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Reviewer: jacinta Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/25/11 11:50 pm Title: The Shelter

Naww this was cute! More twins? Haha I think it's cute how Jamie and Tom are around each other ^-^ can't wait for the next chapter! :D

Author's Response: YEAH!!! Yes more twins. They are super cute with each other. I'll post more soon.

Reviewer: rinigurl Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/25/11 08:16 pm Title: The Shelter

woot woot! neew chappp!! hehee! super great! and i like how tom was all kinky with the cuffs...anddd awwww mummy jamie sooo CUTE! and i love the little rascals :] and i kinda feel bad because tom and bill aren't as close but thats the way your story goes and its fabu! just saying and you know :] i think jamie should sing for tom and the song should be a sexy song lmaooo like kelly's new song ooorrr ride it! lmaoo by ciara just a lot but a vixen jamieee is pretty wicked! p.s GREAT! chapppp can't wait for moreeee woooot that was long! :D

Author's Response: YEAH!!! I'm glad you liked it. HAHAHHAH!!! Yeah that's a whole new side to Tom XD> HIHIH!! He just went from wifey to mummy, LOL!!! YEah they are super cute. That is sad that they aren't close but it'll stay like that for a while... at least for now. HAHAHAH!!! The vixen might come back but singing vixen Jamie I'm not to sure of. I'll post more as soon as I can

Reviewer: slinkies71 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/25/11 07:47 pm Title: The Shelter

awwwwwwwwwwwwww this was sooo sweet; the moments with the twins really touched me, my sister and i are really close and i can't imagine how hard it must be for tom to see twins acting like how he and bill should've :(( i can't wait to read more andddddddd i can't wait to read tom's REAL punishment hahah yay! for more!

Author's Response: YEAH!!! The twins are awesome. Yeah I'm really close with my sister too so I get it. I'll post more really soon. HAHHAHAH!!! That depends if he even has a real punishment XD.

Reviewer: SaigeStarx2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/25/11 07:42 pm Title: The Shelter

aw the ending was so sweet :)

Author's Response: YEAH!!! I'm glad

Reviewer: BillsBlasphemy483 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/25/11 07:11 pm Title: The Shelter

i loved it. mehr bitte

Author's Response: I'll post more really soon

Reviewer: TomsParkingOnly Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/25/11 06:23 pm Title: The Shelter

I'm glad that Tom is finding his happiness. He needs some of that n his life. I can't wait to find out what happens next.

Author's Response: Yeah it's a good thing. I'll post more as soon as I can

Reviewer: SaigeStarx2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/21/11 01:07 pm Title: The Label's Decision

a wait is fine so long as everything is good :) glad you posted.

Author's Response: Okay all good then I can take my time to finish it

Reviewer: rinigurl Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/20/11 09:18 pm Title: The Label's Decision

lol that's okay at least we got the whole chap!!! AND IT WAS FABU! i love how jamie turned into a vixen we soo have to see more of that jamie! :D and poor tom with that cast and jamie teasing smh! :D but again great chap and now i so wanna know what bobby did to jamie!!!

Author's Response: Yeah at least this time I managed to put the whole thing. YEAH!!! I'm glad you liked it. HAHAHAHAHH!!! Jamie the vixen. I like it. Thanks I'm glad you liked it. You'll find out about Bobby at some point.

Reviewer: slinkies71 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/20/11 12:41 pm Title: The Label's Decision

hahah i was wondering why it was soo short but i still can't wait to read more!! i want to see Tom's revenge plan....hehe

Author's Response: Yeah that was why XD. HAHAHHA!!!! I'll post more soon... and Tom's revenge is only if does have a revenge plan XD

Reviewer: HollyWoodFix Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/20/11 03:24 am Title: The Label's Decision

This was much better. I thought it seemed a little short and abrupt before. Great chapter! Can't wait for more XD

Author's Response: YEAH!!!! Yeah it really really was. I freaked out when i noticed that it hadn't posted the entire thing. I'll post more soon.

Reviewer: TomsParkingOnly Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/20/11 03:15 am Title: The Label's Decision

Yay! There was more! Lol. Love how u ended this chapter xDDD

Author's Response: Yeah there was more XD. Thanks I'm glad you liked it.

