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Reviewer: jase Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/11/11 09:20 pm Title: Chapter 1
Date: 02/11/11 09:20 pm Title: Chapter 1
That was a very good story. I didn't connect much with your Bill character, but i really felt for Tom. I can see it. Great job
Reviewer: tokio kid Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/11/11 11:59 am Title: Chapter 1
Date: 02/11/11 11:59 am Title: Chapter 1
I can definately see this picture. I like it but it seems unfinished. It has so much potential to be a STORY. Good job
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