Date: 05/12/11 08:03 pm Title: Drag my teeth across your chest to taste your beating heart...
interesting. I would not have guessed that bill ever left ppl alive after reading the first chapter. thanks for the update!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I know that part is a little confusing, but Andreas is the lucky one. Andreas is basically just a living blood bank and a place to crash. Hopefully I can explain that more in the next chapters. Glad you're liking this so far.
Date: 05/11/11 06:43 pm Title: Drag my teeth across your chest to taste your beating heart...
I'm really liking the story so far. I usually tend to avoid vampire fics like the plague (I'm not entirely sure why), but this one just dragged me in.
I think it was the way you narrated Tom's transformation, at the beginning of the first chapter; his whole sensorial intake of the surroundings and this aching need he has to find Bill.
I'm definitely looking forward to read what's next.
Take care!
Author's Response: Goodness your review has certainly left a smile on my face! Thank you so so much for giving this fic a chance. I know what you mean about avoiding vampire fics. I tend to not read them for some reason too but with this prompt I had to at least give it a shot. It's reviews like yours that make my day and make me want to continue writing on this. Thank you so much and I'm glad you're enjoying it.
Date: 05/11/11 06:52 am Title: Drag my teeth across your chest to taste your beating heart...
*-* Ohhhh second chapter :3 Thank you! ^^
Author's Response: hehe you're welcome ^__^ glad you seemed to enjoy it.
Date: 05/11/11 01:43 am Title: Drag my teeth across your chest to taste your beating heart...
eww bad bill. gross, fangs on bone, that gives me sympathy pains. feel bad for andi, he's all...ruined. bill's gone crazy
Author's Response: *pet pet* sorry about that. I know, poor Andi indeed. But that all comes in the territory of being a living blood bank for Bill. Thank you for your review!
Date: 05/11/11 01:16 am Title: The Scent
:( bill's so mean. this looks sad
Author's Response: *pets* Thank you for the review, sorry you found this sad. And yeah, Bill is kinda mean :(
Date: 05/11/11 12:40 am Title: Drag my teeth across your chest to taste your beating heart...
I am so incredibly happy you came back! *jumps excitedly*
This was a beautiful, if short, second chapter! I am intrigued. Is Bill living with Andreas? Why didn't he just go to the coffee shop or upstairs while he waited for Andi? When will we be seeing Tom again?
I am quite anxious to see more. I hope life is going to give you a bit of a break so you can write a bit more. Keep up the good work!
Author's Response: aww *huggles* thank you so much for this review hun. Things have been crazy here and my inspiration faltered for this but hopefully it's back to stay. First of all, yes Bill is living with Andreas. He can't complain about it, free room and a living blood bank, he's happy as a clam with the most of the time. And he wouldn't go out into public, he doesn't want to be seen because of what he is. So he waits for Andreas to close up shop every night. And third, you will be seeing Tom very soon :D I'm very glad that you're happy about this being back up and running, it makes me smile that people enjoy this.
Date: 05/10/11 11:45 pm Title: Drag my teeth across your chest to taste your beating heart...
what a wonderful story i have stumbled upon. poor andi....but i kinda like their relationshsip. i cant wait to see where this goes.
Author's Response: ^____^ yay for stumbling! I'm glad that you're enjoying it so far. I'll try and get another update sometime soon since it seems my inspiration to write this had been revived.
Date: 05/10/11 11:24 pm Title: Drag my teeth across your chest to taste your beating heart...
Wow!!! Bill is so bad. Poor Andreas but I'm curious to read what happens when Tom finds him. What will Bill do?
Author's Response: Thanks so much ^__^ we'll just have to wait and see what happens hehe. Poor Andi indeed *nod nod*
Date: 05/10/11 07:32 pm Title: Drag my teeth across your chest to taste your beating heart...
*dances* Hurry and write more !!!
Author's Response: LOL thanks sallie dear :D
Date: 05/10/11 06:51 pm Title: Drag my teeth across your chest to taste your beating heart...
I'm gonna be honest and say that this chapter was a tad too sexual for me (Billdreas is no) but whatever, it was great anyways. :B
I loveeeee how you showed Bill's unquenchable thirst and we finally really met Andreas as Bill's donor! :D YAY! ♥
Keep up the good work, lovely. :')
Author's Response: *pets* There really isn't any Billdreas though twinny. Yes it's completely sexual but the most Bill is ever is inside Andi is when he feeds from him (can't believe i said that) And Bill is a very sexual person, so that just leaks through. Thanks so much for your review sweetie! :D I'm really glad you liked it!