Reviewer: riddle101 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/20/11 02:20 am Title: The Label's Decision

I'm loving it as usual! Update soon, please?

Author's Response: YEAH! I'm glad. I'll post really soon.

Reviewer: RuffleBunn Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/14/11 10:43 pm Title: The Plan

MORRE!IM DIEING HERE

Author's Response: Okay okay. I'll post the next one really soon I promise.

Reviewer: SaigeStarx2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/11/11 11:14 pm Title: The Plan

that last bit was hot, i could so picture tom pulling his leg and then falling and then pinning and the the the hehehehe

Author's Response: YEAH!!! I'm glad you like it.

Reviewer: gabby2102010 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/09/11 11:52 pm Title: The Plan

Awwww

Author's Response: I know.

Reviewer: RuffleBunn Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/09/11 10:20 pm Title: The Plan

I feel so Bad for AMY!! If I was her and having my boyfriend not believing that i didnt try and kill someone, I'd just BLOW IT! Your writing her, Jamiejames (sorry ive nicknamed him)and Tom so well!!

Author's Response: I know. Bill's not a very good boyfriend right now. HAHAH!!! Jamiejames... I like. THanks XD

Reviewer: xmarlar Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/09/11 07:58 pm Title: The Plan

You surely kept your promise because the chapter was really interesting :)

OMG, Andreas is really pissing me off with all his bullshit! I'm glad that the G's spoke up though, because Andreas can't continue like this! He is brainwashing Bill and he has already ruined enough! But I still can't believe how blind Bill is, who believes Andreas instead of his own girlfriend and brother! But I'm glad that more people is starting to see the real Andreas and hopefully Bill will too.

HAHA, the G's are staying with Tom and Jamie on the bus! I think that's going to be interesting. And how are the boys going to get some alone time now without the G's starting to suspect something? XD

(Again I have to apologize for my poor English and I'm sure it's even worse now because I'm quite sleepy, but I hope you'll understand what I wanted to say anyway xD)

Author's Response: YEAH! I'm glad. HAHAHH!!! Yeah his bullshit it borderline crazy now. I agree with you. The shit has got to stop. Yeah Bill is seriously blind but you'll see soon enough when he realizes what a douche Andreas is. Yeah I know. I was thinking that I had to do something with the G's and that popped into my head. I really can't wait to write that part now. It's going to be so much fun. What poor english? I didn't even notice one mistake. Your english is great don't worry so much about that :)

Reviewer: Jster Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/09/11 06:11 pm Title: The Plan

Things are going very well between them. I noticed a little boo boo though. U said that Jamie glared at Jamie haha. Andreas is finally starting to loose his touch on others, only now they have to convince Bill. Gosh he is so blind taking a dress word over his brother and his girlfriend, boy does he have his priorities straight....NOT!

Author's Response: Yeah it is. Thanks for telling me. I was so sure I wrote Jamie was glaring at Tom. Oh well I changed it. HAHAH!! Yeah he is losing his powers XD. Bill completely blind it's crazy.

Reviewer: HollyWoodFix Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/09/11 05:31 pm Title: The Plan

I'm so glad the G's stood up to Andreas and backed up Amy and Jamie. I can't believe Bill though!! If I was Amy I would totally dump his ass right now! How is it that Andreas has him so brainwashed? I hope he see the true Andreas soon...Great chapter! Can't wait for more! :D

Author's Response: Yeah. More people on team Jamie XD. I know. He's a totally douche. I have no idea XD. You'll find out... at some point. I'll post more as soon as I can.

Reviewer: rinigurl Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/09/11 03:58 pm Title: The Plan

awww so cuteee! jamie and tomi is just adorable! and glory cracks me up! and WOOT WOOT! you go G's! finally tired of that sad sad little man i.e the leech! and as the tribe have said the G's have spoken! lmaooo! bill has GOT to wise up on the evil ways of the leech! :D but again great chap and can't wait for more :]

Author's Response: I know they really are. She's super funny. I love writing chapters with Glory in them. Yeah it's about time the G's said something about all the shit going on. HA! Bill seriously needs to open his eyes. I'm glad you liked it.

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