Date: 03/17/11 08:01 pm Title: Chapter 2
Still insane, but I'm loving it. I love how you have their roles set up, its interesting.
Author's Response: Thank you, again
Date: 03/17/11 07:55 pm Title: Chapter 1
Whoa, insane opening. Looking forward to more!
Author's Response: Thank you and as you already found out, there was more ;)
Date: 03/10/11 01:50 am Title: Chapter 4
Oh, umm...wow. I don't usually review every chapter of a story, just the ones that strike as me as particularly noteworthy. Like this one. I just wanted to say that I found this to be beautiful. The impromptu piercing in the car, the dominance of the club and parking lot scenes, all countered by vulnerable Bill back in their own home. I'm not sure why, but it made all my insides go wobbly.
Well done, ladies. Awaiting your next update.
Author's Response: I recieved this review on my phone and I kept looking at it, it made me smile the whole day, thank you so much
Date: 03/07/11 05:55 am Title: Chapter 4
Omg :DDD I love this story C: SEEEX
Author's Response: Thank you:) and Yeah, we know *wiggles brow*
Date: 03/06/11 01:19 pm Title: Chapter 3
Hmm, you guys that have nothing nice to say should just restrain yourselves from reviewing. This is for fun, not profit, so there's no reason to hurt someone's feelings.
Hey listen...Miriam and Mascha, if you like what you're writing and it's good for you, that's all that matters. Great effort, and I hope you keep going with the whole album like you planned. It's fun...and I loved the piercing scene!
Author's Response: I don't really care for the bad reviews, I care for the ones that make me feel good, like this one =)rnI write because I love to write and that's the only reason I write
Date: 03/04/11 04:41 pm Title: Chapter 3
I have to say: Thank you for writing something so vile and twisted. It makes me feel better knowing I'm not the only one out there with such disturbing thoughts.
Author's Response: I know, this is perverts anonymous for me
Date: 03/04/11 10:03 am Title: Chapter 3
I love this. Lol, really fun.
Author's Response: Thank you =D
Date: 03/04/11 09:31 am Title: Chapter 2
Bill playing a sadist is creepy and makes me wanna puke...had the story been the other way around, I'll give it a try, but no, thaks
Author's Response: Well technically it's both of them being sadistic so Tom gets his turn in this as well. But if Bill being like this makes you sick then...
Thanx for at least giving it a go at first, I guess
Date: 03/03/11 11:02 pm Title: Chapter 3
i think you should change the sumary cause it doesn't speak about the story
Author's Response: We've talked about it and we will be changing the summary a bit, thanx for pointing it out
Date: 02/10/11 11:17 pm Title: Chapter 2
I am so shocked you didn't get more reviews for this fic! It is really good and I hope you don't give up on it.
Bill is so deliciously evil in this chapter...*smirks* I love it.
Keep up the great work.
Author's Response: I won't give up, I finished this story so I will post it to the end. Reviews or no reviews. But I'm still very happy with this review, thank you!
Date: 02/06/11 07:04 pm Title: Chapter 1
I think it was awesome how you aren't just makingh it a songfic around the words, your basing the story on the emotions around the song. its a nice change of pace from what normally happens. I am really looking forward to more. Keep up the good work!
Author's Response: Thank you so much!rn
Date: 02/05/11 07:18 pm Title: Chapter 1
Intense and erotic story is intense and erotic *__*
I really love how you took the theme of "Attention" and made it into a story without having to rely on lines from the song or taking it too literally. It made this so unique and interesting to read. Absolutely love it and I can't wait for more!
Author's Response: Thank you so much, I hope I can live up to your expectations