Date: 03/17/11 03:33 pm Title: Chapter 17
Hellz yeah! haha! Love it xDDD
Author's Response: Aw, I'm glad ^.^
Date: 03/17/11 02:58 pm Title: Chapter 17
wauuuuu
Author's Response: ^______^
Date: 03/17/11 02:21 pm Title: Chapter 17
I'm overjoyed that they're now official. I loved it! :D
Author's Response: Thank you ^_____^
Date: 03/17/11 02:09 pm Title: Chapter 17
OH MEIN GOTT!!! I cant believe Tom did that! Cant wait for the next chapter to see how things go for them.
Author's Response: Yeah, Bill makes him do crazy things ;) Thanks for reading! <3
Date: 03/17/11 01:17 pm Title: Chapter 17
*squeals happy and faints*
Author's Response: Awww xD Thanks for reading! *hugs*
Date: 03/17/11 12:13 pm Title: Chapter 17
aw tomiii! yes finally :'D i didn't actually believe he would do that! so happy he did though! ah yeey!
Author's Response: Yayy! Thank you for reading :D The last chapter is up now
Date: 03/17/11 10:58 am Title: Chapter 17
OMFG how cute!!! *squeals* LOVE IT!!!!!
Author's Response: Thank youuuu ^__^
Date: 03/17/11 10:52 am Title: Chapter 17
YAY TOMI, YOU GREW A PAIR AND DECIDED TO BE BRAVE!!!!!!!!!!!!! lol, great job on this!!!!!!!
but now i wanna know how the label's gonna respond to thatd..... :D
Author's Response: He sure did! Thank you so much :3
Date: 03/17/11 10:51 am Title: Chapter 17
LOVING IT!
Author's Response: Awwww, thank you :-D
Date: 03/17/11 10:35 am Title: Chapter 17
Cute chapter :)
Author's Response: Thank you so much! ^___^
Date: 03/17/11 10:01 am Title: Chapter 17
Way to go Tom!!! LOVED IT!
Author's Response: That makes me so happy, thanks! :D
Date: 03/17/11 09:17 am Title: Chapter 17
I wanna cheer and be happy but I've got some uh-oh feeling, too... :o
Author's Response: xD Stay tuned :3 Thanks for reading!!
Date: 03/17/11 07:23 am Title: Chapter 17
*flutterclaps* Tom does have balls after all:D
Author's Response: He sure does! Bill made him grow a pair :3
Date: 03/17/11 05:35 am Title: Chapter 17
aaaaaaw :) You go TomBill!
Author's Response: Yay! :3
Date: 03/17/11 05:32 am Title: Chapter 17
Omygod! Omygod! Omygod! *o* yay!!! No more secret Bill BUT what will this do to Toms career he has worked so hard for :(
Author's Response: You'll just have to wait and see ^.^ Thanks for reading!
Date: 03/17/11 05:09 am Title: Chapter 17
vnjkvjffvnnjsf :D EXCITEDDD
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Date: 03/17/11 04:18 am Title: Chapter 17
Wow... They're finally out!!
I should be happy for them. I'm happy that Tom chose Bill... I'm worried about his career though. Well, maybe he can use some career change. Hehh. And new management..XD And instead of rap he can play his guitar!! Lol..XD Whatever happens, hope the two of them will be alright..
Author's Response: They sure are! *happydances* Thanks for reading ^___^ You'll just have to wait and see what happens with Tom's career
Date: 03/17/11 04:05 am Title: Chapter 17
"No," Bill said and showed his ass out > lol! Pretty sure that's supposed to be 'shoved'
He didn't want to make the other boy uncomfertable > *uncomfortable
None of them did, of course > should be 'neither of them'
When the pause finally arrived after what felt like hours > I had a bit of a time figuring out what "pause" was. You might want to change it to 'break' or 'lunch'
Tom felt his heart pick up the pace slightly as he remmbered > eh, tiny one. *remembered
none of them looking away. > same here. Change 'none' into 'neither'
he mumbled quitetly > *quietly
Pictures of their kiss was > change 'was' into 'were'
Hmm, remove the comma after 'and the fact that people were watching them', and add a comma immediately after 'oh' in 'adored oh so much'.
Yup, that's it. Anyway, wow, that was unexpected but good for story progress.
Author's Response: Thank you so much! <3 Fixed it now :-)
Date: 03/17/11 03:53 am Title: Chapter 17
*glances over shoulder* I'm surprised my mother hasn't come in here asking what I'm squealing and flailing about. oh yeah, this just made my day. It was the PERFECT thing for me to read before I get ready for work *huggles you* But though I do have the feeling of impending doom and angst for the near future. Please tell me I'm wrong.... *gulps*
Author's Response: Hahaa, that's cute :') I'm so glad you liked this chapter! You'll just have to wait and see how things work out with the record label ^__^ Thanks for reading!
Date: 03/14/11 09:18 pm Title: Chapter 16
Yes, Tom. Your are, indeed being just like Andreas, no matter your excuse.
I'm glad Andreas shoved that little tidbit in his face, and made Tom see what he was doing.
I love that Bill just fell asleep on Tom, and he snored a bit. So adorable. The Obama in heels thing was hilarious.
I do believe Bill was, just a teeny tiny little bit, jealous of the hairdresser. Who wouldn't be? Having some random ho-face fawning all over your man, AND not being able to say anything about it??? I totally cannot blame him for bashing on her.
I look forward to seeing more! Keep up the fantastic work!
Author's Response: Of course he was jealous, he just didn't wanna admit it. That sweet thing. I'm glad you thought Bill falling asleep on top of Tom was cute, some people were mad because Tom didn't get an answer because of it ^.^ But come on, the answer is obvious; he's being just like Andreas D: Thank you for reading and of course reviewing!