Date: 02/12/11 10:27 pm Title: Part Two
Heh. Well I have to say this was basically smut.
And I really like it. To think of Bill topping is always sexy. Way better than Bill bottoming. Taking such control in moving his hips to hit a spot that makes your insides curl in ecstasy. Really good, I had never seen Andrej before the day this story first came up. I was so confused like, why did she write Male Celebrity and that's cleary a beautiful woman. And then I saw the other pictures of him and was just like Woah, I can totally see Bill hitting that up. To think The younger Beats the older in a game of Fuck. It's cute and clever and I'm glad the most twincest in here was just a few kisses, besides Tom's thoughts of course.
Really good, but you're always a good writer. Just a question. When are you going to write the sequel to Splice, or had you not planned on actually having a sequel.
The only thing I hated about this was the wait. I was literally trying not to check it because though it was only a few days. I was like I want NOW!!
Jaa Mata,
Azriellia.
Author's Response: Ah, yes. There was no pretense that this story would be anything but smut, lol! I'm glad you enjoyed it, though! As far as Splice goes, while there was room for a sequel, maybe, at the end, I never really had plans to write one. I'm pretty happy with where I left the story. Sorry about that!
Date: 02/12/11 08:21 pm Title: Part Two
WOW!!! This was so hot and amazing!!!! I want more! *faints*
Author's Response: I'm so glad you liked it!
Date: 02/12/11 06:26 pm Title: Part Two
Oh, this was simply amazing. Andrej/Bill/Tom must be the best, the hottest, the most beautiful threesome EVER, period.
I am super pleased how well it all played out and I just hope there would be more stories with the twins and Andrej written; the visuals of them three together is brain melting. Ridiculously hot!
THANK YOU!
Author's Response: I hope there are more, as well! Fyredancer mentioned working on one, which I desperately hope she posts. I'm so glad you enjoyed the story, and how it all came together!
Date: 02/12/11 05:56 pm Title: Part Two
Well there you have it. Well done. My applause is yours.
Author's Response: Thank you--I'm glad this second part didn't disappoint!
Date: 02/12/11 05:45 pm Title: Part Two
So. Sexy. *_* I just, you really melted my brains with this. I adored pretty much everything about it, including Bill completely showing Tom up in the sex god department, and melting Tom's brain with the hotness of it all.
So sensual, and I thought the ending struck just the right note. Like, this was JUST enough. *_*
Not to say I wouldn't love another fashion-event follow up, where the twins meet with Andrej again but they're all on more sexually confident even footing. *______* But this was just. Everything I wanted and even a couple things I didn't KNOW I did, until you wrote it this way. It was great that Tom was a bit insecure, for instance, and even ended up comparing himself to Bill. I'll stop babbling. Loved this!
Author's Response: Thank you so much--this is such a lovely review. I got really nervous after I got such a nice response to the first part. I was sure this second part wouldn't live up to it! And I didn't know how everyone would feel about me making Tom a little bit incompetent in bed (lol). Anyway, thank you for being so encouraging with this story, and leaving me such nice feedback! I really appreciate it.
Date: 02/12/11 04:09 pm Title: Part Two
Absolutly amazing!
Author's Response: Thank you!
Date: 02/12/11 03:45 pm Title: Part Two
*faints* oh this chapter is absolutely amazing. I'm happy to see the way it ended too *happy dance*
Author's Response: I'm so glad you liked it!
Date: 02/12/11 03:37 pm Title: Part Two
omg, that was HOT! :DDD you soooo need to write more!! :DDD
Author's Response: I'm so glad you enjoyed it!
Date: 02/12/11 02:27 pm Title: Part Two
OMG! BEST THREESOME EVER! you made my day better.This was so hot, great descriptions &
you didn't disappoint me!
this was amazing okay.. I loved it...
you are amazing..
*gives you cookie*
Author's Response: Ooh, cookie! I'm so glad you liked this, and that the second part lived up to the first!
Date: 02/12/11 01:08 pm Title: Part Two
Beautiful.
xx
Author's Response: Thank you!
Date: 02/12/11 11:50 am Title: Part Two
I have nothing to say but "HOT HOT HOT OMDKFJASLDFHDFOASDF HOT!!"
