Date: 03/12/11 11:05 am Title: Home sweet home
I'm so sorry for not reviewing every chapter... I was reading your story on my Ipod with no Internet... but from now on, I'm on board and will definitely leave you feedback!
That was such a beautiful chapter. I find it adorable that Tom wanted to show his place to Bill... and of course their first time was amazingly well written. Really sensual and passionate, loved it ! Can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
That's all right, sweetie! As long as you're reading and enjoying the story, that's all I can ask for ;) I'm just happy to hear I didn't lose you completely..
Thank you so much! I'm always worried when I write smut, so I'm glad it you liked it ;) Amazingly well written? Wow.. I mean, serisouly, wow! *is flabbergasted*
Tom is being extremely adoreable - it's almost too much to handle.. *sighs* Fortunately, Bill doesn't seem to mind ;)
Date: 03/12/11 10:10 am Title: Home sweet home
All is forgiven when you add smut. Plus, even though it's technically 7 am Saturday, I haven't slept yet, so I still count it as Friday night ;)
Author's Response: Fantastic! :D
Date: 03/09/11 10:08 am Title: There's beauty in everything
xDDDD This was so sweet & romantic & sexy! Fantastic chapter.
Author's Response: Thank you! These comments makes me so happy and put a really goofy grin on my face - it's good! :D
Date: 03/09/11 02:17 am Title: There's beauty in everything
thats was seriously cute and not to mention hott!!!
Author's Response: Naaaw, thank you! :)
Date: 03/09/11 02:11 am Title: There's beauty in everything
Lol wow I didn't realize that 100th stuff!!XD That was pretty awesome!! DO I GET COOKIES??XD LOL...
It was a good thig then that you weren't just the only people there loooool..XD Maybe they're just pretty lenient about tresspassers or something. Hahahaha.. And the way you described on how to get there... Kinda tiring. Or is there an easier route to go there without going up hills or something? I love, love the bench btw. Like there's a story behind it:D Like how Bill saw it the first time. Heeeeee...
Andi's got a story to share too since he was also out for a date. When he and Tom come back they can have this girly talk about their dates and stuff... Hahahahahaha I'm totally seeing Tom with that super cheeky smile he's just so happy he just can't help it..XD Like nothing else can ruin his mood... So cute!!! Which reminds me of Tom's flailing hands mannerisms (zimmer 483) He's like spazzing like a five year old loooool..XD
It's one of the things I like about this fic - you know... They just don't jump to sex at once (as much as I'm crazy about smut most of the time *perv*) and they're taking their sweet time to get to know each other more and just go crazy with simple touches and sweet kisses and all the cheeeeezzzzziness it's like... IT'S SO FLUFFY I'M GONNA DIE!!! Raaaawwrr loooool..XD
Are we gonna see any progress with Georg and Gustav soon? Looooool their tandem here's just as fluffy and exciting as Tom and Bill's... Heeeeee!! IZ SO FLUFFEH!!XD
Author's Response:
You get a three layer cake with cookies on top! XD
Well, apparently it's a really popular place, so.. They've done everything humanly possible to stop people from going in there, but that doesn't mean it works. I don't think they're lenient, I just think they've given up ;) I think we might have taken the difficult road there. We followed the normal road back down, instead of going back through the woods, but that way was just plain boring. It is on a hilltop so you'd have to go uphill anyway, we just chose the exciting and challenging way up (though I can assure you it was not on purpose) :p
They both have stories to share, but I picture it'd be over a shared bottle of beer than a bucket of ice cream ;) Ahahah, I remember that! He's so cute when he's flailing! XD
I'm glad you're enjoying the slow pace. Things will speed up a bit now, though (they are men, after all), but yeah, they're taking their sweet time.. Please don't die! I don't want that on my hands. Death by fluff does sound rather funny, though. I wonder how that'd work exactly..
Georg and Gustav...there will be more about them.. Let's just say they're being slow bastards too ;) I like their story, I think it's funny how different they are, but how they somehow compliment each other. Fluff is good! :D
Date: 03/09/11 01:24 am Title: There's beauty in everything
OMG-I love this chapter!!! Thank you for including pictures as well-makes the story seem a litle more real to me!
Author's Response: Omg, I love that you loved it! :D No problem, actually I don't think anyone could have stopped me - I just had to! Basically because the entire chapter was based on my own trip there and I was just reliving it as I wrote, adding twins, smut and cheese, of course. My trip there had none, I'm afraid.. It's okay - it was still amazing! :D I'm happy it worked the way I wanted, I was hoping to make it seem more plausible that this actually happened..