Date: 04/04/11 04:09 pm Title: The Scent
I love and I hope you update reeeeal soon.
Author's Response: *hides* i'm sorry horrible. This is one of the few projects that's giving me difficulty on writing. I'm glad you like it so far, and hopefully you'll stick around for an update when I finally get it written out. thank you for the review!
Date: 02/05/11 11:18 pm Title: The Scent
I'm interested. Keep goin ;0)
Author's Response: eh i thought i would just leave it like that... no no no wait im kidding *clings* stay for more chapters yes?... ok in all seriousness new chapter will be up fairly soon-ish :3 (my muses like to run away from me sometimes. I swear I need those child harnesses for them)
Date: 02/05/11 10:46 pm Title: The Scent
As the first chapter I was intrigued by the description of movements and the storyline. It's original and well written. I was enchanted, the story itself is interesting, I can't wait to read other chapters *-*
Author's Response: Thank you so much for your review. I'm really glad you're enjoying it so far. Thank you for such kind words. I hope that you will stick around for future chapters.
Date: 02/05/11 02:20 pm Title: The Scent
very interested premise, i look forward to more. =)
Author's Response: thank you :)
Date: 02/05/11 02:15 am Title: The Scent
It was insane when I saw this prompt cuz literally a few days before I was thinking wouldn't it be awesome if one of the boys was a vamp and the other a were?...and as soon as I went to put it up someone already had and you already accepted...it feels like it was fate...
I thought you did beautifully for the first chapter. Though seeing as the boys are naturally dirty blode I would've thought Toms wolf form would've been a tan or lighter brown color as opposed to black.
I can't wait to see where all you take this and I am anxious to find out how these accidents happened! Keep up the wonderful work!
Author's Response: *gnaws nails* i knew someone was going to ask me that. I couldn't resist making him a black wolf. I mean I know all wolves are beautiful but there's just something more beautiful and alluring about a black wolf. I hope you're able to overlook that.rnrnIt makes me happy that you're excited about finding out more. Hope you stick around to find out what happens and that you're able to enjoy future chapters. Thank you for the review!
Date: 02/05/11 02:13 am Title: The Scent
Great first chapter! This is really interesting so far. Looking forward to more.
Author's Response: Thank you for the review. I'm happy that you're liking it so far. More will come fairly soon im sure.
Date: 02/04/11 08:07 pm Title: The Scent
This is AMAZING!! It also reminds me of a video on you tube called bloody brothers. it has Bill as a vampire and Tom a wolf.
Author's Response: funny that you mentioned that. That video is actually what the prompt I'm writing off of is based off of. So i'm EXTREMELY happy that this is what it reminds you of *does a happy dance* I'm glad you're liking this so far as well. stick around, hopefully you'll enjoy my future chapters.
Date: 02/04/11 05:17 pm Title: The Scent
ohhh! next chap hurry!
Author's Response: hehe it will be up in the next day or two :3
Date: 02/04/11 02:46 pm Title: The Scent
*waves #1 fan flag* :D :D I love this fic so much already, and my present I got for making the banner ;)
I can't wait, REALLY cannot wait until there is more for me to beta on tihs. I've never been so excited to beta a fic before. xD
Keep up the amazing work, Twinny! I love you! ♥
Author's Response: *tacklehugs* thank you twinny! i love you too. I'll try and keep up the work i promise. as long as you stay on my case about it and continue to beta lol. I'm glad youre excited about being my beta as well as being a reader.
Date: 02/04/11 11:07 am Title: The Scent
O_O *squeals!* Holy smoke that was fast! Oh my goodness, thank you! This, for the first chapter, is pretty much how I envisioned it. Keep up the good work! ^^
Author's Response: EEP! *peeks out from under desk*... you like it? EEEE! *dances around room* I am so relieved that you enjoyed this. It always make me nervous that the author of the prompts will never like what I write or that I'll get it wrong. Thank you so much for your review, it really means a lot to me. I'll keep it up the best I can ^___^ and by the way THANK YOU for giving me the opportunity to write this.