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Reviewer: HaiZOE Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/26/11 07:31 pm Title: Chapter 6: A Bad Day Gets Better

That was your first slashy smut? All I can say is nicely done!

Reviewer: HaiZOE Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/26/11 06:50 pm Title: Chapter 1: Meet Cute

The line about it not being a girl since they were fifteen was pure brilliance :')

Reviewer: MelissaRM19 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/26/11 06:07 pm Title: Epilogue: So Much To Say

What a totally disappointing ending. : This is why I usually read the reviews first to make sure I won't be depressed at the end of a story, but I guess since the title was "unbreak my heart" not "rebreak my heart" I kinda just assumed..... Well it was good in the beginning anyway.

Author's Response: glad you liked...3/4 of it?

Reviewer: TomsParkingOnly Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/26/11 03:57 pm Title: Epilogue: So Much To Say

*sniffles* so it's official? They are over? *sobs again* Sad ending but fantastic story.

Author's Response: yes, sadly, tom and bill are through. but thanks for the compliment.

Reviewer: violet_star77 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/26/11 03:09 pm Title: Epilogue: So Much To Say

blah. very well written, and realistic ending i suppose, but I of course wanted them together. Thanks for the great story.

Author's Response: you're welcome! and thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: HollyWoodFix Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/26/11 03:03 pm Title: Epilogue: So Much To Say

This was a great first attempt at slash! Although I was wishing for a happy ending :( Hopefully your next story has one XD I'll be looking forward to it!

Author's Response: thanks for the compliment! i was completely terrified to even attempt slash, but i'm pretty happy with the result.

Reviewer: Synnie Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/26/11 02:02 pm Title: Epilogue: So Much To Say

-_-

Author's Response: ;-D

Reviewer: sraine Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/26/11 01:22 pm Title: Epilogue: So Much To Say

Gah sad face ;-;

Author's Response: cheer up! at least tom saved him from the bullies!

Reviewer: SouthernAngel Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/26/11 12:54 pm Title: Epilogue: So Much To Say

Thank you for a great story! Will keep track of your new one when you start posting. that one better have a happy ending. *glares*

Author's Response: i promise! next story=happy!

Reviewer: Ainee Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/26/11 12:49 pm Title: Epilogue: So Much To Say

So sad... :( I was hoping for a happy ending.. But I guess you're right, this was far more realistic. Tom still annoys the hell out if me, but I guess I can live with that. In my head, they'll get over it in time and get together anyway :p I don't like my boys heartbroken..

It was a rally good story, though, I'll say that ;) And wih this being your first slash story, I think you did brilliantly! Thank you so much for sharing! :)

Author's Response: billiantly? wow, thanks!

Reviewer: kawaiicoyote Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/26/11 12:48 pm Title: Epilogue: So Much To Say

*screeches like a banshee* ARE YOU SERIOUS!?!? *falls to floor kicking and screaming* dude! no... cool *hic* okay, i was *sob* totally expecting that but *hic* I wish i was wrong. First you have Georg dead before the story even starts and now THIS? *continues throwing tantrum* I demand happy!.. ok so I can't make you write happy but seriously, it would be nice to have happy *cries*

Author's Response: *hands you entire box of kleenex*rni promise my next story will be happy! oh, and georg is in a better place now. be happy for him! lol

Reviewer: Liss92 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/26/11 12:36 pm Title: Epilogue: So Much To Say

:( sad

Author's Response: meant to be. thanks for reading!

Reviewer: bookme Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/26/11 04:58 am Title: Chapter 11: What Bill Did

WOW that was intens, but I like it, can't wait for the epilogue :)

Author's Response: coming right up

Reviewer: HollyWoodFix Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/26/11 03:25 am Title: Chapter 11: What Bill Did

0_0 I knew Tom would be upset, hell he has every reason to be...I would be furious as well if I were him...but I hope this isn't really the end! XD I can't wait till tomorrow!

Author's Response: epilogue coming up momentarily

Reviewer: ladyX Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/26/11 02:05 am Title: Chapter 11: What Bill Did

*is flattered* It makes me feel special seeing my idea on the screen.

This was a very sad chapter, but I can't really blame Tom either I hope things end well *waits anxiously with fingers crossed*

Author's Response: off to add the epilogue now so you can uncross your fingers

Reviewer: violet_star77 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/26/11 01:09 am Title: Chapter 11: What Bill Did

wow! I sure hope Tom calms down and comes to his sense. great chapter, thank you so much!

Author's Response: you're welcome

Reviewer: SouthernAngel Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/26/11 12:24 am Title: Chapter 11: What Bill Did

wow! No. you cant end it like this!!!!! he has to not hate bill!!!!

Dick move bill.

Author's Response: see? honesty isn't always the best policy!

Reviewer: sraine Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/25/11 11:45 pm Title: Chapter 11: What Bill Did

I get why Tom is upset but damn D: nein

Author's Response: yeah, tom's a bit perturbed

Reviewer: julialyssa Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/25/11 11:30 pm Title: Chapter 11: What Bill Did

Wow,I actually get Tom's reaction completely, bill seriously sounds like a crazy stalker and liar. I can only hope that this is Tom's initial reaction and he'll realize that even though bill went about everything all wrong that he truly does love him.and is willing to try and trust him again.

Author's Response: time will tell...

Reviewer: kawaiicoyote Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/25/11 10:43 pm Title: Chapter 11: What Bill Did

*drops jaw* OMFG!!!! *is tearing up* this chapter... noooooo, no no noooo N-O. it's like, gonna get happy right? *wails* it can't end sadly. I mean you already broke my heart by having Georg dead, you can't have them break up and stay that way.

Author's Response: *hands you kleenex* wait and see, my friend..

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