Date: 03/13/11 04:07 pm Title: Chapter 6
Now that was something new from there usual... Thing!
I am soooooooo pissed off with Tom right now. Sooooooo pissed off I wanna bite his head off. Just... I don't like him using Bill like that, for experimenting just like that. Bill really felt used after being left just like that!! It's annoying. Poor Bill.. *pats head* Imma go find a nice girlfeiend for you, Bill...*huggles* But I wish Bill could learn to resist more or gain a backbone and just totally refuse - but then his attachment to his brother and curiosity at the same time get ahead of him. Teens. *le sigh*
Can't wait for the next!! (Actually, just for another jealous!Tow when Bill's w/someone else heeeee) Great chapter nonetheless:D
Author's Response:
Hahaha! Yeah Tom makes me wanna bang his head on the wall and hope some sense gets in there. He's just feeling above his brother right now, you know, feeling like he's too good for Bill. But under there somewhere, he still cares for Bill, he just likes to pretend he doesn't. You'll see later. :) And yeah, Bill used to be very dependant on Tom when they were younger so he still kind of clings on and can't let go. But that's just for a while longer; there's a change in the air *spooky feeling*. And soon enough (well, somewhere after the 17th chapter actually, since I have already written up till then and that part of the plot isn't too flexible), Bill will be somewhat turning the tables on Tom.. sort of...
Date: 03/13/11 01:49 pm Title: Chapter 6
D:
Author's Response:
DDDD: I hope the sad face was for poor Bill and not my writing... ^_^
Date: 03/09/11 03:26 am Title: The Date
Oh how I would love for Bill to smack Tom in the face with the towel-he deserves that...and much more!
Author's Response:
XD Unfortunately there will be no face smacking no matter how much Tom does deserve to be smacked upside the head. Thank you for reviewing!
Date: 03/09/11 01:25 am Title: The Date
:D IM EXCITED.
Author's Response:
:D Wonderful! Thanks for the review!
Date: 03/08/11 05:04 am Title: The Date
=) yay for awkward first dates. thanks for the update!
Author's Response:
XD Yes it was pretty awkward, wasn't it? I'm glad I've never had to experience something like that. Thanks for the review!
Date: 03/07/11 09:41 pm Title: The Date
Aww.. Poor Bill. The date didn't go well. Really awkward. It would have been better if he somewhat likes the girl and not just pick someone random. Or maybe he has no particular attraction to girls at all and he doesn't know it yet?:D
Bill drops the towel and smacks Tom with it. PLEASE!! *puppy eyes* Looool..XD Then they could wrestle and do dirtier things *evil grin* I still want Bill to have a girlfriend though... Someone friendly and kind to him:D So Tom gets riled up or something..XD
I can't wait for the next oooooone.. *bounces* *flails*
Author's Response:
XD Ah yes awkward date was awkward. *pets Bill* Yeah he didn't even like Bianca, so..... and maybe he doesn't like girls at all...? ah the mystery! Bill is being very naive and dependant on Tom a lot for the moment, but I plan to have him break free and grow a pair soon enough.
rnUnfortunately, Bill has been brought up on the belief that violence is never the answer, hence no towel-to-face smacks shall occur. :( Nor shall there be wrestling. BUT, there shall indeed be sexy times in the next chapter! :D I'm getting more and more keen to the idea of giving Bill a nice girlfriend like you want actually. Seems like a good way for Bill to start stepping out of Tom's shadow. And it's an excuse for more jealous!Tom!! :D
rnThank you for the lovely review!
Date: 03/01/11 05:19 pm Title: To get a girlfriend or not get a girlfriend
jealous and possessive Tom! That is always a bit exiting ;) even though i worries me a bit too in this story, he's almost scary sometimes. Poor confused Bill!
Author's Response:
Mmm, I do love a little jealous and possessive Tom! Yeah Tomi may be a little mean and scary right now, but it'll get better! *pets Bill* Thanks for the review!
Date: 03/01/11 03:47 am Title: To get a girlfriend or not get a girlfriend
Tom's not being a jerk, he's just jealous. I loved this chapter, I think its great and reveals a lot, whether the boys realize it or not. Keep up the great work!!
Author's Response:
Yes, indeed he is jealous! And yup it did give some insight into the boys! ^_^ Thanks for reviewing!
Date: 02/28/11 09:44 pm Title: The Differences
bill should get a girlfriend!! and then tom would get jealous!! but it aint my story so i guess you deside.
