you how much I love this story!
Date: 08/01/13 12:10 pm Title: Show me some moves
This is really cute :3.
I can't with the Shakira imitation from Tom omg XD lol so silly
I can't even express to you how much I would love to see Bill as a belly dancer. Thank you for writing this.
Author's Response: Thank you for leaving me these lovely reviews! :) I'd love to see Billy belly dancing as well. I think he'd do marvellously.
Date: 01/18/13 05:29 am Title: Show me some moves
that was really adorable:)
Date: 05/09/12 03:07 am Title: Show me some moves
Confused Tom is so cute! And belly dancing Bill is so sexy! Love how you described his dance moves. Felt like I was there. Find myself wondering what happened the next time Bill danced for Tom. ;D
Date: 02/14/11 02:31 am Title: Show me some moves
This is just...to me, so beautifully in character, SO Tom, and SO Bill. From Bill's intense looks to Tom's hot possessive feelings. Sorry I'm so brain-melty as to not give you the lengthy comment this deserves but oh, so *____* You really made my morning!
Author's Response: I'm so glad you think so! I thought this was just a little ficlet where nothing much happens, and I've been amazed and thrilled by the reception. You finding it in character makes me very happy! Thank you. :)
Date: 02/13/11 10:19 pm Title: Show me some moves
That was very cool. Good job!
Author's Response: Thank you! I try! :)
Date: 02/13/11 09:03 pm Title: Show me some moves
Wow... *g*
I love your detail--it just sucks me in and I can practically see Bill dancing like that with Tom all bothered and confused about his thoughts... though I admit I laughed at the image of Bill really belly-dancing. It would be hilarious as much as it would be... interesting xD.
Don't meant to pressure you or anything, but I really hope this has a sequel! x)
Author's Response: Tom is so confused, hee! I guess seeing Bill bellydance would do that to all of us... on the one hand, hilarious; on the other hand, possibly pretty damn hot? *g* I haven't decided against a sequel, so who knows! Thanks for the wonderful comment! It makes me all kinds of pleased that you felt like you were watching Bill dance.
Date: 02/13/11 02:30 pm Title: Show me some moves
This was really well-written! I love how Tom's almost there... but not quite... yeah, I like it. Very cute with an undercurrent of lust. Awesome! :D
Jane
Author's Response: Omg, I love your description of this fic! Hee! Thank you for commenting; it makes me so happy to know that you enjoyed!
Date: 02/13/11 11:14 am Title: Show me some moves
omg, bill like this.... sexy, really :D
Author's Response: It's an appealing mental image, isn't it? :D I'm glad you liked!
Date: 02/13/11 10:43 am Title: Show me some moves
Personally, I think I'd die laughing if I ever got to see that show Bill put on in this fic. hahahaha.
Cute little ficlet. Sounds like an itsy-bitsy start to some twincesssssttt! :)
This was very well written. Well done. :)
Author's Response: I would probably grin if I saw this happening for real but I'd also be so thrilled! (Especially if we'd also see Tom being all uncomfortable and yet transfixed... um. Anyway. *g*) There's possibly twincest in their future, yes. :) Thank you, I'm glad you found this well written!
Date: 02/13/11 10:18 am Title: Show me some moves
That was brilliant! Oh the mental image.... I really wish i could watch Bill dance like that! Loved his intense look and how Tom was worried that he was thinking of someone... I really enjoyed this fic. You are really good at describing everything, it was like I was there, watching the show with Tom!
Author's Response: I can picture Bill dancing like this so easily... he already has intense looks sometimes on stage! I'm relieved and happy that you felt like watching it yourself; it was difficult to write about dancing. :) Thank you!
Date: 02/13/11 10:07 am Title: Show me some moves
This is awesome! Ah... Mental imagery. I think we would all enjoy seeing Bill bellydance.
Author's Response: Definitely! I'd love to see Bill bellydance. Or wear something like that. *g* At least we can imagine that he's tried some moves in front of the mirror sometime, right? Thank you for commenting!
Date: 02/13/11 09:42 am Title: Show me some moves
Geeezzz... I loved this. It was really good. I belly dance occasionally *g* so I know it's hard, but also how fun it is.
I can imagine Tom's eyes all huge and mouth slack as he tried to categorise his emotions watching his brother dance surprisingly well and teasing.
I wish I could have watched, too, because it's so expressive and beautifully described.
Great job!
*Maria
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm so pleased you liked it! I agree that bellydancing is both difficult and fun. :) Thanks for telling me that the descriptions worked for you, I wasn't sure whether I managed to write about dancing so that it would make sense... Tom's huge eyes is a wonderful mental image! Hee.