Date: 03/04/11 05:04 am Title: Chapter 7
Tom likes Bill ;) who doesn't Bill is a pretty boy ;)
Author's Response: Pretty is an understatement ^____^
Date: 03/04/11 04:19 am Title: Chapter 6
Damit I want Bill and Tom together already :P save Bill Tom!!
Author's Response: Hahaha! Be patient ^^
Date: 03/04/11 04:10 am Title: Chapter 5
I hate adam he is so damn abusive towards Bill he shouldn't have done that! That was just beyond mean and gross!
Author's Response: Mhmmmm, he's an idiot D:
Date: 03/04/11 04:00 am Title: Chapter 4
I have a big as smile on my face. I REALLY like Tom and Bill in this story.
Author's Response: I'm so glad you like them :-D That warms my heart ^^
Date: 03/04/11 03:53 am Title: Chapter 3
I really like Tom and Bill in this story :) Bill doesn't give a fuck who Tom is lol love it!
Author's Response: Indeed he doesn't ^.^ Go Bill!
Date: 03/04/11 03:43 am Title: Chapter 2
Lol the shower scene XD don't drop the soap guys you know what'll happen LOL so Bill thinks Tom is hot hmm me too ;)
Author's Response: Haha, I loved writing that one :3 "Don't drop the soap" LOL
Date: 03/04/11 03:30 am Title: Chapter 1
Lol I like Bill he is so bad ass!
Author's Response: I'm glad you like him ^^
Date: 03/04/11 01:01 am Title: Chapter 12
Oh no no no---Tom, that's not good! Hope He finds a way to work on his fear of what others think!
Author's Response: Yeah, but he's obviously quite torn ._. Let's just hope he does the right thing, hehee. Thanks for reading!
Date: 03/04/11 12:49 am Title: Chapter 12
I hope the thing with Bushido works--they should have had him arrested for assault. I knew this being public about their relationship thing was going to be a problem.
One thing: 'interested in keep seeing' not proper english. interesting in continuing to see or want to keep seeing, but not that.
Thanks for the great update!! I look forward to more.
Author's Response: Oh, thanks for pointing it out! Will fix it right away. And no problem, I'm so glad you like it O_O <3
Date: 03/04/11 12:37 am Title: Chapter 12
YAY!! *claps* Tom got to kick some a-ass.
Sorry *rubs your nose* I didn't mean to hit it quite so hard. *pouts* forgive me?
I am very glad the question is out there. It couldn't be avoided forever, even if he doesn't have a great answer to it yet.
I'm just waiting for the paparazzi to find him, and get a pic of him with Bill, though of course it might take a bit for some to realize he is a boy just by photograph...Keep up the wonderful work! *huggles*
Author's Response: Nawww, I forgive you :3 And you're right, the question couldn't be avoided forever. I was actually going to only write one more chapter to finish the story, but I think I have to add a few more. I'm not really sure myself how this is going to turn out anymore xD Thank you for reading, sweetie. *kisses*
Date: 03/04/11 12:11 am Title: Chapter 12
Go to hell, Adam=_= May Bushido's gang feed him dirt!!! Lol... It was a good thing Tom arrived a bit sooner, before Adam could do more serious damage on Bill...
I can now smell drama. It gets thicker in the air now. I've kind if felt it when Bill mentioned on one on one of the previous chapters why he dated Adam... There are a lot of things to consider if they do want this relationship to work... Like Tom's career... Oh dear... Gonna be a bumpy ride ahead..D:
Author's Response: It was probably pretty obvious that this question would come up: Whether Tom should come out of the closet and risk his career or not. Let's hope he chooses the right thing! Which is Bill of course :') Thanks for reading
Date: 03/03/11 06:43 pm Title: Chapter 12
bum bum bum!!!
Author's Response: xD
Date: 03/03/11 05:32 pm Title: Chapter 12
Oh my gosh! I just find out the loooooong way these guys have ahead them. But I hope they make all the mess in their heads up and in the end they could finally stay together. With no regreats. And without shame. ^^
I like the fic!
Author's Response: Yeah, I hope so too ._. Thank you for reading this, I'm glad you like it ^____^
Date: 03/03/11 04:57 pm Title: Chapter 12
Lol, you stopped emailing me chaps. But I haven't seen many errors, if any.
“I will if you come to your senses again, you little slut!” - strongly suggest it should be "I won't if .."
“What, you only hit people who is half your size?” Tom took another step towards Adam so that their noses were only inches apart. “Now get the fuck out of my apartment you sick bastard.”
Should be "who are half your size" and put a comma immediately after 'apartment'.
If the thought about some random, old lady knowing about him and Bill - the first 'about' should be 'of'
I just read that you're already done writing. Aww, heh, too bad this can't be longer, then.
Author's Response: I know, I'm really lazy, and I just wanted to post the chapters as quickly as possible D: *hides under table*. And the story isn't done. It was, but then I decided to add a few chapters xp I might send you chapter 13 tomorrow though, if you're interested in betaing? :D I think it's gonna be quite short. Thanks for pointing out the mistakes in this one btw! Fixed it now.
Date: 03/03/11 04:51 pm Title: Chapter 12
oh tomi, please manage to get through this! looove the story though :'D
Author's Response: Ah, I'm so glad you like it ^^ Thanks for reading!
Date: 03/03/11 04:34 pm Title: Chapter 12
Haha! Tom called for reinforcements lol. Hopefully Bushido's buddies will be able to get the point across to Adam. I feel bad for Bill. Hopefully Tom will chill out & things will work out. It wouldn't surprise me tho if things were to get worse before they get any better. Can't wait to read more =)
Author's Response: Haha, reinforcements ^^ Well, he had to do something to protect his pretty little boy! Once again, thanks for reading and reviewing <3
Date: 03/03/11 03:56 pm Title: Chapter 12
Aaaah I really loved this chapter. I feel sorry for Tom though, it must be really hard for him. :C
Author's Response: Yeah, he seems quite torn :-/ I'm so glad you like it, thank you for reading and reviewing :)
Date: 03/03/11 03:48 pm Title: Chapter 12
I'm glad Tom was able to get to Bill in time before Adam could do any damage. And I hope that Bushido and who ever is able to scare Adam into staying away. Great chapter, I can't wait for more! XD
Author's Response: I think you can count on Bushido and his gang ;-) Lol. Thanks for reading! :D
Date: 03/03/11 03:33 pm Title: Chapter 12
Awwwwww...this better end well...
I am so happy adam got his ass beaten down!
Author's Response: Bwahaha, let's hope it will >:) Thanks for reading!
Date: 03/03/11 02:48 pm Title: Chapter 12
awww, this chapter is just so... *flails* I don't even know how to describe it. I really wish Adam would stop being such a damn asshat! *kicks him super hard then hugs him* geez.. and then there's Tom. I've got my eye on him *pets Bill* Gotta watch out for Bill, poor thing.
Author's Response: Damn that Adam -.- Let's hope Bushido's friends teaches him a lesson xD Thank you for reading and reviewing, I'm SO glad you like it! *hugs*