Update aigan soon i'm tracking you!
Date: 02/28/11 09:43 pm Title: The Differences
bill should get a girlfriend!! and then tom would get jealous!! but it aint my story so i guess you deside.
Update aigan soon i'm tracking you!
Author's Response:
I am leaning more and more towards Bill getting a girlfriend; it wasn't originally my intention, but I'm thinking there's a big possibility it'll happen! Thank you!
Date: 02/28/11 07:58 pm Title: To get a girlfriend or not get a girlfriend
bill should get a girlfrined to make tom jelous . and tom should probab;ly stop being so mean
Author's Response:
I'm actually considering giving Bill a girlfriend for a while since many reviewers would like to see that. And Tom will come to his senses soon enough :D Thanks for reviewing!
Date: 02/28/11 07:42 pm Title: To get a girlfriend or not get a girlfriend
Bill should get a girlfriend, thinking it would just be unfair to not experience that and because he has the right to.. Then have this drama with Tom like, "You can't decide that for me, it's MY life!!" - and all the shizz.. Lol.
And then Tom would get upset and possessive he'll do anything to rip Bill and the girl apart. And then Bill gets upset with Tom when it happens.
Mehh I just like to mess up with Tom cuz he's being possessive with Bill here. And he should stop being a jerk and using Bill like that!!! Bill's his twin, not his personal jerk toy, ya know.. Bad Tomi!! But it's your story soooo.. Heeeee..XD
Author's Response:
:DDD It wasn't originally my intention for Bill to get a girlfriend, but I'm starting to rethink... And drama with Tom shall happen in the future! I know Tomi is being such a butthead XD (for some reason I giggled when I wrote 'butthead') Aaanyway, Tom will get his priorities in order later on in the fic. In the meantime he'll continue to be a jerk... Thanks for reviewing!
Date: 02/28/11 02:44 pm Title: To get a girlfriend or not get a girlfriend
i LOVE jealous Tom!
Bill should get a girlfriend
and Tom should be a jerk, and so jealous he turnes green!
And Bill should grow a pair ;)
Author's Response:
:D Jealous Tom is fun to write and read about! All your wishes shall come true... eventually... :P It'll take some time, but things will work out... Thank you for the review!
Date: 02/28/11 02:20 pm Title: To get a girlfriend or not get a girlfriend
I would love to see Tom stop being a jerk, and hopefully thats part of the story! Tom is so possessive and jealous of Bill...I think he doesn't want anyone else to have Bill or Bill to want anyone else
Author's Response:
Well, Tom will stop being such a jerk... eventually.. :D Don't worry he'll come to his senses. And yes, he's way too possessive of Bill. Thanks for the review!
Date: 02/22/11 04:27 am Title: Bullies and Zombie Movies
I think it was a good chapter. I liked the moment of them holding hands. =) Thanks for the update.
Author's Response:
^^ I'm glad you like it! And I like the hand holding moment too! Thank you for the review!
Date: 02/21/11 11:04 pm Title: Bullies and Zombie Movies
Poor Billy it just seems like Tom is using him in this to experiment
Author's Response:
Poor Billy, indeed... :( Tom is pretty much a big jerk in this story, and you're pretty much spot on! (for now)
Date: 02/21/11 10:47 pm Title: Bullies and Zombie Movies
I realllly like this story. Can't wait to read the next chapter!
Author's Response:
Thank you for reviewing! And I put the next chapter up just now!
Date: 02/14/11 12:07 am Title: Intimate
Thanks for the update, I can't wait for more!
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review dear! I'm glad you're following this!
Date: 02/13/11 01:58 pm Title: Intimate
I'm really glad you updated! I always like stories about the twins before they were famous. And I'm really enjoying this one. Can't wait to read the next chapter!
Author's Response:
XD This is pretty much the only chaptered fic of mine that I can actually update more or less on schedule! I'm mighty proud of that fact! I love stories about them before Tokio Hotel too! I'm glad you like it so far! Thanks for reviewing!
Date: 02/13/11 12:37 pm Title: Intimate
So anxious to see where you go with this! I'm hoping Bill will get pissed at being treated this way and make Tom regret it, one way or another!!
Author's Response:
I do hope you'll like the direction I take this little baby of mine! And about Bill making Tom regret it; all in due time! ;) Thanks for reviewing!