Date: 03/15/11 10:52 am Title: Chapter 5: Anxious Bones.
woah this was amazing i love it!!Hunter such a bitch whahha he do that to tom fuck him but i think tom deserve it but i just hate the way Hunter act like that..The first word Caleb said was daddy wow caleb is such a nice boy awww so sweet...were same i hate slash specially when tom and bill are pairing urggghh by the way i love it!!
Author's Response: Awe, thanks. (: Haha, Hunter will come around.... Eventually. He just needs time. :P Lol. Yup, that was Caleb's first word. ^^ And thanks for agreeing with me on the whole slash thing. :P
Date: 03/15/11 10:02 am Title: Chapter 5: Anxious Bones.
Thank u I have found another that is not ok with it. I too have nothing against gay ppl I just like the Idea of the twins not getting it on with one another it puts a different picture in my head mentally when I actually looks at them in reality. I have read a few which were good but I am a faithful all around HET girl. Love me or hate me, kill me or take me haha. Stick to ya guns girl *pumps fist in the air* ok now about the chap....I love calebs reaction to Tom, he must have some genetic pull to kno that Tom is his father...I will sound the awe for Tom, since I am a girl haha. I laughed at the hug/knee to the nuts moment. Felt bad but he may have deserved it in some way. *hidesgiggles*
Author's Response: Yeah, thanks for agreeing with me. I know I'm only 16 years old, but at least I have the tendency to respect people's opinion about liking slash/twincest. But anyway, I have to say that some of your reviews have giving me some ideas for what's coming in the next chapter ! Thanks for that too. :P And of course, thanks for this review. (:
Date: 03/15/11 09:20 am Title: Chapter 5: Anxious Bones.
I loved it!! I think it was cute how Sofie and Tom were both so nervous but my favorite part was when Hunter gave Tom a hug but then he kneed him in the nuts funny stuff but I also felt bad for Tom :( anyway keep up your great writing and update real soon I just gotta know what will happen next!!!! =D
Author's Response: I'm glad you found it cute. Hahaha, oh yes. That's Hunter for you. :P And thank you for your wonderful review. :D
Date: 03/15/11 09:16 am Title: Chapter 5: Anxious Bones.
Loved it! Poor Tom!
Author's Response: Thank you. (:
Date: 03/15/11 01:31 am Title: Chapter 5: Anxious Bones.
Love the story
Author's Response: Thank you. [:
Date: 03/12/11 11:44 am Title: Chapter 1: You'll Be Excited Just To See Me Someday.
woah i thought i forgot to review hahah..but i already review the chapter 4 whahha sorry
Author's Response: Haa, it's okayy. :P
Date: 03/12/11 11:42 am Title: Chapter 4: Peaceful Encounter.
woah im sorry i forgot to review heheh...woah so its very interesting story ..so you mean that they are not good and ehmm there are so many intense comiong oh my god!!i cant wait to read the next chapter..great..i like your story i love it!!!
Author's Response: Haa, you didn't. :P But thanks for reviewing anyway. (: I'm glad you're liking it !
Date: 03/02/11 09:01 am Title: Chapter 4: Peaceful Encounter.
ahhhh you mean that there are so intense things coming wooooooooooooooo!!!!im ready by the way ahahha im smiling reading this hehe i dont know my heart keep bouncing whahha i love it!!!!
Author's Response: Haha, oh yes !!! Awe, thank you so much. (: I'll try update asap.
Date: 03/01/11 08:41 pm Title: Chapter 4: Peaceful Encounter.
Loved it! Can't wait to see what will happen next!
Author's Response: Thank you. (:
Date: 03/01/11 06:38 pm Title: Chapter 4: Peaceful Encounter.
They have alot to work on! *WAGS FINGER AT TOM AND SOFIE* it's hard to know where Sofie stand since she is a bit hard towards him, but don't get me wrong it's understandable from the past. But when the moment comes u can tell she still loves Tom in the smallest ways shown. I love u discribe feelings and then express why they are feeling this to make more depth as to why they are feeling this way such as: when said when Tom had lost Bill then Sofie he would do the crap just to feel something again to take away the emptiness. Well done honey. You know me like ^_^
Author's Response: WOW. Thank you so much. I've never gotten a review like this and I really appreciate it. (: I'm glad this story meets up to your expectations. (:
Date: 03/01/11 03:32 pm Title: Chapter 4: Peaceful Encounter.
I LOVED! I'm so happy to see they got a long for once. I can't wait for more and know how Tom and Caleb's enounter will turn out to be like. Please keep up your amazing writing and update real soon :D
Author's Response: Awe, than you ! (: You totally made my day. I'm so glad you're liking this. (:
Date: 03/01/11 09:57 am Title: Chapter 3: Wrong Choice Of Words.
Loved it!
Date: 03/01/11 02:37 am Title: Chapter 2: Dreadful Encounter.
Loved it!
Date: 03/01/11 02:31 am Title: Chapter 1: You'll Be Excited Just To See Me Someday.
Loved it! Poor Sofie!
Date: 03/01/11 12:36 am Title: Chapter 4: Peaceful Encounter.
Aww that was a cute chapter, I can't wait for Tom to see Caleb.
Author's Response: Thank you. (:
Date: 02/19/11 12:39 pm Title: Chapter 3: Wrong Choice Of Words.
Oh man, that was cold, Sofie. Oddly enough, I felt bad for Tom this whole time instead of Sofie. What can I say, I'm a Tomi girl. :) This was a great chapter, and I want to know what's gonna happen next!!! Please write more soon!
Author's Response: Don't we all love Tomi. (: Haha. Thank you very much, glad you liked it. (:
Date: 02/16/11 04:18 am Title: Chapter 3: Wrong Choice Of Words.
Major word vomit alert!! *points at Sofie* gonna be a hard one to follow after a fight like that. Hope Tom has changed and not result in drinking just at the mentioning of Bills name, even in a way as harsh as that. Tom really sounds like he is yearning for some closure and something more to live for. It breaks my heart to imagine him in this way, but at least he understands why. Sofie just needs some reassurance I guess. once again lovely as usual ^_^
Author's Response: Awe, thank you so much. (: This review totally made my day.
Date: 02/15/11 03:07 am Title: Chapter 3: Wrong Choice Of Words.
SHIT!!I'm scared of tom when he whispered "Don't you ever talk about Bill,you fucking bitch"huhuhu oh my god he call her a fucking bitch i think if i were the girl in the story im going to kill tom if he call me a bitch(ahhaha)*EVILS LAUGH*JOKE
..I always like your story..pls i cant wait for your next chapter..
Author's Response: Haha. XD I didn't mean for him to be scary. :P But thanks anyway. I'm glad you're liking it. (:
Date: 02/15/11 02:45 am Title: Chapter 2: Dreadful Encounter.
eihhhhh thats so sweet tom with a baby on his arm and wow the baby have a same face like tom i love it!!ok im going to read now your next chapter..
Author's Response: Haha yup. A mini Tom. :D Thanks for the review. (:
Date: 02/15/11 02:35 am Title: Chapter 1: You'll Be Excited Just To See Me Someday.
well i think ermm are they old now what is their age?hahah i was thinking if they are an poor old woman and man hahah just joking..they meet again aww so sweet...
Author's Response: Haha, they're like, 22-23 around that age. :P Haha ! XD And thanks for reviewing.