Date: 04/07/11 06:23 pm Title: Chapter 8: Guilt.
waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhha TOM AND CALEB ARE SO CUTE oh my god!!i love it so so so so so much...i need to buy some tissue!!AND NEED TO REST TO READ YOUR NEXT CHPATER MAYBE IM GOING TO CRY A LOT WAAHAHA i love this so much..
Author's Response: Haha aweee. (': Thanks ! I'm glad you liked it ! Lol, don't cry. XD
Date: 04/04/11 10:59 am Title: Chapter 8: Guilt.
It seems the deep pang of writers block venom could not stop genius mind juices flowing!! YES!! This was amazing (as usual) I could not stop laughing my butt off at imagining Toms reactions to Caleb running amuck! I mean the way u discribed with hits stomach dropping outta his ass, him crappin his pants. I could picture it! And it was priceless!!! Double...no...triple awe! With Caleb knowing when to stop. Tom got lucky with a wise kid! That know how to scare the crap outta him as well as can calm the scene down ^_^ Sofie...*sighs* I hope she know what she is getting herself into in not telling Tom the truth. Ugh u kno I friggin love it! =p
Author's Response: Ha, well thanks. (: I really thought I wrote a crappy chapter but I'm glad I didn't disappoint anyone ! Lol, I could just totally picture Tom like that if he were to baby sit a kid. XD And yep, Sofie could be in for some trouble. :P But we'll see in the next one. Haha. Thanks again. (:
Date: 04/04/11 09:25 am Title: Chapter 8: Guilt.
Loved it! Can't wait to see what will happen next!
Author's Response: Thanks !
Date: 04/04/11 09:20 am Title: Chapter 7: Make My Heart Race.
Loved it!
Date: 04/04/11 07:57 am Title: Chapter 8: Guilt.
I dont think that caleb spilling the maple syrup then tom calling sophie lame its a classic babysitting chaos lol.Awe that was the cutest and sweetest thing ever Caleb grabbing Tom's hand and taking him to the couch and telling him "is okay" and then Tom and Caleb falling asleep on the couch together EVEN CUTER! Oh I defiently can NOT WAIT for some drama. I have a feeling that Tom will find out that Sophie was lying and that she was going out with a guy...but I could be wrong. Anyway please keep up your fabolous and magnificent writing and update real soon. :)
Author's Response: Awe, thanks. (: I'm glad you liked it. It means a lot. :D And hmm, you could be right or wrong. :P We'll see. I'll try to update soon ! (: I've already got ideas for the next chapter. ^^
Date: 03/27/11 12:57 pm Title: Chapter 7: Make My Heart Race.
Awww poor tom.. i cant wait for the next chapter
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing, hon. (:
Date: 03/27/11 09:17 am Title: Chapter 7: Make My Heart Race.
Haha no biggie lovey, I'll be here don't worry. Ain't going no where. Don't want to anyway =]
Author's Response: Haha, well that's good. (:
Date: 03/27/11 07:38 am Title: Chapter 7: Make My Heart Race.
OH MY GOD...*blush blush blush*EEIIIII what a perfect kiss oh my god....hahah tom is such a very intense father whahah ...oh my god they kiss shit i love it so much god!!your so amazing AHHHHHHHHH i want more i want more whahha i fainted hahaha
Author's Response: Haha, thank you. (: I'll try to update asap.
Date: 03/26/11 02:56 pm Title: Chapter 7: Make My Heart Race.
Sorry my review cut off- I think I said something along the lines of:
Oh my. My favorite parts were definitely Tom and Sofie kissing and Tom freaking out over spilled syrup x3 sorry bout that
Author's Response: Haha, omg. It's okayy. It does to me ALL the damn time. And thank you. I'm glad you liked it. (:
Date: 03/26/11 02:55 pm Title: Chapter 1: You'll Be Excited Just To See Me Someday.
Sorry my review cut off- I think I said something along the lines of:
Oh my. My favorite parts were definitely Tom and Sofie kissing and Tom freaking out over spilled syrup x3 sorry bout that
Date: 03/26/11 10:44 am Title: Chapter 7: Make My Heart Race.