Date: 03/09/11 12:05 am Title: There's beauty in everything
Awww so romantic!!!!! and just a bit of cheese added for good measure:D:D:D
Author's Response: Cheese is good! I think my personal favourite has to be Brie... Oh wait, you meant cheese like in..aaah! *snorts* Yeah, no chapter without a healty dose of cheese - glad you liked it :)
Date: 03/08/11 11:16 pm Title: There's beauty in everything
wow, that place seems kinda cool/sad. You're right, I could see Tom hanging out there.
And no, I don't think I am being too kind, this really is a fantastic fic. Its definately favorite worthy, I just like to wait til something is complete to add it to my favs, I have one exception, but it hasn't been updated in like a year or something, its kind of the reason I created that rule.
Anyway, of course someone needs to feel compassion for Georg. He is *tries to keep a straight face* just a sad little boy on the inside *snorts* wanting to be loved *laughs*...I don't know if you have ever seen How I Met Your Mother, but he reminds me of the character Barney Stinson, kind of.
Tom had no reason to be embarassed by his stamina, Bill came from just grinding too, and he is older and should be able to hold out longer. So nah *crosses eyes and pokes tongue out*
Great chapter. I look forward to friday's update!
Author's Response:
It is a pretty cool place - I have a lot of pictures, it was too cool! :) It is a bit sad that it's abanodoned, but in a way it's what makes it so exciting. The history of it is quite cool too, as it used to be a listening station for the West during the cold war. Did you know they actually built the hill it's on out of garbage? At least that's what I've heard :)
I like how you tried to be serious about feeling genuin compassion for Georg's torment and failed.. XD Haven't seen the show, no, but I've heard a lot about it. My only 'How I met your mother' related fun-fact is that the guy playing Barney is actually gay. These are just the kind of things I know..
They should both be embarassed! :p No, I'd say they should try do something about it - like practice. Makes perfect in the end, doesn't it? ;)
Date: 03/08/11 09:01 pm Title: There's beauty in everything
'us gangsters' omg Tom :'D it was really cute though, the whole chapter was :D
Author's Response: Hihi, you know, I almost killed my roommate with that comment.. Tom definitely tries, but is of course failing miserably ;) I'm glad you liked it! :D
Date: 03/08/11 07:47 pm Title: There's beauty in everything
ANTS!! ANTS IN MY PANTS!!! *flails 52366774314535642 times* LOL...XD
Bad, bad author!! Doing illegal stuff!! Hahahaha joke..XD That was soooooo.. Awesome..XD I mean, it's worth breaking the law. Hahahaha...Based on the pictures I think it was a very nice place:D It was beautiful...
Tom's soooooooo sweet. Even if it was something risky going there, it was all worth it. And his plan worked!!XD How can you resist something like thaaaaaaat lol if I were Bill I'd jump Tom immediately - after I flail so hard and squeal in so much happiness, of course..XD
I actually thought they're gonna have sex right there. Meeeeeehhh... *perv* Lol but that part was hot. I just worried there for a second. They'd be travelling back home wirh soiled boxers. How uncomfortable's thaaaat!!! Hahahaha..XD Still... I'm so happy for them. Bill should work out so he could improve his stamina and they can have sex like newlyweds... All night long, and the morning after... Hahahahaha..XD
This chapter is love, love, love!! More fluff and sexy times pleeeeeaaaaaaaasseee!!XD
Author's Response:
Congratulations, you're the 100th reviewer! How cool's that? ;)
Serisouly, you kill me with your reviews - they're too funny! XD I know, I was being bad but it was soooo worth it! I mean, the area itself is pretty cool (I have 140 pictures or more just from Teufelberg), but the view was simply to die for! And we had the best weather that day, sunshine and a clear blue sky, it was amazing :) The funny part was that we actually met other people inside and they simply smiled and greeted us - breaking the law was apparently no big deal to them either..
Well, at least Tom can tell Andreas that his plan was in fact brilliant and that it did work, though he honestly didn't have any particular motive behind bringing Bill there other than to spend time with him. He got more than he bargind for, but I don't think he minded ;)
Nope, no sex today.. *sighs* That would've been too soon, not to mention it was definitely not the best place for it either :p But they did have to go back home with soiled boxers anyway. I don't even feel evil for doing that, I know they both liked it ;)
I'm so happy you liked it and didn't die from cheese overdose ;) More fluff is coming up - and sexy times will come sometime in the not too distant future. The boys are being good in this story, doing things in the right order. But now that they're officially dating they're free to do whatever the hell they'd like... There's nothing stopping sexy time now! :D *does little victory dance* It's all goooood!
Date: 03/08/11 06:21 pm Title: There's beauty in everything
hkdbhbvhskdv I love it
Author's Response: Hihi, that's good! ;)
Date: 03/08/11 05:05 pm Title: There's beauty in everything
very very cute! i loved this chapter, thanks so much!
Author's Response: Thank you - I quite like it myself ;) You're very welcome!
