Date: 07/20/11 08:28 am Title: Chapter 14
This chapter made me breathless for the second time. I knew it was going to happen but I just wasn't expecting it somehow. Great story my sweet. I loved it so much. :)
Date: 06/20/11 09:21 am Title: Chapter 13
Another amazing chapter sweetie. You might want to change their last name from Schatten to Kaulitz though. lol Poor Tom. I hate what Bill is doing to his brother. It's so sad. More soon please. :)
Author's Response: Thanks you Maril. Oh yes, thanks for letting me know, I completely forgot about that. Thank you for the review.
Date: 06/20/11 08:20 am Title: Chapter 13
Wow ! This is pretty cool ! Can't wait for the next chapter :)
Author's Response: I'm glad you like it! And thanks for the review :)
Date: 06/07/11 08:21 am Title: Chapter 12
Poor Tom. He's just looking out for his brother's interests. Bill is sure changing a lot and I don't like it one bit. :)
Author's Response: Thank you for reading Maril, I really appreciate it.
Date: 05/22/11 09:41 am Title: Chapter 11
Another wonderful chapter sweetie. I feel so sorry for Tom. Bill's drifting further and further away from him and it seems there's nothing he can do. Love it. :)
Date: 05/03/11 07:45 pm Title: Chapter 10
Great chapter sweetie. Bill is changing and I don't think Tom is liking it very much. I'm finding so much that I don't remember from the first time. I'm not sure if it's because I read it so long ago or because of old age. Nevertheless, I will now need another chapter soon please. b29;
Author's Response: Thanks for reading and reviewing as always Mazza. Good news, because as we speak another chapter is being approved :)
Date: 04/25/11 12:31 am Title: Chapter 9
Happy Easter sweetie! I had ham, scalloped potatoes, carrots, green beans, swiss chard and apple pie. It was delish! :D Well this is another awesome chapter and it's kind of sad the way that Bill is pulling away from Tom. I'm so glad that I can only remember snippets for this story so it's like reading it for the first time. Love it and you. :)
Author's Response: Thanks Mazza :) Your Easter sounded wonderful! That's always good :) Love you too!
Date: 04/17/11 11:20 am Title: Chapter 8
Drake scares the hell out of me. This was another great chapter. This story is so good and I love reading it again. More soon please my sweet. :)
Author's Response: How rude of me, I haven't even replied! I'm glad it's still good for you Maril :) Thank you.
Date: 04/08/11 10:18 pm Title: Chapter 7
Uh oh! What the heck is going to happen next? Bill was off in never never land. :) Another great chapter sweetie. I shall await another installment. :)
Author's Response: Dun dun dun! Lol. *in man voice* Yes you'll have to wait for another installment of... IN YOU SHADOW.... Don't mind me ;) Love ya Mazza.
Date: 03/26/11 08:05 pm Title: Chapter 6
I'd quite forgotten how good this story really is. This was a wonderful chapter sweetie. You're starting to flesh Mara out a little. Interesting! :)
Author's Response: Aw, thanks as always Mazza :)
Date: 03/20/11 02:28 pm Title: Chapter 5.
Finally got around to reading this latest chapter. As usual it's wonderful and I look forward to the next one. It's a good thing I only remember bits and pieces of this from when I first read it. Now it feels like a brand new story. :)
Author's Response: As always thanks for reading and commenting Mazza :)
Date: 03/06/11 11:24 am Title: Chapter 4
Fascinating chapter sweetie. I loved this the first time but I wasn't really reading it for the story just to beta it. This time I get to enjoy the story just for the story and I really am enjoying this. More soon please. :)
Author's Response: Aw, thanks Mazza. Glad it's alright reading this the second time :)
Date: 03/06/11 03:52 am Title: Chapter 4
Oh my I feel bad for Azaria, what ever happened to the baby she conceived? Drake is an asshole >:-( and necromancy that's some scary stuff (I know people who perform those type of rituals) scary stuff!!
Author's Response: I don't think they got so far as to conceiving the child. I know right?! Really, that would be very scary. I was looking it up for this I was reading about some one the stuff, creepy! Thanks for your review as always :)
Date: 02/22/11 05:46 pm Title: Chapter 3
What a sweetheart Tom was even though he teased Bill about being hungover. Just a small note. Tom is 10 minutes older than Bill not 37. This was another amazing chapter sweetie. What's going to happen between Bill and the girl? :)
Author's Response: Oh yes, I forgot about that, I'm still in Drew and Xavier mode xD Oh well, Ican't be fucked changing it, ha! Have you forgotten already? Oh well it was a while since you proof read it for me!
Date: 02/22/11 01:48 am Title: Chapter 3
Aww poor Bill update again!
Author's Response: Thanks for the review, and I'll try and update as soon as I can.
Date: 02/11/11 11:50 am Title: Chapter 2
COOL! Just waiting for this mystery to resolve itself (tho I have a hunch already). :)
Author's Response: Thanks for the review and reading :)
Date: 02/11/11 09:33 am Title: Chapter 2
This story is just as good the second time reading. I love the suspense, like how did she know Bill's name? More very soon sweetie. I'm addicted.
Author's Response: :) Thanks Mazza.
Date: 02/10/11 03:31 pm Title: Chapter 2
ohh i like it! hmm going throu the ch., i like ur writting. u have a lot of potencial, a style u find in good books. i want to say more but my minde is asleep so next time :DD cant w8 for more :D
Author's Response: Thanks very much. I'd love to publish a book one day - maybe after I retire from Journalism. Glad you want more, thanks for the review :)
Date: 02/10/11 02:33 pm Title: Chapter 2
Who's the mystery girl? Hmm :-/ I'm very suspicious about this woman. And I don't recall Bill giving her his name :-/
Update!!
Author's Response: She's pretty suspicious eh? ;) Thanks for reviewing :)
Date: 02/10/11 02:23 pm Title: Intro + Chapter 1.
Woah! O_o that's just weird he has been having the same dream for years now and barely now he tells Tom?? What?! And he even knows who the killer is?? He should tell Tom...wait! What if the killer IS BILL?!! O_O
Author's Response: Well all I can say is you'll have to keep reading to find out. But thank for both reading and reviewing :)