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Reviewer: LuckyDeathStar Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/18/15 05:49 pm Title: Vacuum Tubes

This was super amusing, it made me snort and make people look at me funny. I really wish we could find the real reason for Bill wearing them in his hair :)

Reviewer: zkmmm Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/25/11 09:31 pm Title: Vacuum Tubes

I don't know who inspired it but hello Bill, he looked fucking awesome in that whole outfit. I was distracted by his lightbulbs for a second but the rest of his outfit was just..... *dazed* His shirt.. pants.. everything.. Just perfect.

Reviewer: heavenhell Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/14/11 12:01 pm Title: Vacuum Tubes

LOVE THIS FIC.. My smile is as bright as Bill's idea

Author's Response: Yayy! Thank you! :D

Reviewer: mischadevi Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/14/11 12:06 am Title: Vacuum Tubes

I have no idea what nonsense inspired him, but I'm glad it inspired you to write this. So cute and funny. Only Bill would use wild twin!sex just to justify a new hairdo.

Author's Response: Haha, yes he would! :) thanks! <3

Reviewer: AmyJean76 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/13/11 11:57 pm Title: Vacuum Tubes

LOOOOOOOOOOOOOOL I LOVE YOU SO MUCH THEA XD
*cough* Still waiting for Tom's prostate and Bill's dick to join the talking sex organ family :PPP

Author's Response: I LOVE YOU TOO <3 so much. And the next installment of Talking Boy Parts should be up soon! :)

Reviewer: ChunyGurl Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/13/11 10:04 pm Title: Vacuum Tubes

I have no idea how Bill came up with those. Everyone is saying its steampunk. What that means I have no idea. LoL but I am just wondering how Bill got them to stay on his head without falling off! Awesome story! :D

Author's Response: It may be weird, but I like to think that they're wired into his head and whenerver he gets a good idea they light up :) yeah, I know, I'm weird. Thank you! :)

Reviewer: TH_Rescue_Me Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/13/11 05:51 pm Title: Vacuum Tubes

Ah Bill...what would we do without him? I'm kind of torn about this hairstyle... but anyway, really great story! I laughed the whole time, especially at the "Snookie Poof" part! haha hilarious, great job :)

Author's Response: Thanks! <3

Reviewer: lilliephoenix Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/13/11 03:34 pm Title: Vacuum Tubes

lol. i loved sweet afterglow!tomi.

i think bill was reading too much steam punk manga. ;-)

Author's Response: Thanks! I love the idea of Bill being a manga guy :)

Reviewer: elvisfan Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/13/11 12:01 pm Title: Vacuum Tubes

hated it! the hairstyle, not your story.

Author's Response: Haha, thank you! :)

Reviewer: Ema21 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/13/11 11:07 am Title: Vacuum Tubes

I think the lightbulb mohawk is such a preposterous idea, I wouldn't be surprised if he had some dream about light-up aliens and then was like "hey, they had cool hair!". LOL. Little did he know his subconscious was really just dreaming about those weird children's wall lamps from IKEA.
Ok, nvm, I got carried away. lol.

Anyways, so I caught the hat references to PoorMedea's fic... cute.
Ok, so truthfully I think some parts were funny, but there were a bunch of parts that kind of fell flat for me. Kind of like when someone tells a joke, and then the punchline isn't funny... yeah, sorry, it's horrible of me to say that, but that's kind of how I felt here.
I think it's the way you describe ppl, e.g."The black haired man", it just feels inappropriate in this story, idk, like the words dont fit correctly, and you did that a few times, it breaks up the flow.
The scenarios with the twin sex and drunk!Georg also seemed a bit forced, which is too bad, cuz it's a good idea. I will never pass up an opportunity for drunk!Georg, who would? :)
It's not all bad.. I think Dave calling Bill's hair a Snooki Poof is hilarious. I can see the outrage on Bill's face. Brilliant! :)
I would keep working on the comedy though. This one didn't do it for me. I'm so sorry. :( Keep writing, ok? lol. You've got the plot down perfectly, I promise. :)

