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Reviewer: pinkyth Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/26/12 05:31 pm Title: "I'm expensive"

Loved it <3 so yummy I love when Bill is slutty *u*

Reviewer: Raiju Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/08/11 10:49 am Title: "I'm expensive"

Oh, how this was worth the agonizing wait! This piece was my reward for finishing my last project, and what a reward it was! It was all steamy and serious until the pants- such a Bushido thing to do and it really made me crack up at the end XD Great job!

Author's Response: Oh, well, thank you very much, I'm glad you enjoyed :D

Reviewer: Martsa Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/02/11 04:34 pm Title: "I'm expensive"

Cute & dirty, a winning combination b29; I like.

Reviewer: FeNice Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/02/11 01:39 pm Title: "I'm expensive"

Oh, this was good! *_* I'm always happy to find good Billshido fics like this one here on THF, there aren't many. You did a great job!
I loved the characterizations, with Bu being rough and possessive, but also caring and protective. And when he told Bill he loved him in Arabic (did I get that right?), oh God, you totally had me there!
It was also good because I didn't expect all of that "whore" thing at the beginning to be all a game! I was thinking this was an AU fic or something, and then Bill talked about not wanting to play anymore, calling Anis by his name, and I was like "OMG it's Billshido for real, then!" XD Yeah, I know, I'm stupid like that *facepalm*
Well, thank you for the good Billshido, I needed it ;)

Author's Response: Didn't think people would even like this, it was just an idea stuck in my mind but well, glad you liked it. I always try to keep my characters as real as possible so I spend I lot of time watching videos in order to know how they really are and I guess it worked just right. And yes, Bu said I love you in his mother language, I find it hot anyway XDrnPay attention, cuz another Billshido is coming! ;)

Reviewer: caro4ever Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/02/11 07:34 am Title: "I'm expensive"

it was super,i would havr never thought english was not your first language;)

Author's Response: Thanks, and yes, I don't spak english as my mother language but I try to do my best.

Reviewer: bmccray Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/01/11 08:27 am Title: "I'm expensive"

This was hot! I loved the ending. Ooooh! The next one-shot maybe have Tom walk in on Bushido and Bill when there in the moment. Tom just freaks out. That would be funny!

Author's Response: I'm very glad you liked it. And about the sugestion, I don't promise anything but yes, I have a thing planned with the twins and Bushido ;)rnThanks for reading!

Reviewer: haenni89 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/01/11 06:03 am Title: "I'm expensive"

awesome. I love it. *___*

Author's Response: Well thank you very much.

Reviewer: jamillkaulitz Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/01/11 05:47 am Title: "I'm expensive"

:D.. I love BILLSHIDO... i had fun reading this story... thank you, for sharing it.. :)

Author's Response: Good to know there're some billshido fans out there. Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: jaenkaulitz Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/01/11 05:12 am Title: "I'm expensive"

A really great job and I mean it. The characterizations were really GOOD and the way you made it is just... mesmerizing.

I found one little mistake: In english you never put the action before the one person that is talking:

“Turn around, baby” said the man against the singer’s lips after biting gently the lower one; after a pout and a husky chuckle the singer complied and turned around slowly to flop on his belly, looking back at the other male. He almost whined when Bushido stood up and walked away to the bedside little table and coming back with a bottle of lube in his hand, throwing it to the bed.

There, see? It'll have to be 'the man said', not the other way around.

Anyways, I'll be looking forward to this ;)

Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it :D the mistake has been corrected. Thanks for reading!

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