Date: 02/02/25 05:59 pm Title: Chapter 1
Hello from 2025! I enjoyed this. :)
Date: 12/27/11 06:01 pm Title: Chapter 1
Ooops, I have read this one-shot some time ago but never have dropped a line to praise it:-/ Sorry, because it deserves all the praises there is to get:-)
I love the blend of bubbly lightness and heavy eroticism of it mixing so nicely together. It is quite amazing how many contrasts you mended into it - playfulness and seriousness, edginess and smoothness, attitude of "not caring and going ahead with it" versus deep bond between friends and their mutual trust and understanding... so many facets to it and it glided so easily forward.
The details with which you depicted the scenery and surroundings were making it so rich and real. Very solid work!
The sexy times... oh gosh, your twins are always divine... one breathing organism of love, sharing, devotion and sexiness. How they worked in tandem on the girl was mind-blowing. I hardly ever read het because it doesn't do anything for me to be honest, but this story with Jana in it was incredibly sweet and endearing. There was such an encompassing vibe of relaxed sharing, friendliness, respect and mutual enjoyment, there was never a threatening aspect to it, no jealousy, no use-and-abuse scheme behind... just equal grounds for everyone involved.
One of very few threesomes with a girl in it that I loved. Super!
Date: 04/26/11 12:45 pm Title: Chapter 1
Oh my gosh ! *____*
jhfjhhhfuerghg *disconnected*
I rarely read a text as hot as this one ! Oh mince, my panties shakes.
I'd love translate this one shot **
Date: 04/07/11 10:05 pm Title: Chapter 1
would you make one for me, please, i really enjoyed your story :)
Date: 03/07/11 04:20 pm Title: Chapter 1
Wow. This must be on of the hottest stories I've ever read! o.0
Awesome!
Date: 02/23/11 04:39 am Title: Chapter 1
Oh! *blushes*
This was really hot! I loved how you described the difference between Bill's and Tom's kissing techniques. :-)
Date: 01/28/11 05:16 pm Title: Chapter 1
Is it okayu If I'm a bit jealous for Jana? I mean, I could have done it too :)
Very hot and I liked the way you used your time to describe details in their fucking. It fitted here well. I don't think we've had that many 3some+one things here before even if 3some with twins is very common thought. You made it work!
Author's Response: Lol, yes, I think no one needs to feel all that bad for Jana lol. And thank you so much - I'm so happy you enjoyed!
Date: 01/27/11 09:29 am Title: Chapter 1
Amazingly hot and so well written. Love your descriptive sentences. Killer story!
Author's Response: Thank you very much :)
Date: 01/25/11 11:37 pm Title: Chapter 1
Gorgeously done.
Author's Response: Thank you so much, Tay!
Date: 01/25/11 10:04 pm Title: Chapter 1
Guh. This is incredible. You hit the dynamic between all of them so, so perfectly, from the relationship between Georg and Jana to the relationship between the twins, which, sdflgjk just made this story so perfect for me. And the twins also seem to understand Georg really well, which I think is true in real life, too. This fic is beautiful and believable and hot, above everything else. Scorching, in fact. Yours is some of the only het I like so I gave it a shot, and I'm so so glad I did. ♥!!
Author's Response: Kish, this review made me smile so much. Not only because I love absolutely everything you write so your opinion really means a lot, but because this was one of the hardest fics I've ever written. I'm not used to directing a fic to go in a certain direction (usually i just ramble and let things develop how they will, but since I was writing for someone else this wasn't really an option), and I just kept second-guessing myself on characterization. It was so wonderful to hear that you found their relationships well-crafted, and really sweet that my het is some that you can read. Thank you so, so much!
Date: 01/25/11 04:28 pm Title: Chapter 1
Wow! Really hot story! Love that everyone enjoyed what they all did and were still friends/partners at the end.
I like happy sex stories.
Author's Response: Aww, I love happy sex stories too :) Thank you!
Date: 01/25/11 01:15 pm Title: Chapter 1
What woman wouldn't want to live that fantasy? OMFG that was hawt, hawt, hawt. Danke. :)
Author's Response: Thank you so much!
Date: 01/25/11 04:01 am Title: Chapter 1
wow. that was amazing. and hot. somehow you managed to write this with no angst or awkwardness. great job.
Author's Response: oh gosh, you have no idea how happy this makes me. I had to struggle SO much to keep this from becoming angsty, so it means a lot that you thought I succeeded. Thank you!
Date: 01/25/11 03:20 am Title: Chapter 1
This was really sexy. I've been waiting for someone to write something like this. :) I love how you made them all feel like friends, all relaxed and nonchalant and playful, but you also kept the closeness of the individual relationships (Tom/Bill and Georg/Jana), and on top of that you also managed to add the layer of sex/lust/wanting for the threesome.
And you kept their personalities intact as well, lol. Very well written, multifaceted but also just plain fun. Well done. :)
PS- I would love a sequel where you make good on that DP action u mentioned. :P Maybe Geo wants to take it instead this time? *hint*hint*
Author's Response: Thank you so much for this. Basically everything you mentioned was something I really stressed over while writing the fic, so it is just super rewarding to hear that their relationships/personalities came across the way I intended. And I shouldn't say this bc i'm such a slow writer and will likely never get around to it, but I do happen to have a Geo/twins scene in my mind that takes place after this one. I mean, it just seems unfair for Geo not to get his own turn with the twins...
Date: 01/25/11 12:58 am Title: Chapter 1
HA! :D
This will be read over and over and over and over >:D
Author's Response: *hugs*
Date: 01/24/11 11:09 pm Title: Chapter 1
Hafddfajdslafkdsaf *_____* That was the hottest thing ever. *bows down*
Author's Response: haha thank you!
Date: 01/24/11 10:25 pm Title: Chapter 1
Oh. Um, I'm incoherent, sorry. You're freaking brilliant, that's all I know.
Author's Response: loool thanks Mel!
Date: 01/24/11 09:41 pm Title: Chapter 1
damn.
damndamndamndamndamn.
That was sooooo hot. I have such a kink for Tom/Bill/OFC or Bill/Tom/OFC (if Tom is so inclined ;)
It's like my het Bill fantasies come to life but he's still Tom's too. Perfect.
Just perfect. :)
glad to see a new one from you!
xoxoxo
Author's Response: Awww :) You always make me smile, and I love that you also have fantasies about het Bill! He's my new favorite thing lol. Thank you!
Date: 01/24/11 09:28 pm Title: Chapter 1
That was really hot. What I love the most is that it's clear that the twins belong together, Georg and his girlfriend too. Really well written fic, I enjoyed it!
Author's Response: Thank you so much!