Date: 03/06/11 01:55 pm Title: Life 101
Hm I'd like to see what he can do with a can of whipped cream too... :D
Author's Response: It would probably be a sight to behold ;)
Date: 03/06/11 12:39 pm Title: Life 101
I'm glad I get to make you laugh with my err.. Flailing idiocy lol.. It has its purposes then!!XD I'm not really a funny person at all - I don't really see myself like that. I'm just a quiet kid most of the time sooooo glad to put a smile on your face then and go LOL with my comments..XD
I'm glad I'm wrong then.. That's just me. I tend to think and make guesses, jump into things, try to connect stuffs with the plot and stuff when I read lol... Part of the fun in reading, I guess..XD Aside from the squealing and flailing and splitting my head for grinnin too much.. Hahahaha..XD
I just thought of the connection of the painting to Bill and Tom's relationship because of their class... Just from that aspect. You know how many dramas a difference in society's hierarchy could make. That type of drama's just sooooo very common (and typical, especially in my country's tv shows and stuff - it's already irritating), real life or fiction - but still pure drama shit nonetheless that it makes you cringe. Irked. But as this isn't purposely a drama fic, well. It's good to not have heavy drama looool that would be... Sad. Just sad. Depressing. Frustrating - in a sad, sad way. A total killfun!! Lol. I've only seen the Hurt/Comfort genre, so I guess not much drama - like Angst and well.. Drama. Lol. WHAT. *facepalm*
BTW!! Tom's such a cheeeeeezzzzze with that graffitti he made for Bill hahahahaha..XD How can you say no to thaaaaaat!!! And hopefully they'd get to be you know, official soon enough. So they can go flirt more and do more PDAs (yes, more, more, moooooar!!XD) until Georg gets sick of 'em - or maybe make him envious he'd go pursue Gusti and make him say yes to him!! Hahahaha..XD
About Georg. Lol. I guess that's just how love is. At a certain point it defies things that you know, morals, philosophy in life etc.; make you think twice (and sometimes not think at all cuz the heart does not do much thinking most of the time loooool) of a lot of things, make you go crazy, and turn you into a whole different person. Which isn't that bad. At times. Hahahahaha.. If Georg would only learn to be sincere, and I mean totally sincere with his feelings for Gustav - let it sink deeper lol, maybe he could get a YES from Gusti. Heeeee..XD Or maybe Gustav can continue to turn Georg down until he breaks and you know... Eventually be more... In love. Hahahahaha..XD In words, actions... Loooool... Make him see the light!! Bahahahaha..XD
I am not really this talkative. Ehm. Not quite. Lol. I blame Georg and the painting!!! Hahahahaha..
So much anticipation for the next chapter..XD HEEEEEEEEEE...XD *flutterclaps*
Author's Response:
I think it's amusing and I like reviews that make me smile. There's enough going on in the world to bring my mood down, so being given a reason to smile means a lot :)
You know, most of the time I do that to. I always try to figure out what's gonna happen before it does and get all hung up on the details - and usually they turn out unimportant. It also mean I sort of ruin the stories a bit for myself, because I'm always guessing what's gonna happen next, and I'm getting pretty good at it. That's why I love unexpected turn of events so much, I guess ;) This story isn't really that much about the drama, which I would say is a good thing, but more about the evolvement of Tom and Bill's relationship. It's just fluff with a tiny dash of hurt/comfort (and angst and drama on the side), but mostly fluff ;)
Tom is cheesy and, trust me, he'll only get worse :p That's just the way he acts when he's in love ;)
Georg and Gustav relationship is a story all on its own, but I've chosen not to go too much into it. You'll still get a pretty good idea about it, though, mostly because Tom keeps putting his foot in it ;) And Bill, well, he's trying to be a good friend, so of course he'll listen to Georg's rants..and theres a lot of 'em! *giggles* How it's gonna end - you'll just have to wait and see, I'm not telling!
I have to admit I tend to get really talkative in my author's responses. Basically it's because I know my story and charaters so well, it's hard not to talk about it! XD I try to stop myself from saying too much, though, I don't want to ruin it for anyone. I'm practicing being vague! How am I doing? Next chapter will be good! I think it might be one of my favourites, actually! :) Now the question remains if it can live up to your expectations..
Date: 03/06/11 05:14 am Title: Life 101
yes the chapter was good and i am happy about the way that Tom and Bill are taking their time in their relationship!!
Author's Response: Great! :D They're taking things sloooow...it's a good pace! ;)
Date: 03/06/11 02:30 am Title: Life 101
oh please. you turn your life into a musical if you want to. I do. I burst into random song all the time. My friends think I'm crazy, but they don't know what they are missing out on. I just wish I had rhythm so I could bust into dance routines too.
