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Reviewer: Jazmyne Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/22/12 02:19 am Title: Chapter 2

I had to re-read this-I fn love it and am so ready for more!

Reviewer: tohotWBMWkittieB Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/27/11 02:55 pm Title: Chapter 2

Omg i love this! it made me cry in both chapters. i can't believe Tom! he's such a bastard in this. great capture though and i can't wait to read more!!

Reviewer: Jazmyne Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/21/11 03:00 am Title: Chapter 2

Talk about a reality check! I love this so far and look forward to more.

Author's Response: There is more to come. I'm working on it and should have it up by tonight. Thank you and thanks for reading. :3

Reviewer: asahi Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/20/11 01:41 pm Title: Chapter 2

Well, Tom. I guess you got what was coming but I do hope they can fix their relationship. The twins torn apart makes my heart hurt. Poor Bill. I hope he's ok. Tom really broke his heart this time ;( I hope where ever he is someone is there to take care of him,

Author's Response: Don't worry. Come the end, everything will be just fine. I'm just working on mapping it all out in my head to make sure I know what I'm writing when I'm writing and how it will all go down. But everything will get better. I promise. :)

Reviewer: Horseluvr14 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/20/11 07:41 am Title: Chapter 2

:'( again very good! I'm starting to wonder where this is heading so it's happily keeping me on my toes! :D

Author's Response: Well good. Glad I'm able to keep you on your toes!! :)

Reviewer: pinkyth Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/20/11 04:55 am Title: Chapter 2

wow cool story, realy enjoyed reading :D can't wait for more!



Author's Response: Aw. Thank you. I'm trying to get more done as fast as I can.

Reviewer: AutomaticGirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/20/11 03:34 am Title: Chapter 2

Keep going, i love it

Author's Response: Why thank you. And I am.

Reviewer: dusty273 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/19/11 08:50 pm Title: Chapter 2

Oh, this is heartbreaking, but I'm a sucker for angst and this is very well-written, so more, please?



Author's Response: Thank you. /D I'm not really one for it either. But more shall be had. Soon.

Reviewer: TH_Rescue_Me Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/19/11 12:43 am Title: Chapter 1

Wow. Please, please continue this! I really want to know what happens with Bill and Tom, and it is soooooo good! I loved it! I hope you continue it :)
(now, im gonna go read it again :P)

Author's Response: Wow. Thank you so much. It's been so long since I wrote anything that I didn't think it would be that good. But I will definitely do another chapter. I'm already mapping it out in my head.

Reviewer: asahi Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/19/11 12:02 am Title: Chapter 1

Poor Bill ;( he didn't really do anything wrong ;( sniff. Tomi always jumping to conclusions didn't listen and now what will happen?

Author's Response: Don't worry. There will be more to come. If I'm lucky and not too busy I'll get the next two up today. Hopefully. :)

Reviewer: Jazmyne Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/18/11 09:37 pm Title: Chapter 1

yes yes yes-more PLEASE!!!!

Author's Response: Already working on it. :3

Reviewer: Horseluvr14 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/18/11 06:53 pm Title: Chapter 1

Aww please update! Tom needs a kick up the ass! And who's the friend? Please update soon!!!

Author's Response: /D Oh wow. So many exclamation points. I think it needs to be updated too.

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