Date: 02/12/11 01:54 pm Title: Chapter 7
Tom made is seem like it was a date and made yazz cry! When in reality it was all work and meetings for him. WTF Tom! Ugh!! I'm happy it wasn't anything serious.
On to the next chapter.
Author's Response: Yes! Tom was an ass for doing that to her, lol.
Date: 02/12/11 01:47 pm Title: Chapter 6
What an ass!! I told you he's an ass I cried at the end with yazz dammit because there's just certain things like what Tom said to her that a girl is never suppose to hear.
Author's Response: Aww I know :( But he wasn't really trying to be mean. He really likes her but doesn't know how to approach her.
Date: 02/12/11 01:39 pm Title: Chapter 5
Lol I like Kiki she's amusing. Tom is so nosey listening to her and staring at her and just making weird faces smirking and shit. God I want to slap him :P
Author's Response: I kinda have that love/hate relationship with Tom lol. He's a bit confusing to anyone who doesn't know what's going on in that arrogant head of his =)
Date: 02/12/11 01:31 pm Title: Chapter 4
He stared at her sadly hmmm what is the deal with Tom. And Madison and Yazz use to be friends hmm an Omygod he didn't want her eep I think maybe Tom has feelings for 'someone' ;)
Author's Response: He does indeed have feelings for 'someone' =) He's feeling a bit conflicted about it.
Date: 02/12/11 01:25 pm Title: Chapter 3
What an asshole! I hate I loathe Tom! Ugh! I just want to smack him across his face. Does he like yazz because it sure does look like it. Poor yazz I wouldve cried as well.
Author's Response: I don't blame u lol. Tom doesn't really know how to handle his 'new' feelings towards her. xDD
Date: 02/12/11 01:16 pm Title: Chapter 2
Hmm Tom seems mysterious in a way, what is wrong with him? Why does he dislike her so much? From the looks of it she has never done anything bad to him :-/ and Bill like always just a sweet heart.
Author's Response: He really doesn't have any particular reason to not like her. He just saw her as a little brat who was thrust into his life. Tom was a typical little boy with attitude lol.
Date: 02/12/11 01:06 pm Title: Chapter 1
Ooh this story has caught my eye. I just food this story today and so far I like :)
On to the next chapter.
Author's Response: Awesome! Thank u for giving this a chance. I'm soooo happy u are liking it! =)
Date: 02/08/11 05:02 am Title: Chapter 27
A seguel? Yeeeeeeei :D ♥♥♥
Author's Response: =) U can check it out now...
Date: 02/08/11 04:22 am Title: Chapter 27
Looks like her life is starting to straighten out!! It is good to see he have a little bit more confidence not only in herself but the environs t around her as well starting to change. Cannot wait for the sequel. I love that all three have resolved everything and still be in the same level, I am glad she is no longer holding and using Tom as well. Looks like eveythjng is starting a fresh. Happy!!!! ^_^
Author's Response: Yep, it's about time she gets the family & life she deserves. But I wonder what will happen with the twins in the future? Hehe. I'm posting the sequel now =)
Date: 02/07/11 09:25 pm Title: Chapter 27
Eeep! I'm excited for the sequel! :D thanks so much for posting this story, I loved the plotline and everything (: good job!
Author's Response: xDDD that makes me happy! Thank u & ur welcome. Lol.
Date: 02/07/11 07:40 pm Title: Chapter 27
cant wait for the new one
Author's Response: Awesome =) Thank u!
Date: 02/07/11 06:37 pm Title: Chapter 26
i can honestly say I dunno where the sequels gunna go this was such a patch up chapter that either the crisis hits in the last chapter (cries Pssssp sequel eep yeah yeah sooon OK CALM IT!)end of my mental illness. orrr your guuna open the sequel with a powwwwwwwwwwwwwww x
Author's Response: Hehe xD
Date: 02/07/11 02:06 pm Title: Chapter 26
more? ♥
Author's Response: Very soon =)
Date: 02/07/11 10:34 am Title: Chapter 26
I'd be screwed just from the memories. I see what u mean by the flow, it was a bit chaffed and rushed but I get what u mean to make it longer. Well I am ssssooooo happy to see her father finally snapss his wits to make a stand at BEING a father at last. Bill and Tom I still have a little more to warm up too, forgive me but I am just looking from my view it would take me a while. But this is Yaz story not mine. Greatly done!
Author's Response: Thank u! The last chapter will be up soon =)
Date: 02/07/11 10:26 am Title: Chapter 25
Still a Billy fan more but I can abide by this. Gosh this girls life is twisted as, on the brink of death is understandable. Tom better work it out!! On we go to the next chap >>
Author's Response: Yeah, it would be terrible to get to the point of wanting to end ur life :(
Date: 02/07/11 02:19 am Title: Chapter 25
Moooooooooooooooore.!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ♥ :D :D :D
Author's Response: 26 is up & waiting for u =)
Date: 02/06/11 09:22 pm Title: Chapter 25
damn
Author's Response: =)
Date: 02/06/11 08:51 pm Title: Chapter 25
more like hero in a too big costume. update soon!
Author's Response: Yeah, that too lol.
Date: 02/06/11 06:59 pm Title: Chapter 25
phew that was close but really believable and ooh i don't get bill tho thats still confusing me x
Author's Response: Yeah, I don't really get Bill myself lol. No matter what excuses he comes up with to justify what he's done, it still makes no sense haha.
Date: 02/06/11 04:07 pm Title: Chapter 24
ahh not nice *runs rapidly through head* calm down theres a sequel theres a sequel! might not have the same characters tho *Hushes other voice in head*. well you're defenetly keeping your word about that whiplash plus the suspense is deadly.
Author's Response: Lmao! The suspense of seeing if I can get anymore great reviews like this one is killing me, so....i'll go ahead & post again now =) It is pretty cruel of me to keep u waiting lol.