Date: 03/28/11 07:27 am Title: Chapter 23
Oh Typical Bill! Shopping Shopping Shopping! Lol I loved it !! it was ahamazing!! EEE TOM LIKES MARC AND she Likes him BACK YAYAYAYA!!!
Date: 03/28/11 01:46 am Title: Chapter 24
shit this was just super amazing i really love this story oh my god they are in love with each other and i really love it!!!your great amazing :)
Date: 03/27/11 09:57 pm Title: Chapter 24
OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG I LOVED IT!!!! MORE PLEASE AND SOON!!!!!!
Date: 03/27/11 06:13 pm Title: Chapter 24
I can't believe she yelled that for everyone to hear, even though it was on impulse. I agree with her. For her brother seeming so close to her he sure is oblivious as to what was going on.
Date: 03/27/11 02:12 am Title: Chapter 23
DAMN! I love this story!!
Date: 03/26/11 01:52 pm Title: Chapter 23
Now that they both can admit to themselves that they like each other, i'm curious about what they are going to do about it xD
Date: 03/23/11 02:17 pm Title: Chapter 22
AGHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH GOOODDDDD I LOVE THIS!!!!! YOU NEED TO WRITE MOREE!! NAUU
Date: 03/19/11 11:14 am Title: Chapter 22
AWWWW it was so beautiful! Tom loves Marcelle but Bill said 'sistah' which makes marcelle tom's sistah too LOL>..
So sweet of Bill..his mood changes so FAST!! hahahahah!!
Can't wait for more
I am sure they gonna have awesome time :D
Date: 03/10/11 01:59 pm Title: Chapter 22
I can only imagine how Marcelle will look after Bill gets done with her xD Can't wait to read what's next.
Date: 03/10/11 07:33 am Title: Chapter 22
XD shopping with bill.......x3
Date: 03/09/11 11:37 pm Title: Chapter 22
AMAZING!!i want to kill his father i tried not to cry but this is me in front of your story crying huhuhu i really hate his father..your amazing...i love it i love your story...
Date: 03/09/11 11:20 pm Title: Chapter 22
Loved it! Can't wait to see what will happen next!
Date: 03/09/11 10:43 pm Title: Chapter 22
ok, one quick comment before i get into the "this was awesome" part... when you write dialogue, try and write it as you would speak..... the way it is seems kinda forced..... but that may just be personal preference..... :D
anyway, great chapter!!!!!!
Date: 03/08/11 02:48 pm Title: Chapter 21
Aww! Tom, the knight in big baggie clothes xDD Love it!
Date: 03/08/11 11:53 am Title: Chapter 21
Awww I wonder what happens next
Date: 03/08/11 03:01 am Title: Chapter 21
AWW I am so fuckin happy he's in jail now! Yayaya!!! Bastard he was..he deserved it...I love tom for helping her so much...I am sure she is feeling very safe and fine now..Gonna live in his house huh? Ooo...Lets see what happens next :D
Date: 03/06/11 04:52 am Title: Chapter 20
HEY Please write more ok? Please????