Date: 01/23/11 03:16 am Title: Chapter 2: Date Night
This is a great start, i can't wait for more. =) keep up the good work!
Author's Response: thanks! i'll try!
Date: 01/23/11 01:17 am Title: Chapter 2: Date Night
Awwww such a great date, cant wait for more. I'm really really liking this so far!
Author's Response: thanks so much!
Date: 01/23/11 12:41 am Title: Chapter 2: Date Night
OMG they kissed, more than once!!! *bounces* I loved Gus's comment about holding Tom's hand but he's on his own when it comes to sex. LOL Squee Bill had his number for Tom, so cute, and the dates impasse. *giggles* So good honey, I don't know what you're worried about. *wink*
Author's Response: thanks! i was rather proud of that whole "we're at an impasse" line myself. well i got through their first kiss, let's see how i handle...everything else. lol
Date: 01/23/11 12:34 am Title: Chapter 2: Date Night
This was sooo cute! XD I can't wait for more!
Author's Response: danke!
Date: 01/23/11 12:24 am Title: Chapter 2: Date Night
*flails arms* dawwwww that was an amazing update! it was just all so sweet and i loved it. hehe, i could just imagine Gustav holding Tom's hand through this relationship up until "then" *giggles hysterically*... and i hope you know, being from Alabama, I am loving that you centered them being in Atlanta, and right now I'm imagining them talking in a southern accent (especially Bill) and well damn that's sexy, I'm tempted to hop in the car and drive the two hours and search every friggin Starbucks in Atlanta just to see if i can these two.... *stands up from chair* Hi, my name is Heidi, and and and, I'm addicted to fanfiction and want to believe the TH boys fictional selves are in Georgia.
Author's Response: you know, i'm glad you said that about atlanta cuz i'd originally set the story in seattle cuz i think the twins both look great in winter coats but i'm currently so anti-winter that i decided to go farther south. thanks for the great review. and let me know if you find bill and tom!
Date: 01/23/11 12:17 am Title: Chapter 2: Date Night
OMG I loved this chapter. It was witty all the way through, especially with Gus and his comments about how he wouldn't have this problem if he'd gotten Bill's number. It was cute.
Author's Response: witty gus is almost as much fun to write as drunk bill!
Date: 01/19/11 01:03 pm Title: Chapter 1: Meet Cute
Me: Get those damn digits, Tom! What are you waiting for?
Author's Response: aaww, let tom have his fun for a while
Date: 01/19/11 10:27 am Title: Chapter 1: Meet Cute
Now I want to know why he didn't show up >.> Tell me, tell me!! :P
Author's Response: okay, i will...eventually
Date: 01/19/11 01:29 am Title: Chapter 1: Meet Cute
I have been waiting for you to start posting this *bounces*
Awww that's so cute, I love the sudden question bombardment as Tom was leaving. I want to know why Bill was upset and why he didn't show. How does Tom find him?? Really liked this honey, can't wait for more. *huggles*
Author's Response: *bows to you* YOU are reading my little story? Oh God, I can't handle the pressure! Glad you like it so far!rnPS: don't tell a certain someone I'm this excited about you reading me...although I was just excited when she started reading me...
Date: 01/19/11 01:19 am Title: Chapter 1: Meet Cute
:o oh no!
Author's Response: don't worry, things aren't as bad as they seem
Date: 01/19/11 01:06 am Title: Chapter 1: Meet Cute
I would definitely like to read more :)
Author's Response: then i guess i'll write more! lol
Date: 01/18/11 11:31 pm Title: Chapter 1: Meet Cute
*flails* you seriously didn't just end your chapter like that... seriously?! *pouts* i need mooooore. its so good and adorable and just just SERIOUSLY! haha keep up the good work. i look forward to seeing where this goes.
Author's Response: i know, a cliffhanger in the very first chapter! makes ya crazy, don't it? glad i captured your interest.
Date: 01/18/11 11:26 pm Title: Chapter 1: Meet Cute
Awww so sweet. I'm really excited about this story, especially since you're keeping all of the details secret. I'm dying to find out that's going to happen next. Nice start.
Author's Response: *tries to think of songs that have to do with secrets, but can't*rndanke! i'm excited too! whoda thunk it?