Date: 02/03/11 05:25 pm Title: Chapter 20
Oh dear Kiki sound like a walking death stick. Gosh her father is so shallow, it's sounds like he does care more than Simone, but it is not even a smudge close enough to feeling wanted. Hope she knows eat she is doing...
Author's Response: Yeah, Kiki seems like she's bad news huh? Yaz's dad does care, he just doesn't know how to be a real father. He thinks that providing everything she wants financially is the same as being a parent.
Date: 02/03/11 04:28 pm Title: Chapter 20
i hate simone. hate hate hate hate her. update soon!
Author's Response: Lol. Another update today =)
Date: 02/03/11 04:19 pm Title: Chapter 20
More? Please? ♥
Author's Response: Yes, more soon! =)
Date: 02/03/11 04:14 pm Title: Chapter 20
kiki again but i think the question is will bill or tom pick her up this time hmmmmmm i really dunno x
Author's Response: Hmmm...=)
Date: 02/03/11 04:07 pm Title: Chapter 20
Ah :D loved this. Simone an Gordon finally got shit for being dicks! Yay for Yazmine! ^^
Author's Response: Yep!
Date: 02/03/11 04:00 pm Title: Chapter 20
way to go yaz!
Author's Response: I'm proud of her =)
Date: 02/03/11 08:45 am Title: Chapter 19
Holy crap!! What the hell just happens there?...yeah I kno they kissed but...damn just...damn. Girl u gotta update soon I have to kno wat happens next.
Author's Response: Next chapter up, asap =)
Date: 02/03/11 08:15 am Title: Chapter 1
Gosh, so the reason why Tom told Simone about the kiss thing is because he wanted Yaz for himself... Am I rt? lol
Author's Response: That was part of the reason =)
Date: 02/03/11 07:00 am Title: Chapter 19
wtf just happened
Author's Response: Suprised?
Date: 02/03/11 01:58 am Title: Chapter 19
more :D♥
Author's Response: =D
Date: 02/03/11 01:00 am Title: Chapter 19
God I loved this chapter :D
Author's Response: Awesome =) That makes me happy!
Date: 02/02/11 05:31 am Title: Chapter 18
Ok. That is just sad judged by a misunderstanding and the only trust believes u is one that saw him with his own eyes. Not even her so call ex friends gave her a chance to explain to think twice. Another reason to love bill more.
Author's Response: Kamryn must not have been a very good friend to start with huh?
Date: 02/02/11 05:01 am Title: Chapter 18
Good! It was nice to see Bill defend her! You see, I've always liked the connection she and him had all along. The way he'd been taking care of her as a child a.s.o., so it hurt when he set a distance between them after the kissing "incident". Can't wait to read more!
Author's Response: I like the bond they have also. Sadly what's happened is Simone has kept Bill busy & out of the house as much as possible. Just to keep him & Yaz seperated :( Therefore making her bond with Tom a bit stronger.
Date: 02/02/11 04:54 am Title: Chapter 17
What's happening in the twins' minds, huh? Need a little clarification, since her feelings get really mixed up. Jealousy is not pleasant at all, but she should be prepared for it when it comes to her "brothers"' relationships with girls...
Author's Response: It's no so much as the twins "confusing" her as it is Yaz confusing herself. She's so desperate to be loved & accepted that just a simple kind gesture affects her inside. With Tom being so nice to her she's kind of developed a crush. And with Bill being distant it makes her cling to Tom that much more.
Date: 02/02/11 04:50 am Title: Chapter 16
oh uh. Not good. Everyone needs love, poor her just needs some. Hope Bill will give it to her...
Author's Response: Yaz will eventually find hers =)
Date: 02/01/11 10:15 pm Title: Chapter 1
I read this on Ning while you were writing it. Very nice =]
Author's Response: Thank u! =)
Date: 02/01/11 07:39 pm Title: Chapter 18
..so that's what happened. O.O tsk.
Author's Response: Yep! Thank u for keeping up with this =)
Date: 02/01/11 07:22 am Title: Chapter 17
damn
Author's Response: :(
Date: 02/01/11 04:33 am Title: Chapter 17
Wow!! Hearing her wanton to die...just wow! =[ thank god Tom was there. I wonder watthsy mean when the past was brought up?? Again have I been reading to fast to miss something?? I loved it how u said she is living for herself now, I really get that. She does not need to live for ppl.
Author's Response: No, u haven't read too fast. It will be explained in the chapter i'm posting right now.