The kiss was A-MA-ZING!! Cute, I was surprised he could work the nerve to think he could steal one. But it did not surprise me that Sofie would not repond in a positive way. I smiled up to the brim hearing Toms panicking voice over little Caleb. He has so much to learn, but it will be good for him. I think being responsible will help him not only care for Caleb and maybe Sofie but help take care of himself. Give him a bit of a stronger backbone to have a little more faith in himself. Sleepless night are a pain in the hooter! But glad u decided to update through that sacrifice...a very considerate idea *nod nod* ^_^
Author's Response: Hah, thank you. (: Yup, Tom has a long way to go. asdfghjkl; I'm sending you an email today ! I kept on forgetting. But I will as soon as I'm done with this response. Oh my gosh, I can never sleep. It's crazy sometimes. Lol. :P
Date: 03/26/11 08:34 am Title: Chapter 7: Make My Heart Race.
I loved it!! The kiss was........WOW! but was also very sweet awe haha. I absolutely loved when Tom called Sophie freaking out about Caleb spilling maple syrup all over the floor funny and kinda cute. Please keep up the fantastical writing and please update real soon I can not wait to read more eep!!! =D
Author's Response: Thank you. :D I'm glad you found funny cause I was thinking, that's so lame but whatever. XD And I'll try to update soon !
Date: 03/26/11 07:19 am Title: Chapter 7: Make My Heart Race.
Oh
Author's Response: ?
Date: 03/17/11 03:21 am Title: Chapter 1: You'll Be Excited Just To See Me Someday.
Naww u r too sweet for words *blush* thank u I love giving out my thoughts that who I am! I not the usual 3 words I love it reviewer type person. About talk yeah, most people I meet on here I talk to on twitter. So add me if ya got twitter or just email moi. Haha, but I really enjoy ur story I cannot believe u r only 16. ur writing makes u seem so mature o_o
Author's Response: Haha, thanks. :P And yes, I love when people leave long reviews and just a simple 3 word one. I don't have a twitter so I'll send you an email today or something. Haha, yup. I is only 16, but thanks ! I'm glad my writing doesn't make me sound like a 12 year old. :P
Date: 03/16/11 08:46 pm Title: Chapter 6: Throw My Angry Fist At The Wall.
SHIT!!i love it so much OH MY GOD!!it was amazing,sofie still love tom oh god!!and tom too oh gosh i cant wait too long im obsessed to your story oh shit your amazing...when im reading this shit i feel like im watching a movie it was great very great!!!great great great great i like it!!i love it!!
Author's Response: Your review made me smile a lot ! (: Thank you. I'm so glad you're liking it.
Date: 03/16/11 07:16 pm Title: Chapter 6: Throw My Angry Fist At The Wall.
That was cute!! I never thought u could use my theory in a very well done way, brilliantly done!! The faces Tom making were adorable, I look after a little boy for friend so I kno the feeling of some childish things that we put ourselves through for pure enjoyment. Toms I kno will not last long, for it looks like he has identified his problem and wants to solve it. His anger Is understandable, he wants change and looks willing to change himself. Babysitting with Tom sounds fun, wonde what trouble Daddyo Tom and mini Tom can get up to haha
Author's Response: Yes, you're reviews are always so asfdjfasf I dunno. But they help a lot. We should definitely talk sometime, you seem pretty cool. (: And thank you. (: I'm glad you understand what Tom is feeling, I was afraid people would be all like, wtf ? Haha.
Date: 03/16/11 06:31 pm Title: Chapter 6: Throw My Angry Fist At The Wall.
Loved it! Can't wait to see what will happen next!
Author's Response: Thank you !
Date: 03/16/11 05:57 pm Title: Chapter 6: Throw My Angry Fist At The Wall.
Awe I feel so bad for Tom having to go through all this stuff with himself but you have to go through some really stuff shit in your life to have the good stuff in your life. I think Sofia really does love Tom but still needs to actual see it and have that trust to really forgive him and Tom and Caleb are just so cute together awe my favorite part was how Tom was making funny faces with Caleb awe makes my heart swell. Anyway keep up the fantastic writing and update real soon =D
Author's Response: Awe, thank you so much. (: Yup, they've got a long way to go. Haha. I'll try to update asap.
Date: 03/15/11 06:33 pm Title: Chapter 1: You'll Be Excited Just To See Me Someday.
Wow!! Really?? Oh wow that made my day can't wait to find out, be interesting to kno what I said to help out...*sideglance* gonna wait and see cannot wait *squeal* haha
Author's Response: Haa I'm glad it did. (: It also helped me a lot with the dialogue, you said some pretty good stuff on your reviews, so thanks. :D
Date: 03/15/11 12:31 pm Title: Chapter 5: Anxious Bones.
POOR TOM!!! ;(( Hunter is idiot dick. More soon please!! :DD
Author's Response: Haha, I know right ?! :P And thanks for reviewing. I'll update asap. (: