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Reviewer: s_n_a_r_k Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/12/11 07:35 pm Title: The chocolate bar and the color blue

please continue.

Reviewer: ladyX Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/12/11 06:08 pm Title: The chocolate bar and the color blue

this is a really cute story so far. I can't wait to see the rest of it. I kind of want to kno what happened to Tom to get him on the street, especially seeing as he seems to have been there for quite a bit more than a year or so.

Reviewer: kawaiicoyote Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/12/11 04:52 pm Title: The chocolate bar and the color blue

awwww I'm glad you decided to do more with this one *happy clap* That's sad that Tom got kicked out like that *hugs Tom tight* hopefully it gets a bit happier... and crap now I want chocolate really bad and to paint my nails blue lol

Reviewer: MissAnna Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/12/11 04:49 pm Title: The chocolate bar and the color blue

If my mama found me with a homeless person in the house, she'll beat me and the homeless person with a stick and tell us to get out XD
I love this story. I have a soft spot for defenseless, deprived creatures/beings/people (you know what I mean) >.>
But honestly can you imagine having/developing feelings for a homeless person O.O

Reviewer: Twelve Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/12/11 04:49 pm Title: The chocolate bar and the color blue

So, I have to say this: I really like that this site makes it REALLY easy for readers to make a review. There's really no work in it for us since all you have to do is click, type and submit. There's not a link or anything. XD I've been taking full advantage of this fact a lot lately.

Anyways. XD Yay! Bill made Tom happy! :] This story is cute, in a way, but so real in another way. If that makes any sense.

Hmm, Will they run into one another again? I hope so!

Reviewer: Supernatural Anomaly Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 02/12/11 06:55 am Title: The presents in the waste container

Really cute story, love it:)

Author's Response: Thanks! :D

Reviewer: Random324 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/11/11 08:52 pm Title: The presents in the waste container

AWWWWWW, this is so freakin' cute! Love it!

Author's Response: Thank you!

Reviewer: MissAnna Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/11/11 06:19 pm Title: The presents in the waste container

This is nice. Makes me wonder if the homeless ppl I see everyday even think about VDay :/ I'll buy one of them a choco-bar XD I may get cussed out or chased down the street, but it's the thought that counts lmao
From that banner I never would have thought Tom was a 'tramp'.

Author's Response: Hahaha XD I wouldn't know actually, I live in the kind of small village where you never see homeless people.
No I don't think it's possible to find a picture of Tom where he looks like one XD

Reviewer: Synnie Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/11/11 04:56 pm Title: The presents in the waste container

I asked myself the exact same question 'what am I doing writing valentine's shit!?' when I began Another Day lol I liked this though. It was cute. I'd like more of it though.

Author's Response: lol XD uhm yea I just got some more ideas for this and decider I might just add a few chapters so 'more' is on its way ^^

Reviewer: kawaiicoyote Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/11/11 04:10 pm Title: The presents in the waste container

awww I liked this. It was cute. It really makes me want to read more about it.

Author's Response: Although I wasn't really planning on it... More's to come (:

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