Guh. I'll return when I'm coherent, I promise!
Author's Response: Haha, glad you liked it!
Date: 02/12/11 11:43 am Title: Part Two
That was beautiful. I really enjoyed it and the ending was absolutely perfect. The way it was all about the twins even with another person there and how Tom was able to read Bill again in the end, it was all beautifully written. Thank you so much for this fic, I really enjoyed it, like everything you write =)
Author's Response: I'm really a twins girl at heart, I guess. I'm so glad you enjoyed the story, and thanks so much for reviewing!
Date: 02/12/11 10:44 am Title: Part Two
So very sweet. It was all sexy and naughty. And I love that Bill was the sexpert here! I love that Bill was awesome in bed and Tom was just ok. Was a perfect first Andrej story. I'm so very pleased.
Author's Response: Haha, I guess you can tell thatI think Tom's all talk! And I love the idea of Bill being the more confident, dominant twin in the bedroom. I'm so glad you enjoyed the conclusion to the story, and thanks so much for reviewing!
Date: 02/12/11 09:14 am Title: Part One
You need encouragement? Is it subject matter or style? Because I'll encourage both. Your writing on this is impressive and the subject matter is new, fresh, original. I think with a story like this the line walked between elegance and cheese is going to be a very wobbly one...kind of like trying to do a field sobriety test five sheets to the wind,but I also believe you have the chops to bring it off. Not just anybody could do it, and that means probably 98% of the authors on this site. It would take a real writer to manage it and I'm not embarrassed to say I think you have what it takes. I don't say that lightly.
Keep going, and keep it good for you. Don't descend into commercial smut for the sake of your readers, but stay on the edge of your own seat. My mantra is this..."If it's boring for you to write, it'll be boring for them to read." As long as you're into it, everyone else will be as well.
I'll be tracking this, and I'm interested as hell in seeing where you go with it. It's beautiful so far. Well done.
Author's Response: Thank you so much. I'm thrilled to hear that you like my writing style.
Date: 02/10/11 04:48 pm Title: Part One
My brain has turned into mush...the only words my mind is supplying me with is I NEED MOAR,please!
...I'm loving the three of them together, Andrej is just insanely beautiful..I have been fangirling over him for a while..
I hope you do finish this soon!
Author's Response: Andrej is just ridiculous, isn't he? Like, how can someone be that beautiful? I'm glad you like the story--I'm trying to get the second part up soon!
Date: 02/07/11 08:42 pm Title: Part One
OMFG, I CAN'T BELIEVE SOMEONE WROTE THIS PAIRING! ANDREJ PEJIC IS TOTALLY BILL'S SECRET BOYFRIEND IN MY MIND! (*_*) THIS IS A DREAM COME TRUE
Author's Response: Haha, they would be SO RIDICULOUSLY BEAUTIFUL together. Even seeing them standing next to each other might give me a heart attack from sheer gorgeousness. I'm so glad you like the story, and thanks for reviewing!
Date: 02/07/11 05:06 pm Title: Part One
Oooh well this was just brilliant! I adored it so so much! I saw your post on LJ about Andrej and pretty much drooled over it for about half an hour. And now I'm going to be drooling over this for the next half an hour xD I'm so so glad you decided to write Bill/Tom/Andrej; seriously *___* You write so so well, it's beautiful and fresh and amazing and SO sexy and I'm really really looking forward to the second chapter of this *needs* Take care!
Author's Response: I'm so glad you like it! I just couldn't bear to pair Andrej with just one of the twins...it wouldn't be right!
Date: 02/07/11 12:06 pm Title: Part One
Oh My God. Dearest Author... PLEASE FINISH THIS.
The UST is killing me. It's just delicious... I can't wait for the rest.
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Author's Response: So glad you like it!
Date: 02/07/11 03:36 am Title: Part One
o/
Amazing! Can't wait for the next chapter! =)
Author's Response: Glad you like it so far!
Date: 02/07/11 12:59 am Title: Part One
I'm obsessed with Andrej Pejic. He is really an amazing model and when I saw your story I knew I had to read it!!!
He is just sooo hot, can't wait for the next part!! :D please continue
Author's Response: He's ridiculously beautiful, and I love the way designers embrace his androgyny. Thanks so much for reading!