Poor Georg with his heart changing what it wants from life on him, and not being able to have the one he wants.
I love how we saw both Bill and Tom all frustrated over art. Tom because he doesn't get abstract art, and Bill because he hates seeing good art destroyed.
Keep up the fabulous work. Catch you next up date!
Author's Response:
Oh, may I? *flutterclaps exstaticly* Yay! :D I do it sometimes, but normally it's only when there's no one else around.. Aaaah, I'd love to be able to do dance routines too! Perhaps I should practise some more first, though, I don't really know how to :p
Hmm, you know, I think you're the first on to actually take pity on him. He might need that ;) Underneath all those layers of filth, biting remarks and sarcasm is a scared little boy just wanting to be loved.. *snorts* But really, it is a bit sad, Gustav turning him down. Then again, he doesn't do that all the time - Gustav does in fact have a heart so he can't resist Georg's puppyeyes in the long run ;)
They're both very passionate about art, so of course they'd get all frustrated about it. Tom just wants to understand Bill better and Bill can't stand the short lifespan of a graffiti piece.. I'm glad you liked it! :)
Fabulous work? Wow, thank you, that's too kind! ;) Catch you *fingers crossed* Tuesday then!
Date: 03/06/11 02:05 am Title: Life 101
You say being drunk like it is a bad thing :)
Geo, you ho bag!
Awww whipped cream and bill kisses. I would love to be a fly on that wall.
Author's Response:
Being drunk is only a bad thing in the regard that I missed my update ;)
Geo is a ho - he can't help it!
Mmmm, I wouldn't mind either.. I mean whipped cream, Bill kissed or being a fly on the wall watching Tom and Bill and both of those element in play, of course.. I mean, those are three really good things - and I like good things! *coughs* Uhm, yeah...I'm just gonna go now... Thank you for reading av reviewing! :D
Date: 03/06/11 01:59 am Title: Life 101
LOVED IT!!!!!!! What are the chances of Tom getting to use a can of whipped cream involving Bill of course, in a future chapter?!?!
Author's Response: I love that you loved it! :D Well, I'll unfortunately have to say that the chances are slim. Then again, I'm sure you'll be able to imagine exactly what Tom and Bill can do with a can of whipped cream all on your own... *loses head in gutter* Care to join me down there? ;)
Date: 03/06/11 12:43 am Title: Life 101
*smooshes you tight* Loved this chapter, Georg's bluntness and Gustav's caustic remarks. Tom's artwork is so sweet. =)
Author's Response: Aaaaw, thank you! I'm glad you liked it! *huggles* Georg and Gustav are just being their normal selves - it's kind of scary.. Tom is sweet! :D
Date: 03/06/11 12:25 am Title: Life 101
Was that painting observation thingy a foreshadowing of Tom and Bill's relationship??:O Please tell me if I'm wrong...:O
I love that the kisses and all this fluffy sweet gestures between Tom and Bill felt like natural. Like it's meant to be, or supposed to be just like that. Sooooooo sweet. Heeee..XD It was amusing how different they could be in some od their taste but they get to meet in the middle at a certain point.. Their relationship's just budding and hopefully it continues to blossom. Ayeeeeeee..XD Although I'm sensing a bit (just a teeeeeny tiny bit) of drama doon. Something to do with their classes or something. Or maybe family matters? I hope I could be wrong at some point. Or maybe totally wrong at all...
LOOOOOOL at Georg!!!XD Of course he loves Gustav... Cuz he's different... Ayeeeee..XD Gustav should make a confession too!! With Georg hearing it too lol..XD And then Paramore's song came into my mind cuz of Georg.. "You are.. The only Exception..." Hahahaha...
Alright I'll shut up..XD THANKS FOR THE UPDATE!!:D
Author's Response:
Actually I'm not sure exactly what it is that you're asking. If you thought that painting Tom was supposed to be analysing was 'about them' I have to say no, it wasn't.. I think you think I'm cleverer than I am - because I hadn't even thought about that :p
Aaaw, thank you! I'm happy it comes off as a natural thing, them being all cheesy and fluffy, because that was what I was going for! :D They do seem to have found a common ground, don't they? It's good! About the drama - read the list of genres again ;)
Georg's a lost case - he took one look at Gustav and his heart was lost forever. I think it was those gorgeous brown eyes that did him in! :p Him actually confessing, though, that is a huge thing! Man, he wasn't even supposed to be able to fall in love! *throws hands helplessly in the air* I have no idea what happen, I swear. Gustav just walked by and Georg tossed all his morals out the window.. You know, I don't know that song. But yes, Gustav should come clean too. But the again, it is Georg we're talking about - he'd get all gleeful and smug about it :p
Oh, no need to shut up - you're reviews are funny! Serisouly, they make me laugh every time! :D Thank you - and you're very welcome!