Date: 03/02/11 08:57 am Title: Chapter 20
oh perfect now whats Tom gonna do now
Date: 03/01/11 12:07 pm Title: Chapter 20
Wow! Tom left in the middle of sex haha. I love it xD Poor Marcelle. She's right, she should tell someone. But then again, she may not have to if Tom shows up & sees for himself. Can't wait to read more.
Date: 03/01/11 11:43 am Title: Chapter 1
YEAH! Go tom and safe her! More soon please ^^
Date: 03/01/11 10:49 am Title: Chapter 20
agh, cliffhangers are gonna be the death of me!!!!!!!!! *dies* lol
Date: 03/01/11 01:33 am Title: Chapter 20
Loved it! Poor Marcelle!
Date: 02/28/11 11:54 pm Title: Chapter 20
update soon. I sense trouble.
Date: 02/28/11 03:37 pm Title: Chapter 19
I hope tom finds out and gets her out
Date: 02/26/11 09:53 pm Title: Chapter 19
This plot really has me hooked. It leaves me needing to know what's going to happen next. Hope ur able to post again soon.
Date: 02/26/11 08:38 pm Title: Chapter 19
poor marcie.........
Date: 02/26/11 07:04 pm Title: Chapter 19
Loved it! Can't wait to see what will happen next!
Date: 02/26/11 02:43 pm Title: Chapter 19
Wow! This is getting better and better. I can't wait til Tom figures it out too and I bet when he does he's gonna kick Marcelle's dad's ass!!! I hate Marcelle's mom she's so clueless ugh! Keep up your amazing writing and update soon :)
Author's Response: Why Thankyou very much :)) I will.
Date: 02/26/11 02:19 pm Title: Chapter 19
Wow. this story has become my addiction. when u post a new chap I norm read the 1 b4 it.. hehe. I can't wait till Tom finds out!!
Date: 02/26/11 09:20 am Title: Chapter 18
Loved it! When will Tom find out about what Marcelle's stepfather is doing to her? Will he save her from her stepfather?
Date: 02/25/11 04:34 pm Title: Chapter 18
I am totally speechless of this chapter. Marcelle's dad is an asshole I can't believe he would do that to his own daughter. Please keep up the great writing and update real soon I just gotta know what will happen next :)
Author's Response: Thankyou for the wonderful comment:) I will try to update asap :D
Date: 02/25/11 12:50 pm Title: Chapter 17
Loved it! Can't wait to see what will happen next! Does Tom ever find out about what her stepfather does to her?
Author's Response: Oh I made chapter 18:) Im just waiting for it to be validated:) He will soon :D
Date: 02/24/11 09:52 pm Title: Chapter 17
Yay! 2 updates in one day woot! Your on a roll! I loved it was quite funny :) please keep up your fantastic writing and update soon!
Author's Response: Haha:) Thankyou and I will make sure to :D
Date: 02/24/11 05:54 pm Title: Chapter 16
I loved it yay!!! you updated.
I'm to see that Tom and Marcelle are becoming friends. Please keep up your wonderful writing and update real soon I would love to know what will happen next :D
Author's Response: Hahah Thankyou for the wonderful comment:)