Date: 02/15/11 04:50 am Title: Chapter 11
aww! :3
Author's Response: (:
Date: 02/15/11 03:26 am Title: Chapter 11
Cute!! Thanks for the update!!
Author's Response: Thank You. (:
Date: 02/15/11 01:48 am Title: Chapter 11
I love Andi lol. Can't wait to read more.
Author's Response: Thanks!
Date: 02/15/11 01:45 am Title: Chapter 11
This is really one of my fav stories on here!
Author's Response: Awh, Really? That's so rad! Thanks so much!
Date: 02/15/11 01:16 am Title: Chapter 11
aaaaaaaw :)
I am so glad that you updated!! Awesome chapter!
Author's Response: Thank You!
Date: 02/05/11 04:38 pm Title: Chapter 10
No updates..? :o
I am kinda really really missing to read this story every morning :3
Author's Response: I'm very sorry I haven't updated in a while! I've just gone back to uni and had a lot to deal with these past few weeks. I'm just about to write the next chapter and it should be up tonight!
Date: 02/03/11 08:47 am Title: Chapter 10
cute. thanks for the update, as usual i am looking forward to more. =)
Author's Response: Thank You - there will be an extra long chapter up tonight to make up for the lack of updates last night.
Date: 02/02/11 04:46 pm Title: Chapter 10
Loving this story more and more with each new chapter!!!! Thank you for the update!
Author's Response: Thank You. (:
Date: 02/02/11 03:41 am Title: Chapter 10
“But why would you let a homeless guy sleep in your bed with you?” that's the question I have on my mind when I'm reading. This story it's too sweet and unrealistic. Normal people would be to afraid to let a homeless guy in to their homes, let alone sleep with him in one bed. Well, it's still quiet nice to read, however too naive to take it seriously.
Author's Response: I know, i battled so hard with trying to figure out how to do everything. I was gonna wait a while before they kissed first, but i figured if I did that when I did then it would seem less weird? Thank you for your review though.
Date: 02/02/11 01:51 am Title: Chapter 10
I think you need to post more chapters very soon :)
Author's Response: Another one will be up tonight, as usual! :D
Date: 02/02/11 01:49 am Title: Chapter 10
Aww, this is so cute! :3
Author's Response: Thank You.
Date: 02/02/11 01:47 am Title: Chapter 10
Great chapter!! :D
Author's Response: Thanks! :D
Date: 02/01/11 11:49 pm Title: Chapter 10
LOL Nice Lady and the Tramp ref. i think I would react similarlyt o Andi until I meat Bill. Bill's sweet and beautiful and Tom is wonderful ;)
Author's Response: Haha, i didn't even mean do to it. I only realised after I posted the fic that I had unintentionally done a Lady and The Tramp reference. What a good accidental surprise! :D
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Date: 02/01/11 11:46 pm Title: Chapter 10
I smiled thru this whole chapter =) I love it!
Author's Response: I'm glad your enjoying it! :D
Date: 02/01/11 07:15 pm Title: Chapter 9
I'm a sucker for "perfect" lol but also a little drama doesn't hurt =) Personally, anything is fine with me. Either way I know it will be great. Can't wait to read more.
Author's Response: Thank You. (:
Date: 02/01/11 03:01 am Title: Chapter 9
I LOVE IT!
Author's Response: I'm glad your enjoying it!
Date: 02/01/11 02:50 am Title: Chapter 9
I honestly don't need a whole lot of drama. I think excessive drama makes a fic unrealistic more than too perfect does. I loved their sweet little kiss at the end. thanks for the update, keep up the good work. =)
Author's Response: Ok, thank you (: and its no problem, I'm glad your enjoying it.
Date: 02/01/11 01:55 am Title: Chapter 9
I am a sucker for drama, so even if I think this story is great as it is, some drama would be awesome! :)
Author's Response: Ok thank you ill take that on board.
Author's Response: Ok thank you ill take that on board.
Date: 02/01/11 12:45 am Title: Chapter 9
I think it's your story and you should have happen whatever you feel is best. If you think the characters are becoming to mary sue, then change them up. And if you feel the plot needs more drama, then go for it! You can never have to much drama, that's usually what makes stories interesting. And as for the nicknames, again that's your call, but I see no problem in them. They are both good nicknames...and everyone always says how the name Billa annoys them (read any author spotlight and you see what I mean) but personally I think it's a perfectly good nickname, as is Billy. And Bill is a very feminine guy, that can't be argued, so nothing wrong with giving him a feminine nickname...I've spent bascially this whole review on the name Billa, lol. Anyway, great chapter! XD
Author's Response: Thank You for the review, I will take everything on board. I have decided to change Bills nickname, but that be explain properly when I upload the next chapter. Thank You.