Date: 03/29/11 01:27 pm Title: Rejection
I've been waiting for-ever for Bill to reject Tom, this was my favorite chapter so far :) and Bill and his mum were watching Dr. Phil of course! :D
Date: 03/28/11 05:39 am Title: Rejection
I'm proud of Bill for saying no and standing up for himself, even if he is conflicted about it afterward. I look forward to seeing tom's reaction. Maybe it will make him not take Bill so for granted. thanks for the update!
Date: 03/28/11 12:54 am Title: Rejection
Wow-way to go Bill!I just hope that didn't buy him more trouble from douche bag Tom!
Date: 03/27/11 11:10 pm Title: Rejection
Heeeeeeeeeeeee :D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D
UNF. Glad you updated!! Feels like forever waiting!! Ahahahaha..XD Seriously, my anticipation for this fic is just... I'm always on the edge, ya know??? That's bloody torture!!
The moment of rejection has arrived!! I have to say I'm really glad Bill refused Tom. Even though he had to be a bit violent. Well Tom's a jerk and only thinks of his dick, he wouldn't understand if Bill said NO. The asshole. I understand Bill's guilt and weariness about their bond totally slipping into... Into nothingness if any of those acts stopped (even I miss it now but that's just my perv side talking!!:P). But it's better this way ya know!!! He can't just let himself be used like that and be made fun of in the next! It's self-preservation. He'd destroy himself if it didn't stop, and things could only grow worse - unless Tom realizes what kind of fuckery he was doing. Asshole. And Bill rejecting Tom for the first time should make Tom use his head - or his true brain for the first time in thinking what the hell is the problem. HE is the problem. Ugh. The jerk!!! Well maybe... Bill could voice out what he's really feeling about the issue? Give Tom a piece of his mind? And if Tom doesn't get it, well what a dumbfuck he is! Hmmmmph!
I don't know what the talk show is. Wetten Das? Lol..XD ANYWAYS.
Lol I'm very anxious about Bill getting a girlfriend, yes..XD Cuz HER purpose is to make Tom jealous, angsty and guilty. Hahahaha..XD Sorry if I sound like nagging when I mention it..D: I just can't help it. It's one great weapon against Tom being a a total dickhead. I'd feel sorry for the girl though, cuz she's like... Just a pawn(?) or a trigger, and would be left later, but I shall think and be guiltu of it later when we come to that part!:P I just really like Tom being messed up in the head - and ya know, chip his heart a little on the side. Reduce him to a sincere, honest-in-love type of person, begging. Revenge!!! How bittersweet!!! Bwahahahaha-*cough*
Can't wait for the Rise of Bill!!XD Hope he gets a lovely girl Tom would gladly kill with glares hahahahaha..XD
Thanks so much for the update!:D And now, I have to wait again:( *rocks self in a corner*
Date: 03/27/11 06:25 pm Title: Rejection
incredible chapter...i think bill was right to react in the way he did..
you have a great writing style and I really 'felt' Bill's emotions.
I love this story and I am *tracking*
I can't wait for more :)
Date: 03/27/11 06:19 pm Title: Rejection
I like that Bill reacted like he did. His action to push Tom away took a lot of strength, and I'm glad Bill is starting to grow a backbone. Sure, he's full of conflicted feelings over it, but Tom needs to stop treating Bill like a blowup doll. I think that Bill pushing Tom away shifts something in their relationship, which will hopefully become more healthy.
No idea as to the talk show.
Great chapter! Reading this story is really flexing my emotion-analyzing muscle.
Date: 03/27/11 06:10 pm Title: Chapter 6
hey
*waves*
new reader here and I am loving this story...
This was a great chapter. Its very hot and I'm feeling a mixture of anger and sadness...
Tom you asshole, come back! and poor bill :(
Date: 03/27/11 05:14 pm Title: Rejection
I love that Bill standed up for himself. You should make him do that more often and, Tom should think it's....sexy or something?? And start to respect him more and, treat him right.
Date: 03/27/11 04:51 pm Title: Rejection
Oh goodness. Bill finally stood his ground! Hopefully Tom won't be too much of a dick to him because of it. Great chapter! Can't wait for the next one :)
Date: 03/27/11 04:47 pm Title: The Differences
Yay go bill!!! he finally stood up for himself! :D
I love this story it's so unique and interesting.
I can't wait till the next chapter. keep it up!
Date: 03/23/11 02:12 am Title: Practice
GAHHHHH...soooo what does happen next?!?! I will be anxiously waiting to find out!!!
Author's Response:
:P I submitted the next chapter just a short while ago, so you'll find out soon! ;) Thanks for the review!
Date: 03/22/11 07:40 pm Title: Practice
My heart is breaking for Bill. Poor boy!
Author's Response:
Poor Bibi :( His brother's a meany! Thanks for reviewing!
Date: 03/22/11 07:05 pm Title: Practice
I've been waiting for an update for days!!! Hahahaha thanks so much for this:D But...
