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Reviewer: sraine Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/10/11 12:38 am Title: Chapter 2: Date Night

XD Aw such a couple pair they are :)

Reviewer: sraine Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/10/11 12:31 am Title: Chapter 1: Meet Cute

I'm liking the idea of star bucks stranger kind of thing :) One thing i got really confused when Tom and Bill first spoke I thought bill own the music shop but then I read tom did, so you might wanna go in an add who is talking a couple times.

Reviewer: Ainee Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/09/11 07:19 pm Title: Chapter 6: A Bad Day Gets Better

Mmmm, chocolate chips in cookies AND smut.. I don't think my mental feast could get any better ;) Cute and hot!

Author's Response: thanks for the laugh! glad the chapter met with your approval.

Reviewer: Alli_cat141 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/09/11 03:04 am Title: Chapter 6: A Bad Day Gets Better

Heeeeee Tom knew exactly which buttons to push to make Bill's day better. You did great honey, writing slashy smut is daunting especially for the first time. I still blush when I write it LOL I hope that tomorrow isn't too hectic for you, *snuggles* Can't wait for more XD

Author's Response: you still blush? you had tom sucking bill's dick at school! or was bill sucking tom's dick? whatever, someone's dick was getting sucked! lol anyhoo, glad you enjoyed it.

Reviewer: SouthernAngel Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/09/11 12:44 am Title: Chapter 6: A Bad Day Gets Better

Oooh smexy!

Author's Response: i try! lol

Reviewer: HollyWoodFix Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/08/11 09:46 pm Title: Chapter 6: A Bad Day Gets Better

Great chapter! Got to love smut XD

Author's Response: oh hells yeah!

Reviewer: AshesPashes Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/08/11 07:50 pm Title: Chapter 6: A Bad Day Gets Better

Awwww they are so perfect together. I love that they need each other for comfort. When Bill had a bad day the first person he wanted to see was Tom. So sweet. As a side note but this is the first time I have what reviews are and I'm not feeling jealous yo have it and I don't. Hahahaha.

Author's Response: okay, i had to read that last sentence a few times before i got it. enjoy your cookies!

Reviewer: TomsParkingOnly Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/08/11 07:44 pm Title: Chapter 6: A Bad Day Gets Better

Perfect! xDDD

Author's Response: yay! thanks!

Reviewer: TomsParkingOnly Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/06/11 01:27 pm Title: Chapter 5: Reach Out and Touch Someone

This is great! I absolutely love this xD I can hardly wait to read more.

Author's Response: danke for the compliment!

Reviewer: SouthernAngel Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/06/11 05:43 am Title: Chapter 5: Reach Out and Touch Someone

This is such a nice story!

Author's Response: thanks!

Reviewer: Alli_cat141 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/06/11 04:58 am Title: Chapter 5: Reach Out and Touch Someone

hehehe too cute. I'm glad they fixed Tom too. *hugs*

Author's Response: aren't we all?

Reviewer: violet_star77 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/06/11 03:55 am Title: Chapter 5: Reach Out and Touch Someone

very cute little chapter. i like the brief snapshot of their life together. such a mundane normal thing, a phone call, but i enjoyed it immensely. Thanks for the update!

Author's Response: thanks so much! that's what i was going for, just showing the little routine they've fallen into.

Reviewer: Jazmyne Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/06/11 03:00 am Title: Chapter 5: Reach Out and Touch Someone

Love when characters get to know each other, and so looking forward to the next chapter!

Author's Response: next chapter wednesday!

Reviewer: HollyWoodFix Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/06/11 01:14 am Title: Chapter 5: Reach Out and Touch Someone

Good chapter! It was nice to see them getting to know a little more about each other. And I was not expecting that heart thing! 0_0 Poor Tom. I can't wait for the next chapter! Especially if it means smut XD

Author's Response: my first slash smut! yay!

Reviewer: allura_red Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/05/11 09:42 pm Title: Chapter 5: Reach Out and Touch Someone

If you're planning what i think you're planning, than it will be really wierd for Bill)

Author's Response: wait and see...

Reviewer: MissAnna Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/05/11 09:05 pm Title: Chapter 5: Reach Out and Touch Someone

lol Bill just wants all the juicy details from Tom XD
I've got a friend like that. If I don't know the coolest details to tell her, she says I'm useless XD

Reviewer: AshesPashes Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/05/11 08:31 pm Title: Chapter 5: Reach Out and Touch Someone

Taco salad? Hehe. Wow Tom had a heart transplant?! What a selfish woman his mother was. He was real long before she found out his gender at 18ish weeks. Her name isn't by chance Mia is it? *grumbles*

Author's Response: taco bell for lunch actually. and no her name isn't mia!!! lol

Reviewer: Ainee Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/05/11 08:26 pm Title: Chapter 5: Reach Out and Touch Someone

Aaaaw, I wanted to hear more about how cute Tom was in High School! ;) And yeah, his 'coming out story' was kind of lame..but in a good way! I'm happy he didn't have a hard time. (If I had been twelwe and saw two guys kissing, I would've laughed too..then blushed furisouly and hid my face in my hands!) And Bill, well, I guess he managed fine too.. Too bad about his parents, though.

Oooh, random conversations are the best! XD Yay for smut! Honestly, smut is the extra sour cream on the tacos of life...though sour cream on tacos is nasty, so I guess not... Uhm, anyway, I guess what I was trying to say was: Yay for smut! :D Nice chappie - I like! ;)



Author's Response: actually there may be more high school tom in a future chapter...

Reviewer: Hutula Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/04/11 06:21 pm Title: Chapter 4: How to Win Friends and Influence People

*Swoons at Tom's gentlemanly feet*

Reviewer: Hutula Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/04/11 06:11 pm Title: Chapter 3: Revelations

*sleazy smile* I have a potted plant on my balcony. Wanna come see it? *eyebrow wriggle*

Poor Bill though :(

Author's Response: oo baby! lol

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