Date: 08/07/13 11:22 pm Title: Internal Conflict
how sad...
Author's Response: Sorry hun
Date: 09/28/12 04:51 pm Title: Internal Conflict
got to say that I prefer OOCs but I definetly adore this fic my darlin, great job :D
Author's Response: OMG thank you sooo much!!! :D
Date: 01/25/11 03:42 pm Title: Internal Conflict
I like it! :D I really like the writing style, the dialogue that is not written in a dialogue-y way and all that. Poor Bill... or not... ? Eh, he didn't put up much of a fight so I guess I shouldn't feel sorry for him. But I like way it ended, you know, the uncertainty about what will happen to their relationship and all that. Nice work.
Author's Response: Thanks! I wanted to make it different from the usual stuff I read. It seems everyone is thinking "poor Bill" and you know, that's perfectly okay since he is hurting. BUT, he always could have put up more of a fight. So is he truly a victim or not? That's all up to you guys, however you interpret it and however it makes you feel.rnrnThanks for reading and letting me know what you think! :)
Date: 01/25/11 12:52 pm Title: Internal Conflict
OMFG that was unbelievably poignant. I felt Bill's pain so deeply and can't help but wish that he wasn't hurting so badly. Awesome story sweetie. I loved it. :)
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad I could make you feel what Bill was feeling, that was my goal after all. Thank you for your feedback :)
Date: 01/25/11 06:42 am Title: Internal Conflict
I absolutely loved it, it can't end there, this has potential to become a long story, or at least add some more chaps? please?
Author's Response: Thank you very much :) Well, I had intended it to be just a one-shot. BUT, maybe somewhere down the line I will add more. I'm not sure, we will see :)
Date: 01/25/11 03:46 am Title: Internal Conflict
Ooooooooooo, I liked this!! Dark and angsty but also hits a lot of great kinks. Nice visuals. Very hot.
I love the 2nd person narrative, it's different, and even tho it's usually annoying, in this case it adds to the naughtyness IMO.
The conflicting emotions make this fic feel real, and it all leaves me wanting more.
I wanna know what Tom is thinking. I want to know what happens next.
Awesomeness!! :)
Author's Response: Thank you so much :) I really tried to make this feel as real as possible, which caused a lot of re-writes before I actually posted it. I also would like to know what Tom is thinking lol
Date: 01/25/11 01:32 am Title: Internal Conflict
good thing, very good thing. just really sad. *hugs bill super tight*
Author's Response: okayy good :) yes, give Bill lots of hugs!
Date: 01/25/11 01:11 am Title: Internal Conflict
and that is how you shatter your readers heart into thousands of pieces. This was a really good read but I don't know how to sum up the extent of how this made me feel because whatever I say wouldn't be enough.
Author's Response: awww. sorry about your broken heart, honey. so i left you speechless, is this a good or bad thing??