WHY O WHY END THEEEEERRRE??? It leaves me hanging and begging for mooooooooorrrre..@_@
Oh, Bill:( *huggles*
The poor kid. He doesn't deserve any of those. He's a sweet kid. I kinda get the feeling of being left outD: And Tom! I wanna smack him on the head, punch his gut and rip his balls for being such an uncaring, inconsiderate jerk of a twin!! He's going to pay for it soon enough>:( I really hate it when guys talk like that like it's the most important thing in the world. Stupid boys and their boy talks>:( Stupid.
Will you be putting Bill on Star Search here? Just asking:3 Just thought Bill needs to be stronger for himself and gain more confidence. Maybe him doing Star Search will give him more confidence. People will notice him more (yeah, I know it will attract mean boys too but there are also others) Maybe meeting a new friend would do him better. And I still want a girlfriend for him - lol sorry if I keep pressing on the matter I just can't stand him being lonely anymore. Someone who can appreciate and treat him better. And again, to spite Tom and make him jealous and make him realize how Bill felt. I don't like to see Bill bending on Tom's will all the time. Ugh I really want to hit Tom to a bloody pulp (violent much!)
I truly can't wait for the next update. I swear. *sits in a corner)O_O
Author's Response:
XD Hahaha! Well, the next chapter should be up shortly, so.... yeah, the new chapter is... interesting, I guess. :P
rnI know! Bill is such an innocent thing and all he wants is for Tom to love him, and Tom that jerk is being... well, like a jerk. Wow, you're pretty violent, eh? XD Yup, boys and their boy-talk. It really is disgusting how some guys talk about sex and girls like that is the only thing in the world that they need... :S
rnWell, no, I won't write about him being on Star Search, but the band will get signed and all, and you know, when they're recording in the little apartment in Hamburg that they showed in that Devilish interview training video thingy on Youtube... well, Bill will get exposure, make new friends, and.... a girlfriend!! That's the plan anyway, so instead of Star Search we're gonna skip forward and have him get confidence and make friends and all in a more independant way than through Star Search. :P (Did you even understand what I wrote? I read through it again, and even I'm a little confused... :X). You're really anxious for him to get a girlfriend, huh? XD Never fear, Bill will get a nice girl and Tom will. be. sorrry! Mwahahahaha! >:D
rnThanks for the review!!! :*
Date: 03/22/11 04:46 pm Title: Practice
Poor Bill. Teenage boys are so mean. Thanks for the update I can't wait for more!
Author's Response:
Indeed, teenage boys can be pretty darn mean. But I think Tom's in a whole new level. Thank you for reviewing!
Date: 03/22/11 03:27 pm Title: Practice
for one, how dare you be late? lol jk. this is a great story! i'd looove some moreee. you know maybe you could update early a few times since you've been late. :D? just a thought... hahaha anyway, keep up the good work.
Author's Response:
:P Thanks for the review! And with the way I can hardly be on time when I don't even have an excuse, you expect me to be able to post a chapter early? Get real! XDDD Hahaha! jk!
Date: 03/14/11 09:03 pm Title: Chapter 6
poor Bill. great chapter though and I'll trust you when you say it will all turn out in the end.
Author's Response:
Poor Bill indeed. Thanks for reviewing, and yes don't worry, I like happy endings! ^_^
Date: 03/14/11 11:50 am Title: Chapter 6
Permission to de-ball Tom...please? He's such a douche...so ready to read what happens next!
Author's Response:
Permission granted! XD Ah, yes I love douche!Tom... in moderation... as long as he comes to his senses in the end!
Date: 03/14/11 06:37 am Title: Chapter 6
My god he's an ass!! You kind of want to slap them both, Tom for being a jerk and Bill for being so gullible! But I wont, because I'm too curious to see where you take this ;)
Author's Response:
I knooow! I kinda wanna kick them both too! If you slap Tom, he'll punch you back, and if you slap Bill.... he'll probably pull your hair or something... :D Thanks for reviewing!
Date: 03/13/11 06:19 pm Title: Chapter 6
poor billa :(
Author's Response:
I know... *sniff* :(
Date: 03/13/11 04:17 pm Title: Chapter 6
Bill's so darn shy and awkward! Bill needs to realize sometime that he has great weapons in his arsenal to use against Tom, to ensure Tom will never pay attention to anyone else ever again. Like just then, if he'd put on a show to finish himself off, maybe Tom wouldn't have even gone to the phone. But then it wouldn't be much of a story and plotline, wouldn't it?
Keep up the lovely work!~
Author's Response:
Hahaha! Bill is lacking a little too much self confidence because he depended a lot on Tom when they were younger and closer, so now he feels lost and stuffs. But yeah. he totally has the means to get Tom to pay attention to him, he's just unsure of himself... at the moment... :D But soon enough, things will change! Thanks for reviewing!