Date: 02/08/11 04:34 pm Title: The Encounter
wow i really like it!! the emo-boy image on your banner has been in my favourites for years (no creepy stuff i swear ;d) and i just love the idea of tom manhandling another boy *0* i can't wait for the next chapter!!
um..as for writing.. i like the way you do it but i think you should use more comas (i think it's called that ) anyway i wish you good luck and lots of inspiration for the next chapter :))))))
xoxo
Author's Response: HAHAH!! I'm glad you like it. Yeah me too that's why i decided to make it a Tom/OMC. More comas? Okay... I'll keep that in mind next time. THanks XD
Date: 02/07/11 06:25 pm Title: The Encounter
I love it, love it, love it! I really love the pairing of Tom/OMC, because you don't see it done a lot...especially with Bill/OFC. When someone writes a story with one of the twins being 'straight' and the other being bi/gay, it's usually Bill that falls into that roll. So I abosultly love it when people shake it up like this! I'll stop rambling now and just let you know that I already love this and I can't wait for the next chapter!!
Author's Response: YEAH! I'm glad you love it. No I totally agree with you that's why I like doing the contrary to what others do XD. It's always more fun this way. I'll post the next one soon so you don't have to wait too long
Date: 02/07/11 04:53 pm Title: The Encounter
That's a great start! I really wanna know what will happen next. I think Jamie will have a big surprise. I really hope you will update soon *puppy eyes*
Author's Response: THanks. You'll find out soon. Yeah he will. I'll update really soon I promise
Date: 02/07/11 03:50 pm Title: The Encounter
I like this so far. It's interesting.
Author's Response: YEAH!!! I'm glad you like it