Date: 05/12/11 03:17 pm Title: Chapter 12
I loved this chapter!! It was so good!
I especially loved the Tom and Allie moment at the end ha.ha.ha I can't wait to find out what will happen next between them. I knew he liked her and she liked him, I mean who wouldn't lol.
WOW! I can't believe you do that xD Awe thank you you're so sweet!! You're special too ^-^ Anyway please keep up your wonderful and fantastically marvelous writing and update real soon!!
Author's Response: THank you *bows* (j/k)rnPatience patience...updates will come when updates are ready : ) haharnI've got to make sure I've got them covered in Awesomesauce before I feed them to the public : )
Date: 05/11/11 09:07 am Title: Chapter 11
I loved it!! It was sweet and nice of Tom to make sure Allie was okay and to stay with her aww. I can tell they sorta like each other. It was good that she was able to open up to Tom. I can't wait for the next chapter, I wonder what they'll do hmm..? ;) Please keep up your stupendous writing and update real soon!
Omg! Ha.ha.ha Do you really over check the site just to see if I reviewed? That makes me feel so special eep!! *does little happy dance in chair*
Awe Thank you!! I'm so happy to know that I am able to make your day, your absolutely a marvelous writer and an incredible person as well and you're AWESOMESAUCE too!!! =D
Author's Response: Thank you! I've already got the next chapter half written... so soon... : )rnYes I really really do. You are special : ) and of course AWESOMESAUCE!!! : )
Date: 05/03/11 08:28 pm Title: Chapter 10
I LOVED IT!
Awe poor Allie she really did love Landon with all her heart :( I can't wait for more. This story gets better and better and freakin better everytime I read it. I really do love it and please keep up your fabulous writing and update real soon!!! ^-^ Its so close to the race eep!!
Author's Response: You have no idea how much you make my day. I overcheck this site to see if you've reviewed : ) You're encouraging and wonderful... and AWESOMESAUCE! : )
Date: 05/02/11 09:02 pm Title: Chapter 9
I loved it, I don't see how this chapter was awkward. It was really good.
I think it was so cute how Bill was all excited about going on his date with Annie. I MOST DEFINITELY CAN NOT wait for the big race eep!!! Congratz on finishing up your semester and on the new job :) Anyway please keep up your marvelous writing and update real soon!
Author's Response: I wrote it at like 1 a.m. Sunday morning, it didn't seem right in my head, but I didn't know what to do with it, so I'm glad you like it : )
Date: 04/27/11 09:42 am Title: Chapter 7
Awe man that's so effing awesome well not the Nikki Sixx spelling your name wrong but yea ha.ha.ha I think Tom would be a great guy for her and she should really get to know him with out being wasted lol. Anyway please keep up your kick ass writing and update real soon I definitely can not wait for more!! Eepp!!!
Author's Response: It was awesome and I'll definetly update soon...we're getting to the point now! I just gotta get through 3 more exams and I'm out of school. Yay for summer : )
Date: 04/18/11 03:14 am Title: Prolouge
Thanks for shout out... and i love that "Lips are for true lovers"... i mean kiss in the lips must share between true lovers its the way how they express their feelings... and can't wait for the race part...
Author's Response: I'm glad you liked that, it's important in the next couple of chapters... and the race is coming!!! we're almost there... : )
Date: 04/17/11 08:14 pm Title: Chapter 7
AWE THANKS YOU are TOTALLY MORE AWESOMESAUCE!!! ^-^ awe lucky you got to see Nikk Sixx I always thought he was so cute. Anyway ha.ha. I loved this chapter and story. I feel so sad for Allie, she's having such a hard time with what was said in the letter from her mom. I completely agree with Annie I don't think Allie should be treating her body like its worthless either. I can't wait to find out what will happen next. Please keep up your fantastical writing and update real soon :D
Author's Response: Nikki was AWESOME! He was so nice! He spelled my name wrong when he signed my book, but he noticed and corrected it and was super cool about it ~lol~ he's a great guy. rnWe're getting into Allie's troubles next chapter I think. There's a story there we need to know...it's sad though.. : ( I'll hopefully have it up in 1 week or less, no promises but I'm trying!rnrn
Date: 04/17/11 06:30 pm Title: Prolouge
I loved it ! can't wair for the racing part!!!
Author's Response: Thank you! We're getting there ~lol~ Slowly but surely : )
Date: 04/16/11 12:30 pm Title: Chapter 6
Awe thanks for the shout out! ^-^ This is story is so AWESOMESAUCE! I loved it!Man I totally can't wait to find out what will happen next between Tom and Allie. Eep! I'm so excited. Anyway keep up your wonderful-fantastic- and-brilliant writing and update real soon and its so TOTALLY AWESOME! that you get to see Nikki Sixx :D
Author's Response: You're totally Awesomesauce! and Nikki Sixx was cool : )
Date: 04/14/11 10:12 am Title: Chapter 5
It wasn't cheesy in the slightest. Awe thanks you rock too!!!! ;) I loved this chapter it was like really short but still good I can't wait to read more and get to all the fun stuff anyway please keep up you great writing and update real soon!!
Date: 03/29/11 03:47 am Title: Chapter 4
i love this chapter.... so sweet mom and dad...
Author's Response: Thank you : ) I'm glad you're still reading and reviewing : )
Date: 03/28/11 09:06 pm Title: Chapter 4
I loved it!! It really good. And the ending of the chapter was sweet. I can't wait for the next the chapter. Please keep up your wonderful writing and update real soon!! and you're welcome I love to encourage the wonderful writers on this site to keep up there AMAZING writing :)
Author's Response: I'm glad you thought it was sweet, I was afraid it might be kind of cheesy, but it needs to be there for the important stuff later on. : ) You ROCK!
Date: 03/24/11 06:53 pm Title: Chapter 3
I loved it! Okay so I was a little confused but is Alexandria Allie? And I can't wait til the dinner when Tom and Allie meet again lol. Please keep up your amazing writing and update real soon :)
Author's Response: Yes, Alexandria is Allie. Thanks for your reviews! You're so encouraging, and the next chapter should be up very soon because I'm on a writing roll today : )
Date: 03/22/11 02:56 pm Title: Chapter 2
Nice chapter I can't wait for the next chapter when Allie will be racing I bet Tom will be really surprised!! Please keep up your excellent writing and update soon. I'm really loving this story :)
Author's Response: I'm so glad you like it! Definetly more good stuff from here, and not so much brattiness from the band... : )
Date: 03/22/11 03:15 am Title: Chapter 2
exciting story... definitely will track this story..... nice one....
Author's Response: Thank you very much : )
Date: 03/13/11 07:34 am Title: Chapter 1
Yay!!! You updated!!! I liked a little longer but I still liked it. I can't wait to know what will happen next and find out how the band reacts to Alli. Keep up the great writing and update real soon :)
Author's Response: Thanks for the encouragement! The next chapter should be a bit longer, and it probably won't take me as long. It's going to be more fun! : )
Date: 02/03/11 04:49 pm Title: Prolouge
It was short but i liked it
i wouldn't mind reading more and read where this story goes. Please keep it up and update soon :)
Author's Response: Definetly. Thank you : )