Date: 01/31/11 06:48 pm Title: Birthday Party - Part 2
yay! Tomi to the rescue. Thanks for the great update, can't wait for more!
Author's Response: Thank YOU for reading! :)
Date: 01/31/11 06:22 pm Title: Birthday Party - Part 2
that chapter was perfect easy-mac length xP finished both at the same time :) but oh, man, i am so in love with this chapter, for serious. tom was so heroic without being obnoxious or showy, calm as possible, in control of himself, and bill's little kiss...hmm...I think my fav part was when Tom was thinking with his hand on Bill's tummy :3 tom's such a good brother *heart heart*
Author's Response: Thank you! :) I'm glad Tom wasn't obnoxious in his little hero moment *g* And Tom is the best brother ever <3<3<3 :)
Date: 01/31/11 06:20 pm Title: One Night in Paris
i love all the tension and drama in your story it s awesome.Plus the smut is great,my mind even forgot that the guy is like 44 years older;)
Author's Response: Aww, thank you! :) And haha, I guess that's a good thing then! ;)
Date: 01/31/11 06:05 pm Title: Birthday Party - Part 2
God Joop! I wish Tom would have just kicked his ass! He deserved it! Great chapter though :)
Author's Response: :D Thanks!
Date: 01/31/11 03:25 pm Title: Birthday Party - Part 2
Twin fluff is the best! Tom is such a hero!
Author's Response: Isn't it? :D Thanks! <3
Date: 01/31/11 03:15 pm Title: Birthday Party - Part 2
this is by far my favourite chapter so far. I absolutely love the characterisation( i hope that's the word I mean:P) of Tom, rough on the edges yet soft and gentle. I think that Bill's reaction was really realistic and... Well, real.
Can't wait to read what will happen next :)
Author's Response: Yes, characterisation is the right word - Thank you! :D I'm glad I managed to get them right <3 Will update as soon as I can :)
Date: 01/31/11 02:20 pm Title: Birthday Party - Part 2
oooh *happyclap* glad Tom socked it to that skeeky old fart *nod nod nod* He should have known that Tom would have reacted that way. I mean it involved hurting Bill so *snorts* that obviously means you gonna get fucked up by his big bro *giggles*... I love the end of this chapter, it's just so sweet. *flails* really want more, i'm always wanting more with your update to this.
Author's Response: Aw, thank you! :) And yes, Joop really should've known what was going to happen... but I doubt he thought a lot about what he was doing ;)
Date: 01/31/11 02:05 pm Title: Birthday Party - Part 2
luffs it!!
Author's Response: Thanks! :)
Date: 01/31/11 01:54 pm Title: Birthday Party - Part 2
Last chapter freaked me out :) But this was perfect. I'm a little saddened that Joop ended up the bad guy because I seriously loved him with Bill. But I prefer Bill with Tom, so all is good in Kaulitz land - still it can get better :)
*Maria
Author's Response: Awww. Well, maybe Bill and Joop will make up. *g* Maybe not! Who knows what will happen next? *g* Except me, of course LOL! And yes, it can definitely get better :D Thanks!
Date: 01/31/11 01:10 pm Title: Birthday Party - Part 2
Yay for Tom! The ending was cute! I was hoping that you'll update and you did. Joop got what he deserved from Tom. However I think that Joop will be back. Can't wait to see what happens next!
Author's Response: Joop will be back, yes ;) And Thank you! Glad you liked it <3
Date: 01/31/11 01:05 pm Title: Birthday Party - Part 2
Aw, corny Tomi! XDDDDD
I'm so glad the twins are together now, finally!!!!! I have to confess: I used to dislike the idea of Bill being weak and Tomi like his savior, but to be honest, I really like this chapter. It wasn't as irreal as I thought ^^
And Joop? What about him? Is he coming back? Does he regret threatening Billi?
My gosh, I really do want you to write faster XDDDDD Thanks a lot for sharing your story with us!
Author's Response: Haha, yeah... It's a bit of a cliché, isn't it? :D I just couldn't resist *grins* Anyway, Joop will be back at some point. When he's sober again, he will probably regret it. And I thought I was already writing pretty fast! Haha :D But I'll try not to keep you waiting for more than three days :) Anyway, thank you! <3
Date: 01/30/11 04:54 am Title: Birthday Party - Part 1
wow cool chapi, it was totally awesome. can't wait for more^^
Author's Response: Thank you! :D
Date: 01/29/11 10:44 pm Title: Birthday Party - Part 1
Super hot Tom to the rescue!!
Author's Response: Definitely! He's gonna kick some ass *g* :D Thanks!
Date: 01/29/11 10:09 pm Title: Birthday Party - Part 1
omg, such a wonderful chapter! and a cliffie! omg! I demand more... :) soon... :D
Author's Response: Thank you! And I'll do my best :D
Date: 01/29/11 05:11 pm Title: Birthday Party - Part 1
oooh cant wait! dont want tom to do anything newsworthy, tho....:/ aah joop's such a douche, and bill really is naive. he needs to get the fuck out of this relationship. tom!! find him and take him back as yours :]
Author's Response: Hehe, thanks! ;)
Date: 01/29/11 04:56 pm Title: Birthday Party - Part 1
ooh, glad I finally decided to read this. keep up the good work!
Author's Response: Thanks! :D Glad you're enjoying it. <3
Date: 01/29/11 04:43 pm Title: Birthday Party - Part 1
Yay for Tom showing up and them making up!! And I can't believe Joop turned out to be such an ass...I thought he was just going to lose enough intrest that he was eventually going to send Bill away...I didn't think he would ever get physical like that. I hope Tom can save his Bill before anything to bad happens XD
Author's Response: Well... to be fair, Joop is a little drunk ;) Not that that's an excuse but... anyway! Bill makes him feel a little possessive *g* Thanks! <3
Date: 01/29/11 04:36 pm Title: Birthday Party - Part 1
What the hell Joop!?You, you, you...
You ugly, old, wrinkly and horny idiot! Give Billa back to his Tomi! NAAAU!
Okay, let's breathe... And wait for more! *excited*
Author's Response: LOL! :D Aww <3 He'll be fine. Not so sure if Joop will be fine though ;) Hmmm. Anyway, thanks! :D
Date: 01/29/11 04:17 pm Title: Birthday Party - Part 1
*drops jaw* seriously? guh! nooooo, you can't just leave it off right there! *runs in circles* i neeeed more, it's getting so so so good! okay and remember when i said that i was liking Bill and Joop and felt bad about how things were ending between the two of them? yeah, well, I take ALL of that back. I hope Tom kicks Joop's ass. *shimmies around room and shakes pom-poms* GO TOM GO! Team Tom all the way! kick that dirty old mans ass! hmmm i also just imagined Bill stomping his sharp pointy heel of his boot into Joop's foot... hehe that made me happy.
Author's Response: Haha, awww. Sorry about the cliffhanger ;) I'll try to update soon! Thanks!
Date: 01/29/11 03:22 pm Title: Birthday Party - Part 1
Oh, come on, Bill, you are not a little virgin waiting for her knight in shining armour to rescue her! Bill, you do have a dick by yourself, damm it! Joop is an old man, he's pretty drunk and horny. Kick his balls! XDDDD
Tsk... I can't believe the 'old wanker' is that agressive. Pufff... whatever, I still like him! XD
Author's Response: Hehe... Bill seems to think he is ;) Or maybe he just wants to be rescued! Anyway, thanks! <3