Date: 03/06/11 04:49 am Title: Chapter 19
OMG now I love tom for paying so much attention to her..I love this story ..keep on wiritng !
Date: 03/06/11 04:43 am Title: Chapter 18
Her father is getting on my nerves now...wish i could beat him up really bad....grr...Aww Tom is thinking about her..I am sure he will soon ditch her girlfriend and will go out with Marcelle...
Date: 03/06/11 04:39 am Title: Chapter 17
Aaawwww She has to go back to the house ...sheissee....I don't even wanna imagine what will happen next with her father...he just sucks
Date: 03/06/11 04:37 am Title: Chapter 16
A Movie together? Yayay !!
Date: 03/06/11 04:35 am Title: Chapter 15
At last tom is der for her...to support her...can't wait to read more :D Awesome chaptetr !
Date: 03/06/11 04:32 am Title: Chapter 14
He apologized !! Yayay...Well I love her mother though..she is so caring!
Date: 03/06/11 04:28 am Title: Chapter 13
At Atlast Tom got to know she's Marcelle...God When her mother will get to know the truth....Its gettign sadder
Date: 03/06/11 04:22 am Title: Chapter 12
Oh MY God ...her father....is actually and neusense....God save her....Can't wait
Date: 03/06/11 03:59 am Title: Chapter 11
Ohhh working as a pair! Can't wait ..hehe and wats up with Jen?? why is she ignoring her??
Date: 03/06/11 03:55 am Title: Chapter 10
Man i am waiting when everybody gets to know the truth behind the evil man....can't wait to read more...lets see what happenes next :D
Date: 03/06/11 03:52 am Title: Chapter 9
I want to kill her father...!! Sheeessh!! hate him hate him! she should go and complain in police....And Tom need a lesson!! He should know how she feels...she is not fine and I want him to see her....
Date: 03/05/11 10:53 am Title: Chapter 8
Amber is such a gaaaah don't know what to say....Well I hope Tom realizes soon that marchelle is way better than amber and he should behave nice to her...
My god...its so sad...can't wait to see her happy again
Date: 03/05/11 10:49 am Title: Chapter 7
OH MY God ! I wanna Kill her father...Please allow me to do karate on him...its even shame to call him a father...I feel really sorry for Marchelle ....Hope she gets fine pretty soon and her mother gets to know the truth behind this evil man!
Date: 03/05/11 10:43 am Title: Chapter 6
OOOOOHHHH HE is tom he is tom!! I know I know...they might talk on chat and they will like eachother and at the end..they will get to know eachother in reality...Hhaha!! awesme chaptter !! can't wait for more !!
Date: 03/05/11 04:56 am Title: Chapter 5
OMG! What a fight it was!! Omg they were close..I thought they would kiss but they didn't :( hopes shattered...well I dun agree on the fact that hate turn into love :P
Date: 03/05/11 04:43 am Title: Chapter 4
That was very rude of his father.... that was not fair...she should fight for her rights... Well I hope shopping makes her feel good and I hope Tom gets his lesson soon :D
Date: 03/05/11 04:27 am Title: Chapter 3
Oh! Nice ! Stupid Tom..maybe he's doing all this to get her attention because I think he likes her...Can't wait to see what happens at 8th avenue...:D
Date: 03/05/11 04:05 am Title: Chapter 2
Aww I don't like the way tom is behaving with her.. I hope they get things settled down.. I would have smacked him if I was in her place...
Well Nice chapter...can't wait for more :D
Date: 03/05/11 04:01 am Title: Chapter 1
I really liked it...It was awesome...Can't wait to read more :D
Date: 03/04/11 09:59 pm Title: Chapter 20
you can't just leave it there!!!!!!!!! udpate soon!!!!!!!!