Date: 04/10/11 01:58 pm Title: twelve.
of course he doesn't feel good...he did a very bad thing...how is he going to tell her about this? bad boy...
Date: 04/10/11 11:36 am Title: fourteen.
I love seeing Tom beg & plead with her. Even more so when she doesn't believe him haha. I can't wait until the next chapter! I'm excited to read that next step in her life xD
Author's Response: (; a pleading Tom is always fun. :D
Date: 04/10/11 11:29 am Title: fourteen.
You know I had a plot just the way this is going, girls leaves and come back to a whole lotta more drama from the past. Sorry if it is a spoiler but it is a relief to see it being written on here, so I dont have to muck it up lol ^_^
Author's Response: (; haha yess drama from the past :D I can assure something else though .:O
Date: 04/10/11 08:17 am Title: fourteen.
I knew it I knew she would just leave and maybe return many years later: thinner, sexier and tom would recognize her or not
don't know
Maybe she's helping Tom even if he doesn't know it yet;
Ot it's heartbreaking
Date: 04/10/11 02:04 am Title: thirteen.
OUCHH i want to kick bill grrrr and i want to kill michelle waaaaaaaaahhh i hate them :'''''''''''''''''''''(((((im speechless :'(
Author's Response: Bill is kinda mean.:|
Date: 04/09/11 09:15 pm Title: thirteen.
I just want to punch Bill in the face... ugh and that ughle bitch Michelle...anyway thanks for updating...
Author's Response: haha, Your welcome, thankyou for the review!
Date: 04/09/11 09:15 pm Title: thirteen.
I just want to punch Bill in the face... ugh and that ughle bitch Michelle...anyway thanks for updating...
Author's Response: (:
Date: 04/09/11 06:30 pm Title: thirteen.
I would have kicked his ass. That's all I can see.
Author's Response: Me too! :D
Date: 04/09/11 06:12 pm Title: thirteen.
I seriously want to ram Michelle's head into the wall or something. Grrrr! Can't wait to read more =)
Author's Response: Woo, violent! I like it (; haha
Date: 04/09/11 05:21 pm Title: thirteen.
fuck fuck fuck nothing else I can say
How Tom is going to make it up to her now and be his boyfriend again ??
Bill and his big mouth
Author's Response: hah, breathe, ♥ thanks for reviewing!
Date: 04/09/11 05:16 pm Title: thirteen.
awwwwww, poor Aphrodite, this is the second time, Tom do that to her :(
Author's Response: yeah. Tom's a jerk :(
Date: 04/09/11 05:16 pm Title: thirteen.
Más!
Más!
Más!
Author's Response: (; Of course,
Date: 04/09/11 02:39 pm Title: twelve.
Oh my god!! amazing chapter! ughh that melissa/michelle bitch...ughh i would just beat the shit out of that girl
Author's Response: I'm glad you feel that way, that's the way I wanted her to be portrayed! :]]
Date: 04/09/11 11:34 am Title: twelve.
Awwi.. poor Tom..
Moore? :D
Author's Response: (; there's more. :D haha.
Date: 04/09/11 07:16 am Title: twelve.
oH NO
Now i see what's coming
Author's Response: (: im glad you do,
Date: 04/09/11 06:53 am Title: twelve.
WAAAAAAAAAAAAAAARRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGHHH I HATE MICHELLE I WANT TO KILL HER by the way huhuhuhuhuhu tom tom to why why did you do that? :'''''''''''''''''(((oh my god Aphrodite don't worry were here your friends...shit shit shit shit i really want to kill that girl but she's just a a character..oh my god your story makes me drool ewww yuck whahahah OH MY GOD !!!I LOVE THIS SO MUCH MUCH MUCH *screaming* thanks for updating i i i i i love it!!!!
Date: 04/09/11 12:08 am Title: twelve.
OH NOOOOO! TOM YOUR AN ASSSS! -_____- smh. anyways i still am very much in love with this story keep it up gal.
Author's Response: (: haha thankyouu. and yepp Tom can be an ass. x)
Date: 04/08/11 11:29 pm Title: twelve.
Karma will bite him back for that! I am gonna be honest and believe me it is not just u ( take no personal offence) I am just in a weird mood. I am not a big fan where Tom because of his playboy status, I don't like that he finds a girl that's real and ruins it by sleeping with an upface nobody. I would love to see a strong minded Tom, who can resist temptation and stand for who he really is. Like I said it is not just u, but I gotta get it out. *exhale* been holding it in too long
Author's Response: (: haha I loved your rant, made me smile. (: Yes, I wish to see Tom resist temptation too. It's just hard to portray him differently? I had to make him do this, it makes everything fall into place :3 I'm sorry it angered you,
Date: 04/08/11 10:42 pm Title: one.
Oh God! What did he do. Damn, "Melissa" was persistant as, well, haha bad word that begins with an f.
Author's Response: x) yesss. she was. whata whoree xD
Date: 04/08/11 09:06 pm Title: twelve.
Oh Tomi! That Michelle bitch is Per-sis-tant! I love how Tom regreted having sex with her & that he told her he had a girlfriend. Sadly, i'm thinking after prom he'll be single again.
Author's Response: ;) haha I like how you think.. xD