Author's Response: I completely agree. I honestly wrote this in about 25 minutes, speed typing and throwing in out-of-place phrases or ideas (black haired man, drunk!Georg, etc.) as soon as they came to mind. I wasn't extremely inspired to write this piece either, so I sort of rushed it and tried to get it over with, instead of taking my time and doing more proof reading. I have more fun writing things that really entertain me, and I think that I sort of jumped into this one, thinking I would enjoy writing it more than I actually did. But seriously, thank you. It makes me glad to know that there are writers out there who give their honest opinions of a story, to help the author grow and improve on their writing. rnrnOh, and IKEA wall lamps? I have them, and they are fucking AMAZING. They would look amazing on Bill's head. :)

Reviewer: shimmery Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/13/11 08:57 am Title: Vacuum Tubes

"Teenagers."
"I'm twenty-fucking-one, Jost!"
Hahahaha. Brilliant!

Author's Response: Thank you! <3

Reviewer: allura_red Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/13/11 08:20 am Title: Vacuum Tubes

i think, thomas edison's b-day ispired bill))

Author's Response: That is definitely possible! He should dress up like Thomas Edison sometime. :) Thanks!

Reviewer: ichliebedreads Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/13/11 08:00 am Title: Vacuum Tubes

Steampunk! but not so steampunk since it's electric.. gah.. I don't have any idea... I still don't understand why he put it in his hair.. but hey, it's Bill. We'll love him either way. XD



Author's Response: It's impossible to not love him, isn't it! Whether it be steampunk or not, I liked it. :) thank you!

Reviewer: blAckmYsterY Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/13/11 07:13 am Title: Vacuum Tubes

Japan's great fame for robotics and having come from all the humanoid inspired outfits I bet he just thought of hair to go woth them

Author's Response: Ah, Bill's fascination with robotics never fails to amuse me. Thank you for the review! <3

Reviewer: SephoraChise Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/13/11 04:16 am Title: Vacuum Tubes

I think he either lost a bet or was huffing something he shouldn't have been huffing...like Georg's socks. But he's Bill and we love him. We would love him if he decided to pull a Lady Gaga and wear a meat dress, only he wouldn't wear a meat dress because he's a vegetarian. The dress would be made of corn. A corn dress. And he would wear a corn husk on his head.

Author's Response: You have no idea how entertaining that mental imagery is to me. Corn husk head piece... I like it. Thanks! :)

Reviewer: Ms Maril Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/13/11 04:12 am Title: Vacuum Tubes

That was hilarious and I can so see everyone reacting to Bill that way. I wasn't fussy about them but Bill is Bill and looks great in anything. :)

Author's Response: He does look amazing in everything. I wish I had THAT ability! :) thanks!

Reviewer: Tomi_N_Billa Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/13/11 03:49 am Title: Vacuum Tubes

They were vaccume tubes from one of the amps! XDD this was brilant!

Author's Response: Bahahahahha, I totally picture him running around backstage, stealing all the vacuum tubes from the amps :) thanks for the review!

Reviewer: mrsjennakaulitz Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 02/13/11 03:11 am Title: Vacuum Tubes

FINALLY!!!! someone depicted the picture!!! i think it's really, REALLY wild, and i would NEVER try it, but Bill pulls it off sooooo naturally!!! this story though.....*sighs* it's awesome. it's SO going into my favs.

Author's Response: Thank you for the favorite! He does pull it off naturally, doesn't he? Nothing to see here, just a row a glass bulbs coming out of my skull ... :)

Reviewer: HollyWoodFix Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/13/11 03:10 am Title: Vacuum Tubes

As soon as I saw that picture of Bill I knew this was going to be brilliant! And it was XD And I can't even begin to guess what inspires some of Bill's 'looks' lol.

Author's Response: I'm always wondering where he gets his ideas! Thanks! :)

Reviewer: Rockstar101 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/13/11 02:44 am Title: Vacuum Tubes

You know what. This fic was so adorable. I think also what inspired Bill's little party on his head, was probably some odd show on TV. This is Bill. He never needs a reason. *laughs*

Author's Response: You're totally right, he doesn't need a reason! Thank you! <3

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