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Reviewer: violet_star77 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/03/11 08:18 am Title: Chapter 4: How to Win Friends and Influence People

Yay for Tom not taking advantage of the situation. Thanks for another great update.

Author's Response: you're very welcome!

Reviewer: Ainee Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/02/11 07:32 pm Title: Chapter 4: How to Win Friends and Influence People

Yay, boyfriends! :D And I snorted loudly at Bill's "You'd better be worth the wait, though." Of course Tom will do his best! *hirrhirr* Sorry, lost my brain into the gutter there for a moment.. Another sweet chapter - I swear, I love these boys to pieces! ;) Keep up the good work!

Author's Response: i'll try!

Reviewer: Jazmyne Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/02/11 11:50 am Title: Chapter 4: How to Win Friends and Influence People

Fn loved this chapter! Thank you for putting Bill at a party where he had a good time and nothing horrible happened. I also loved the ending, shows how much Tom really cares for Bill!

Author's Response: you're very welcome.

Reviewer: julialyssa Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/02/11 10:55 am Title: Chapter 4: How to Win Friends and Influence People

Aw, Tom was a gentleman, so sweet. Drunk Bill was very cute and funny.

Author's Response: yeah i have a "thing" for drunk bill

Reviewer: HollyWoodFix Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/02/11 02:18 am Title: Chapter 4: How to Win Friends and Influence People

Cute chapter! I was happy to see that Tom was such a gentlemen and turned down Bill's drunken advances. I can't wait for the next chapter! :D

Reviewer: kawaiicoyote Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/02/11 01:28 am Title: Chapter 4: How to Win Friends and Influence People

dawww drunk Bill was cute and adorable. i know he was trying to go for sexy buuuut he epically failed at that and right now all i wanna do is snuggles him lol. can't wait for more!

Author's Response: lol@u

Reviewer: Alli_cat141 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/02/11 01:25 am Title: Chapter 4: How to Win Friends and Influence People

Awwww insanely cute indeed!! I commend Tom on being able to resist, cause damn if I could! I'm glad that the party went well and that Gussi thinks Bill is cool. Great chapter hon. *huggles*

Author's Response: danke! *hugs back*

Reviewer: AshesPashes Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/02/11 01:17 am Title: Chapter 4: How to Win Friends and Influence People

Awww drunk horny Bill. Tom is a strong man indeed cause I wouldn't have turned him down.

Author's Response: see? i made tom a good guy in this one! lol

Reviewer: SouthernAngel Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/02/11 12:58 am Title: Chapter 4: How to Win Friends and Influence People

Awwwww....cant think of anything else to show you the mushyness...

Thank you for another brilliant chapter.

Author's Response: brilliant? really? wow. danke!

Reviewer: SouthernAngel Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/30/11 03:13 am Title: Chapter 3: Revelations

Poor Bill!!!

Thank you for the update!

Author's Response: you're very welcome! and don't feel too bad for bill. his boyfriend is tom, after all. his life does not suck! lol

Reviewer: Ainee Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/29/11 12:39 pm Title: Chapter 3: Revelations

God, you're killing me here; it's too cute for words! And I've gotta tell you, the part where Bill's in awe over Tom's apartment, well, it totally cracked me up, so I had to read it out loud to my roommate. Let's just put it like this; she's proclaimed "And I have a plant on the balcony." to be her new pick-up line! ;)

Over to the serious stuff - poor Bill! That's horrible. I already realised there was something he wasn't saying and that he probably wasn't as carefree as he seemed, but that just sucks, honestly. I can't even imagine.. :( I'm happy he still wan't to try having a real rerlationship with Tom, though. Those two are just perfect together! And Tom, oh Tom..he's picture perfect, almost too good to be true. Man, I need me one of those! ;)

Keep up the good work - this story is absolutely adoreable! And 'yay' for Saturaday AND Wednesday updates! :D



Author's Response: omg! i love you AND your roomie! best review ever! glad you're enjoying it so much!

Reviewer: Ainee Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/29/11 12:22 pm Title: Chapter 2: Date Night

Aaaw, this is almost sickeningly cute :p Oh, and Bil saying "It was just...weird. Until now you were just Tom, Starbucks guy. And now, here, you're...real." put a wide smile on my face! It was adoreable and funny :)

Reviewer: Ainee Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/29/11 12:11 pm Title: Chapter 1: Meet Cute

I'm not gonna say much - because I'm dying to continue reading! ;) But let me just say, this sounds really interesting! Oh, and Gustav cracks me up, dunno why. Loved both "Because it hasn't been a girl since we were fifteen, Tom." and "I'm selective." I found it highly amusing! ;) Okay, I'm off to the next chapter now..

Reviewer: Alli_cat141 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/29/11 07:11 am Title: Chapter 3: Revelations

Awww this was sweet and so cute =)I love Bill saying that he had to keep Tom. Poor Bill losing Geo like that, that sort of thing is hard to get over but I'm glad he's taking that chance with Tom. Can't wait for more honey *snuggles*

Author's Response: danke! more to come!

Reviewer: kawaiicoyote Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/29/11 04:35 am Title: Chapter 3: Revelations

*lip quivers*.... you... you killed Georg off? *literally tears up* well, that certainly made my horrible night worse. But, then again *sniffs* at least Tom and Bill are getting closer... that's what counts *nod nod* love the update.

Author's Response: wow, if you're tearing up now then you're really gonna hate me a few chapters from now. hope your night got better!

Reviewer: Jazmyne Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/29/11 04:29 am Title: Chapter 3: Revelations

YES...they kissed!! Perfect ending. It was nice that they didnt just jump right into having sex.

Author's Response: yeah, they're sorta taking things slow in this one.

Reviewer: AshesPashes Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/29/11 01:43 am Title: Chapter 3: Revelations

Lazy bitch, using a dishwasher. I am the dishwasher. Anyway. We learned a bit about Bill. Poor thing losing his boyfriend of 3 years must be hard. I can't think of anything better to help get over that than Tom. *day dreams* Nice chapter.

Author's Response: *wakes you from your daydream* hey, you've got dishes to wash!rnglad you liked this one.

Reviewer: violet_star77 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/29/11 01:30 am Title: Chapter 3: Revelations

oh, very sweet. sad revelation, but sweet ending. keep up the good work!

i have clean dishes in my dishwasher right now. =)

Author's Response: clean dishes are nice, aren't they?rnglad you enjoyed it.

Reviewer: HollyWoodFix Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/29/11 01:30 am Title: Chapter 3: Revelations

Such a good chapter! I felt so bad for Bill, I couldn't imagine trying to move on from something like that. I just hope Tom is going to be able to help him move on. And as far as updates go, 2 updates a week sounds fantastic!!! XD Which ever days work best for you :)

Author's Response: *hugs for bill*rnglad you liked it!

Reviewer: SouthernAngel Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/24/11 06:19 am Title: Chapter 2: Date Night

Awwwwww....

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